grand, minaret were said wrongly.ım not sure but you say magnificing. it should be magnificient. the rest is ok yr style of speaking is very good. ı liked yr video. good job:
your intonation is good but you shouldn't have shouted very much during the speech. Also, you have some pronunciation mistakes such as mosque, grand, magnificient and striking. Yet, in general, I like the video. :)
The music was very suitable for the video.I was attracred by the photos.Her intonation and pronounciation were good .I didn't find any mispronounced words.
as far as ı could hear, convey is mispronounced word. as to your intonation, ı think it is good but you could have spoken more fluently. you vocalize the words one by one. apart fromthese, ı liked your video. the music and pistures are in harmony.
the music and the photos are suitable for the subject. your speech is fluent and so much fast, you have introduced there with a good presentation. you had better be careful about the pronunciations of some words.
beginning with questions is a good idea. your intonation is good. You mispronounce 'grand' at the very beginning.
ReplyDeletegrand is mispronounced. music is harmonious with subject. your photos are chosen good. your intonation is good. good job
ReplyDeletethe wideo and your speech is well done. apart from "grand" i didnt hear any other mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyour video is well organized and ı liked your voice.your intonation is good.but you mispronounced the word grand wrongly.
ReplyDeletethe only mispronounced word is "grand" your intonation and pictures are very good and your music is in harmony with them
ReplyDeleteI liked your video very much, and I was attracted by the pictures you used. Your speech is in harmony with your speech.Good job!!!
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good,i liked your intonation.only 'grand' were mispronounced but good job,cong.:)
ReplyDeletegrand, minaret were said wrongly.ım not sure but you say magnificing. it should be magnificient. the rest is ok yr style of speaking is very good. ı liked yr video. good job:
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but you shouldn't have shouted very much during the speech. Also, you have some pronunciation mistakes such as mosque, grand, magnificient and striking. Yet, in general, I like the video. :)
ReplyDeleteI think your video is perfect. You use your intonation very effectively. also your speech, pictures and music are all in harmony with each other.
ReplyDeletei've been there before and it is a really good place. you present it well with your good intonation.
ReplyDeleteyou give a variety of information about the place. ur intonation is good.there are some words mispronounced...I think
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is very good.I like your photos and your music.And mosque is wrongly pronunced word.gnerally it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteExcept grand, there is no other mispronunced word.Your intonation is good.
ReplyDeletebeginning with a question is good choice.ı liked your intonation and frequency.it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteThe music was very suitable for the video.I was attracred by the photos.Her intonation and pronounciation were good .I didn't find any mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteyour photos really attractive.your voice is cleae and effective also.well done cong.=))
ReplyDeleteUr intonation and pronunciation are good. I can say that I liked the video. Good job
ReplyDeletegrand, mosque are mispronounced and the rest is ok. good job.
ReplyDeletegrand is pronounced wrongly. intonation is persuassive and the music is harmonious.
ReplyDeleteas far as ı could hear, convey is mispronounced word. as to your intonation, ı think it is good but you could have spoken more fluently. you vocalize the words one by one. apart fromthese, ı liked your video. the music and pistures are in harmony.
ReplyDelete''grand,magnificent,mosque,convey'' were mispronounced. But the rest is very good.You are speaking fluently.Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour voice is so clear that I really get pleasure while listening.Grand is mispronounced please check it.thanks:)
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation is good in general,I also liked your intonation,photos and the music
ReplyDeletethe music and the photos are suitable for the subject. your speech is fluent and so much fast, you have introduced there with a good presentation. you had better be careful about the pronunciations of some words.
ReplyDeletegrand and magnificient are mispronounced words.Generally, your pronunciation is good. you use the intonation well.Best regards!!!
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