ı think she must chane her voice recorder. ı couldnt understand anything. but she prnounced mosque wrongly. ı visited the mossque before and her speach is satisfied. the intonation can be better. she speaks at school better. ı think she was excited. only at the end she turn into persuade people to go there.
her voice recorder must be changed, ı couldn't understand what she wants to mean clearly anyway,her intonation is good and she persuaded me to go this interesting place.
Wherever you recorded this, your voice cannot be understood easily. I had to watch this many times to understand. You use mosque wrong on every sentence. In addition to this, you pronounce 'apostle and christianity' wrong. You use intonations which is good.
As friends has said, you should have recorded your speech with a high-quality device. Now, I couldn't understan anything about the place. so I can't write your pronunciation.However, intonation is mediocre.
I couldnt understand some of your speech. ıt results from your recorder ı think. you speak in a low voice. some of your photos are clear some of them not. you pronounced some words suc as encounter,because, except wrongly however you persuaded me ı want to see it really
I hardly heard her voice because of her recorder and it's very irritating. By the way ı could hear some of the words that are mispronounced suc as mosque,ottoman and earthquake. By the way ı think, it's not acceptable to pronounce the word '' mosque'' because she presents the mosque of Habibi Neccar. She should have checked that word first.
as most of my friends said ,there is a problem with recorder.however,your information about the mosque was satisfying.there were some mispronounced words such as mosque.because.ıt would be better if you had recorded well
the pronunciation of "mosque" is not correct. it has to be "ma:sk" ı guess. and as the others mentioned the recorder must have been a problem for you. your speech and photos are in accord. you better just get a good accorder and raise your intonation at some points.
I couldn't hear your voice clearly because of the recorder you used. I caught some mistakes as written by other friends such as the pronunciation of mosque, especially.
If your voice could be understandable, ıt would be better. mosque is said wrongly. I think in the videos having no music, it becomes more boring and does not draw attention of listeners
the photographs and your speech aren't clear. ı could understand with difficulty. as to pronunciation mistakes, especially mosque,and Ottoman is wrong.
I think your speech is not clear enough to understand I had diffuculty in understanding it.. there are also some pronunciations mistakes such as "mosque"
she speaks slowly and these makes her speech more understandable she pronounces some words wrongly such as mosque but I think she has chosen good pictures sometimes there are iritating sounds but I think it is due to her recoder
the sound coul be done better.you should pay attention to intonations.and there were some pronounciation mistakes like muslim,mosque etc..it dindnt make aany effect on me to go there
there are some striking pronunciation mistakes like pagan (it should be ['peıgən] and mosque.. your sound is not clear and unfortunately this makes your video look amateurish.. I think you could have done better...
record is awful so it is hard to understand what you mean and mosque is pronounced wrongly. At the end of the video you wrote you name etc which is not suitable.
I think she must change her voice recorder because ı couldn't understand almost the video. Mosque,Ottoman, madrasa were wrongly pronounced. Intonation is bad.
I couldn't understand most of her speech because of her recorder.I tried to focus on her speech watching it about five times.As I understood ,she pronounced 'mosque ,anatolia' mistakenly.If she had used a better recorder, her speech would have been more effective.
her voice isnt clear. christianity,ottoman and mosque are the words that were wrogly pronounced mɒsk/US /mɑːsk , ˌkrɪs.tiˈæn.ɪ.ti/US /-tʃiˈæn.ə.t ̬i, a:təmən
your voice is hoarse,so it is hard take pleasure while listening...this problem may be because of the recorder tool you have used..your pronouncation is good in genarall...
your pictures seem as if censored by rtük=)ı didnt enjoy this work .there is no intonation.Maybe like me, you didn't have ennough time to prepare=) It isn't persuasive at all. but I know you can do better works. wish you success my friend...
ı think she must chane her voice recorder. ı couldnt understand anything. but she prnounced mosque wrongly. ı visited the mossque before and her speach is satisfied. the intonation can be better. she speaks at school better. ı think she was excited. only at the end she turn into persuade people to go there.
ReplyDeleteher voice recorder must be changed, ı couldn't understand what she wants to mean clearly anyway,her intonation is good and she persuaded me to go this interesting place.
ReplyDeleteWherever you recorded this, your voice cannot be understood easily. I had to watch this many times to understand. You use mosque wrong on every sentence. In addition to this, you pronounce 'apostle and christianity' wrong. You use intonations which is good.
ReplyDeleteMost of the text isn't understood because of her voice recorder but her wrong pronounciation while saying 'mosque' is drawing attention.
ReplyDeleteAs friends has said, you should have recorded your speech with a high-quality device. Now, I couldn't understan anything about the place. so I can't write your pronunciation.However, intonation is mediocre.
