the words; kilometers, meter, ancient, byzantine, defected, tower, monumential pronounced wrongly. however, her speech is fluent and it persuaded me to go there. intonation is well in general.
her speech is good and except some words there is no pronunciation mistake.she introduces place in a good way and pictures are suitable with the presentation..
literally, meter (in some parts), kilometers, wonders and Byzantine are pronunciation mistakes. as to the intonation, ı think it is good. you intoduce this place to us and you give us a lot of informations. by giving these informations, you pay attantion to intonation. but your video would have been funnier if you had added a music
your intonation is good as you paid attention to intonate the words correctly. your pronunciation is also good though I caught some words that were mispronounced such as 'ancient' and 'tower'. but I liked your video.
does mersin have its own 7 wonders? =)) i liked this sentence. but i thnk you mistake "wonder" for "wander". the one you meant is /wʌndər/.apart from this i liked it, the conclusion was good,too
ı liked your video, it is well organised and in order.you speak fluently.but you pronounced some words such us byzantine and kilometers wrongly.good job.
your voice pitch is really effective and you make listeners to go there and see it you have some wrong-pronounced words like kilometre and ancient but in general it is a good presentation.
your speech is fluent and you used a map at the begining of the video taht is a good point however you have some pronounciation mistakes like ancient,kilometer,wonder. the organization and the photos are good thanks
the speech is so fluent and the words are understandable. you have paid attention to the intonation.there aren't so irritating pronounce mistakes apart from some words.the photos have a harmony with your subject.
l think you should study plural nouns it is not seventy meter it is seventy meters....etc..and you should have taken breath while speaking.l didn't like the intonations becouse you heavent used them effectively.and you have stressed some sentences so unnecessarily.
I can say that kilometer,ancient and byzantine were mispronounced but in general she spoke fluently and her speech was very clear.After those photos and speech,I want to see there as soon as possible.
I did not understand the aim of the sentence at the very beginning of the video. You should say this sentence just a bit before you start to present the place. Apart from this, your presentation is very good. Thank you Çiğdem!
the words; kilometers, meter, ancient, byzantine, defected, tower, monumential pronounced wrongly. however, her speech is fluent and it persuaded me to go there. intonation is well in general.
ReplyDeleteI liked the video and record quality.Moreover,the information she gave is satisfying and convincing.
ReplyDeleteHer pronunciation is generally good and I think she introduces the place well and make me want to visit there.
ReplyDeleteher speech is good and except some words there is no pronunciation mistake.she introduces place in a good way and pictures are suitable with the presentation..
ReplyDeleteher intonation is good,her speech is clear and I didn't catch any word mispronounced except 'tower'.
ReplyDelete'wonders' 'byzantine' were not pronounced correctly however the speech is fluent and well intonated.
ReplyDeleteHer intonation and pronunciation are generally good. There is one pronunciation mistake. 'kilometer!
ReplyDeleteliterally, meter (in some parts), kilometers, wonders and Byzantine are pronunciation mistakes. as to the intonation, ı think it is good. you intoduce this place to us and you give us a lot of informations. by giving these informations, you pay attantion to intonation. but your video would have been funnier if you had added a music
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good as you paid attention to intonate the words correctly. your pronunciation is also good though I caught some words that were mispronounced such as 'ancient' and 'tower'. but I liked your video.
ReplyDeleteyour start was very good and your speech was clear and fluent but you should pay attention to the pronouncation of some words
ReplyDeleteShe intonated the words very well.Also,her pronunciation is good.Except of some mispronunced words it is a nice video.
ReplyDeletedoes mersin have its own 7 wonders? =)) i liked this sentence. but i thnk you mistake "wonder" for "wander". the one you meant is /wʌndər/.apart from this i liked it, the conclusion was good,too
ReplyDeleteit is well organized. your speech is fluent and can be understood. good work.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent but I got impression that you are reading from a paper. Your intonation is good except few wrong high voices. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteı liked your video, it is well organised and in order.you speak fluently.but you pronounced some words such us byzantine and kilometers wrongly.good job.
ReplyDeleteHer speech is fluent and she uses an effective tone of voice. welldone :)
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronounced words,your pronounciation and intonation are well.I liked it.
ReplyDeleteyour speech and intonation is really good. You speak fluently. But you pronuenced some words wrongly such as byzantine, monumental, kilometers....
