ı loved your video.the music is perfect. your intonation and pronunciation is very good.you should say accomodation like this /əˌkɒm.əˈdeɪ.ʃən/US /-ˌkɑː.mə-/. well prepared work thank you! :)
your music is a good choise and suitable with your interesting pictures. you use intonation effectively, but you have minor mistakes with your pronounciation,except this,it is ok.
your music is perfect.it exited me a lot while watching your video. you have some pronounciation mistakes like accomaditon which is very clear but you speak fluently thanks :)
thank you dear friends:)thank you guzum:)ı paid attention to be better, faster this time. ı looked up the dictionary for each word ı dont know the pronunciation, but i think i mispronunced the accommodation any way:( yasemen thank you for showing the its correct :)
I think it would be better if you had talked slower however I could not catch any mistakes in terms of intonation and pronunciation also I like your music ;)thnk you
your intonation and pronunciation are very effective and the music is also attarct my interest. but the mispronounced word accomadiation is in evidence.
ı liked your intonation. you are speaking fluently and effectively. in terms of pronounciation, there are two mistakes which ı could catch. they are mountain and accomodation. apart from these problems, your presentation is good.
Your speech was effective and intonations are used well. 'accommodation' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteı loved your video.the music is perfect. your intonation and pronunciation is very good.you should say accomodation like this /əˌkɒm.əˈdeɪ.ʃən/US /-ˌkɑː.mə-/. well prepared work thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteyour speech is much more better than the first one, it is fluent any more =)) the only word u said wrongly is "valley" i think
ReplyDeleteaccomodation is mispronounced. your speech is fluent and also informative. the rest is ok. good job Guzum. :) congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyour music is a good choise and suitable with your interesting pictures. you use intonation effectively, but you have minor mistakes with your pronounciation,except this,it is ok.
ReplyDeleteyour music is wonderful and it is in harmony with your pictures and your voice your pronunciation is good too thank you
ReplyDeleteyour music is perfect.it exited me a lot while watching your video. you have some pronounciation mistakes like accomaditon which is very clear but you speak fluently thanks :)
ReplyDeletethank you dear friends:)thank you guzum:)ı paid attention to be better, faster this time. ı looked up the dictionary for each word ı dont know the pronunciation, but i think i mispronunced the accommodation any way:( yasemen thank you for showing the its correct :)
ReplyDeletegood work cong. I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake. and it's very good to correct your mistake about intonation congratulations again.
ReplyDeleteYour video has no mistakes I think. ı liked it very much. Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeletea great video. there is a problem with the pronunciation of accommodation. your intonation is good and it is a good presentation
ReplyDeleteI think it would be better if you had talked slower however I could not catch any mistakes in terms of intonation and pronunciation also I like your music ;)thnk you
ReplyDeleteThe background music is one of my favorite music of Loorena Mccennit. Also, I see you have improved your fluency. I like your video. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteIt is better than your first video.I could not find any mistakes but you should have spoken a bit slow.It is a good sample cong.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very fluent.Also I like your pronunciaiton and intonation.It is A good video.
ReplyDeleteYou speak fluently.I liked your ıntonation and pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteit is very informative.'accommodation' was the only mispronounced word.but i liked it.good job:)
ReplyDeleteI think your video is a good one. pronunciation and intonation are used very well.
ReplyDeleteit is nice to hear that u r a bit faster this time belmoş :) good job
ReplyDeleteI liked it but as my friends sais before '' accomodation'' is mispronounced and ı couldn't catch another.Good job!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any mispronounced words apart from accomodation.intonation is the best.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation are very effective and the music is also attarct my interest. but the mispronounced word accomadiation is in evidence.
ReplyDeleteı liked your intonation. you are speaking fluently and effectively. in terms of pronounciation, there are two mistakes which ı could catch. they are mountain and accomodation. apart from these problems, your presentation is good.
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