ı liked your music so much but you speak sadly maybe you are tired of preparing. you should improve your intonation.you pronounced the words persian,oracle wrongly.
I think there is a problem with your recorder. In addition you shoul have spoken more attractively. I felt as if you were telling a bad memory of you. Anyway the video is very good. Thank you Cumali!
r u crying, Cumali? :)You should have spoken a bit more lively adn there are some unneccesary pauses. Your pronunciation is good except the word "valuable".
apart from your voice, your video is well-prepared. you speak fluently. although you have some trivial pronunciation mistakes,it is generally good video.
oracle is mispronounced, and I think you said at the beginning "it is state that" you must have mispronounced the word "said". music is good, intonation is not bad too. cong.
oracle and persian are said wrong.your speech should be fluent. ı think you have a problematic record but your music is so charming that I feel relax while listening.
ı liked your video. it is well-prepared. especially your pictures are clear and ı was fascinated. as to mispronounced words, they are oracle,colonization, and millenium. but overall your presentation is succesful:)
Your speech makes the video sound sad. 'oracle, and persian' are mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteI am sorry butyour recorder's voice is irritating but I liked your music. you informed me about the temple. thanks. interesting is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour speech isnt fluent you should have prepared more. "persian,hellenistic and wonderful" are wrongly pronounced
ReplyDeleteı liked your music so much but you speak sadly maybe you are tired of preparing. you should improve your intonation.you pronounced the words persian,oracle wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou have a low voice pitch but ı think this makes your video more interesting ı liked it but you mispronounced some words like "oracle and persian"
ReplyDeleteFluency is not good, but your speech is attractive with the music. There were unnecassary pauses.
ReplyDeleteI liked the place,pics and music but you should develop your pronunciation a bit more.
ReplyDeleteyour voice isn't clear enough.'persian and oracle'were pronounced wrong.your speech should be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteI think there is a problem with your recorder. In addition you shoul have spoken more attractively. I felt as if you were telling a bad memory of you. Anyway the video is very good. Thank you Cumali!
ReplyDeleter u crying, Cumali? :)You should have spoken a bit more lively adn there are some unneccesary pauses. Your pronunciation is good except the word "valuable".
ReplyDeleteIt is a good presentation but you should speak more lively.
ReplyDeletethe only problem is the way you speak, body. you could have been more lively as you do always. good presentation.
ReplyDeleteI liked your music very much.If only you spoke a bit fluently.But Oracle was wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteyour music is good. HOwever, you should speak more lively.
ReplyDeleteexcept from some unnecessary pauses, the video is good.
ReplyDeletemusic is very good but I think if only you spoke very lively and frequently.
ReplyDeleteHis music and photos were really good.there were some mispronounced words like Persian but I liked video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech isn't fluent but your music and photos are well chosen, it is a good presentation
ReplyDeleteyour voice isnt clear enough but in all it is good.
ReplyDeleteapart from your voice, your video is well-prepared. you speak fluently. although you have some trivial pronunciation mistakes,it is generally good video.
ReplyDeleteoracle is mispronounced, and I think you said at the beginning "it is state that" you must have mispronounced the word "said". music is good, intonation is not bad too. cong.
ReplyDeleteoracle and persian are said wrong.your speech should be fluent. ı think you have a problematic record but your music is so charming that I feel relax while listening.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video. it is well-prepared. especially your pictures are clear and ı was fascinated. as to mispronounced words, they are oracle,colonization, and millenium. but overall your presentation is succesful:)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video but colonization,interesting were mispronounced. I wish you had spoken livelier. Good!
ReplyDeletemusic is very nice I like it :))however I think there is fluency problem.
ReplyDeleteThere are some unnecessary duration but your intonaton is good in general
ReplyDeleteYou could speak more lively and you could be more careful about intonation.The word persian is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyou should have spoken a bit fast. the durations are unnecassary,but your speech is fluent,though. some of the words are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletethere is no fluency in your speech. you speak more lively. apart from these, it is well prepared video. thanks cumalii:)
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