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is really effective and you make listeners to go there and see it you have some wrong-pronounced words like kilometre and ancient but in general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was fluent and you gave imporatance to the intonations. Wonder and tower are pronounced wrong but it doesnt affect the unity of the video.
ReplyDeleteexcept for pronounciation mistakes her video was very nice.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is fluent and you used a map at the begining of the video taht is a good point however you have some pronounciation mistakes like ancient,kilometer,wonder. the organization and the photos are good thanks
ReplyDelete'seventy meter' is false :)) on the other hand ,it is fluent and your voice attracts me
ReplyDeletefluency in your sppech and intonation is very well.also,harmany with between photos and information is effective.I liked it.
ReplyDeletethe speech is so fluent and the words are understandable. you have paid attention to the intonation.there aren't so irritating pronounce mistakes apart from some words.the photos have a harmony with your subject.
ReplyDeleteIn spite of some mispronunced words, your speech is nice. The photos are in harmony with your presentation.
ReplyDeleteHer pronounciation is ok but she mispronounced ''meter,byzantine,tomb(once)''.Although there are pauses, the rest is good.thanks.
ReplyDeletealthough there are some pronunciation mistakes, your presentation is generally good.
ReplyDeleteexcept for pronounciation mistakes it is a good presentation also your voice is fluent
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronounced words like Byzantine, literally and wrong intonations, the video is effective. you can add a musicfor th next time :D
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good also your voice is persuasive.However, you should check pronounciation of secret and necropolis.
ReplyDeleteI liked the information. She should have been more careful about the pronouncation. Tone of voice is good.
ReplyDeletekilometers,byzantine are wrongly pronounced. the photos of her presentation are good and it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeletewonders,tower, kilometers are mispronounced.except a few words it is ok..a good presentation
ReplyDeletethe video and information you give are good but there words such as'' Byzantine, literally,meter but it is a good one in general
ReplyDeletel think you should study plural nouns it is not seventy meter it is seventy meters....etc..and you should have taken breath while speaking.l didn't like the intonations becouse you heavent used them effectively.and you have stressed some sentences so unnecessarily.
ReplyDeletekilometers byzantine are wrongly pronounced you re too fastt..
ReplyDeleteYou sometimes pronounced words wrong which include 'th' letters. Be careful on them and it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour words are rather clear but you are speaking a bit fast.there are some words that were mispronounced such as byzantine,tower.
ReplyDeleteI can say that kilometer,ancient and byzantine were mispronounced but in general she spoke fluently and her speech was very clear.After those photos and speech,I want to see there as soon as possible.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation are generally good, but there was a pronunciation mistake. 'kilometer'. in addition, you speak fluently...
ReplyDeleteI liked the video and there is hardly any mistakes in the video.Your intonation could be better.Develop yourself:):)
ReplyDeleteno addition to Kilometer-Ancient-Byzantine. in general your pronunciation is okay and u could persuade me to go there. thnx
ReplyDeleteByzantine, literally,meter are the words pronounced incorrectly.. your intonation is ok.
ReplyDeleteByzantine is spelled as /bɪzəntin/ as I said and kilometer is said /kɪlɒmɪtər/ like me. I think you should check these if you don't know completely.
ReplyDeletewonder is the only word that is mispronounciated ı think, despite of slowness of the speech,she intonates well
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good,but I think the words byzantine ancient and direction were mispronounced.Generally,I liked the video
ReplyDeleteYou could have been better and I think you could not elevate your voice unnecessarily.
ReplyDeletethis video is very nice apart from some pronounciation mistakes you persuade me to visit there cong.;)
ReplyDeletewonders ,tower nd meter was mispronounced.you speak fluent.good work.
ReplyDeletemonumental were pronounced wrongly. voice is clear and fluent
ReplyDeleteYour speech and intonatios are perfect. Your photos are great harmony with your speech. You persuade me to go there. Congradulations!
ReplyDelete'ancient,meter, byzatine are wrong pronouncation but, her speech is good:)
ReplyDeleteyour photos, music and speech are very effective. congrulations!
ReplyDeleteI did not understand the aim of the sentence at the very beginning of the video. You should say this sentence just a bit before you start to present the place. Apart from this, your presentation is very good. Thank you Çiğdem!
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