I think you recorded that in a small room because I can hear the echoes of your voice and that makes your speech incomprehensible. convert is mispronounced.
Your voice is too high maybe due to the recorder. The music you used is related to the place you are describing. Your intonation was good as far as I heard.
Although your voice is not very clear, I like it. Because of that problem, I listened your video more carefully and was able to catch almost every word.:)On the other hand the pause between most and fascinating is wrong. Anyway, Thank you Betül!
ıt is a well done job.I didnt catch any mistakes and intonation is good.Your photos and music are really suitable for you topic and place.Although I frightened when you first listened it to me I liked it.cong.bety:))
I think your topic is the best choice in this project but you have some unnecessary pauses and you should get rid of them.I didn't come across any mispronounced words. good job :)
congratulations for your choice. ı liked your speech. your intonation is good. especially while you are saying the date of Mustafa Kemal Atatürk's death, ı felt sad. yet, there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, period, decoration, unfortunately, convert, monday.
the topic and the music are in harmony. at the beggining your vocie is not be audible but then ı could hear and your intonations and stress are very good. ı liked it
Your voice isnt that audible, I couldnt understand some of the parts. 'away and convert' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think you recorded that in a small room because I can hear the echoes of your voice and that makes your speech incomprehensible. convert is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour music is wellchosen and your speech is very good. i didnt hear any mistake or somthing irritating
ReplyDeleteyour music is in harmony with your topic and your intonation is really good but ı agree with muhammet that ı can hear the echoes of your voice.
ReplyDeleteyour music is reallly very charming your intonation is good too. but if you had done it with a better recoder ıt would have been much better.
ReplyDeletevoice isnt clear. ı couldnt understand you well.from what ı heard yr intonation was good. thnks :)
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too high maybe due to the recorder. The music you used is related to the place you are describing. Your intonation was good as far as I heard.
ReplyDeleteAlthough your voice is not very clear, I like it. Because of that problem, I listened your video more carefully and was able to catch almost every word.:)On the other hand the pause between most and fascinating is wrong. Anyway, Thank you Betül!
ReplyDeleteI liked your music and intonation so much.ıf you change your voice recorder another time,it will be better.however,good job,cong.:)
ReplyDeleteExcept "symbolize", I didn't hear any striking pronunciation mistake. Well done...
ReplyDeleteI think palace in 1:28 is mispronounced it should be pronounced as /pæləs/ not /paləs/. the rest is ok. cong.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is a very good one. you use intonation effectively. There is only one problem for your video and it is because of your recorder.
ReplyDeleteyou could use your music more effectively. your voice record is of a low quality but it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteit is a well-prepared video in general, there is not a striking pronunciation mistake,well-done...
ReplyDeleteexcept the fact that your voice is echoing in some parts of the video, it was a appreciatable video mate! :)
ReplyDeleteIt is a nice video.and your music choice is very good.I cuoldnt find any major mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI think there is no word mispronounced and the music is meaningful, the pictures are attractive...
ReplyDeleteYou're well-prepared. Your music and photos are effective.
ReplyDeleteıt is a well done job.I didnt catch any mistakes and intonation is good.Your photos and music are really suitable for you topic and place.Although I frightened when you first listened it to me I liked it.cong.bety:))
ReplyDeleteHer speech was fluent .Her photos attracted me a lot.Her intonation was good.Alsoö I DİDn't find any mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteit is a well done job. cong.
ReplyDeleteI think your topic is the best choice in this project but you have some unnecessary pauses and you should get rid of them.I didn't come across any mispronounced words. good job :)
ReplyDeletecongratulations for your choice. ı liked your speech. your intonation is good. especially while you are saying the date of Mustafa Kemal Atatürk's death, ı felt sad. yet, there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, period, decoration, unfortunately, convert, monday.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is great but there are some mistakes about your pronounciations.''convert,palace''Great job!
ReplyDeletethe topic and the music are in harmony. at the beggining your vocie is not be audible but then ı could hear and your intonations and stress are very good. ı liked it
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but please check convert and period thanks
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any pronounciation mistake,and I liked your intonation.It is a good video.
ReplyDeletethe music is very appropriate for the subject. as usual you have a fluent speech.
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