your speech is a bit short but not bad. the motto is very creative :D a few times you pronounced "bay" wrongly and also the "restaurant" was wrong again
celal ı am sorry but ı couldnt hear your voıce very well your musıc is very good and your pictures are nice as ı couldnt hear anything ı cant analyse your speech unfortunately :((
ı liked music. it is really nice. but your speech is not audible. but as far as ı can hear it is fluent. ı think but ı am not sure you mispronounced the word "evening."
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ReplyDeletethe voice isnt that audible so I couldnt hear any mistake from the parts I heard. Pay more attention to intonations. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteyr voice isnt clear. you say popular wrongly. you should use yr intonation more effectively.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is a bit short but not bad. the motto is very creative :D a few times you pronounced "bay" wrongly and also the "restaurant" was wrong again
ReplyDeleteI am sorry ı could not hear you clearly unfortunatelly but thanks for your preperations.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently but a bit hoarsely, ı couldn t understand some perts.and you should improve your intonation to take more attention
ReplyDeleteas far as ı hear you you speak fluently and ı couldn't catch any mispronounced words but you sould have used a higher voice pitch
ReplyDeletecelal ı am sorry but ı couldnt hear your voıce very well your musıc is very good and your pictures are nice as ı couldnt hear anything ı cant analyse your speech unfortunately :((
ReplyDeletea nice music, a fluent speech, but your voice isn't audible. however as far as I heard it is better than the first project. good work. cong.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is not audible unfortunately so I could not catch any mistakes. But the pictures are attractive. Thanks!!
ReplyDeletethat place must be great as i saw from your beautiful pictures but your voice record is not so good.
ReplyDeleteIf only I could understand the speech to make a clear comment :( but I like your music and photos choice
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ReplyDeleteI couldn't hear your speech well so I am sorry I cannot comment on your video.
ReplyDeleteYour voice isnt so audible.I think it stems from your rcorder but I liked your photos.
ReplyDeleteI couldn2t hear your voice.But photos are interesting.
ReplyDeleteı wish ı could have heard your voice then ı could say something.but music and pics are good.
ReplyDeleteThe video is good but a bit short. Moreover, i think u should pay a bit more attention to ur intonation and pronunciation but nice job anyway.thnx
ReplyDeleteI think you have a problem with your recorder and ı could't understand.Moreover at the begining, you waited a long time why?
ReplyDeletealthough your music and photos are very effective, ı am sorry but ı couldn't understand your speech :(
ReplyDeleteı liked music. it is really nice. but your speech is not audible. but as far as ı can hear it is fluent. ı think but ı am not sure you mispronounced the word "evening."
ReplyDeleteI think there is a problem with your recorder:( as far as I understood your intonation is good
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