ReplyDeleteI couldnt understand some of your speech. ıt results from your recorder ı think. you speak in a low voice. some of your photos are clear some of them not. you pronounced some words suc as encounter,because, except wrongly however you persuaded me ı want to see it really
ReplyDeleteit was reeeaally hard to catch the words but some of the mistakes i understood are mosque(it is very clear) and ottoman
ReplyDeleteI hardly heard her voice because of her recorder and it's very irritating. By the way ı could hear some of the words that are mispronounced suc as mosque,ottoman and earthquake. By the way ı think, it's not acceptable to pronounce the word '' mosque'' because she presents the mosque of Habibi Neccar. She should have checked that word first.
ReplyDeleteas most of my friends said ,there is a problem with recorder.however,your information about the mosque was satisfying.there were some mispronounced words such as mosque.because.ıt would be better if you had recorded well
ReplyDeleteit is cannot be understood easily what you said. you could have choosen better photos. I wish you watched before brodcasting.
ReplyDeleteI really couldnt hear your voice eventhough I tried to watch it many times.
ReplyDeleteHer voice isn’t understood but I could hear that the word mosque is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteNeither photos nor your voice is clear:(I think there was a problem with the recorder.You must pay attention much more to our second project.
ReplyDeletethe pronunciation of "mosque" is not correct. it has to be "ma:sk" ı guess. and as the others mentioned the recorder must have been a problem for you. your speech and photos are in accord. you better just get a good accorder and raise your intonation at some points.
ReplyDeleteAltough it seems to me your intonation is very good, I couldn't understand what you said because of your recorder.
ReplyDeleteAs other people said, the voice is not clear enough to make a comment about pronunciation but she is good at intonation
ReplyDeleteI couldn't hear your voice clearly because of the recorder you used. I caught some mistakes as written by other friends such as the pronunciation of mosque, especially.
ReplyDeleteIntonations are used well but Christianity and mosque are pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteIf your voice could be understandable, ıt would be better. mosque is said wrongly. I think in the videos having no music, it becomes more boring and does not draw attention of listeners
ReplyDeletethe photographs and your speech aren't clear. ı could understand with difficulty. as to pronunciation mistakes, especially mosque,and Ottoman is wrong.
ReplyDeleteI didn't catch some words because the voice isn't clear.
ReplyDeleteI think her intonation is good but her voice isn't audible. When I was watching it, I had a hardship to hear it.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not recognizable. If only you had talked a little loudly. However your intonation was good.
ReplyDeleteI think your speech is not clear enough to understand I had diffuculty in understanding it.. there are also some pronunciations mistakes such as "mosque"
ReplyDeleteI can't believe you how can you make the same mistake so many times :) it is pronounced as /mɑsk/
ReplyDeleteher voice recorder is not good,it could be better.she has pronunciation mistakes such as mosque,because.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and these makes her speech more understandable she pronounces some words wrongly such as mosque but I think she has chosen good pictures sometimes there are iritating sounds but I think it is due to her recoder
ReplyDeletethe sound coul be done better.you should pay attention to intonations.and there were some pronounciation mistakes like muslim,mosque etc..it dindnt make aany effect on me to go there
ReplyDeletethere are some striking pronunciation mistakes like pagan (it should be ['peıgən] and mosque.. your sound is not clear and unfortunately this makes your video look amateurish.. I think you could have done better...
ReplyDeleteFirstly, your speech must be attractive. You should change your speech tone and there are problems with your pictures.
ReplyDeletethe voice is hard to understand.intonations are not good.and there are some pronounciation mistakes like muslim,mosque,pagan...
ReplyDeleteher speech isn't clear but it is well prepared and intonation is also good
ReplyDeleteHer voice isn't so audible.So I couldn't undersatnd exactly what you want to say.
ReplyDeleterecord is awful so it is hard to understand what you mean and mosque is pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the video you wrote you name etc which is not suitable.
Her voice is not high enough to be heard.So, I can't comment on this speech.
ReplyDeleteİt isn't so clear so I couldn't catch it completely. But i reliazed that she speak a bit slow, it can be a bit more fast.
ReplyDeletemosque and ottoman are wrongly pronounced. her pronounciation is good in total.
ReplyDeleteit not understandable...so it is no use to make comment on intonation and pronouncation
ReplyDeleteI think she must change her voice recorder because ı couldn't understand almost the video. Mosque,Ottoman, madrasa were wrongly pronounced. Intonation is bad.
ReplyDeleteIt is difficult to understand what she tells. Her voice could have been a bit louder. The word ' ottoman' is wrong pronounced.
ReplyDeleteit is hard to understand her. however her intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand most of her speech because of her recorder.I tried to focus on her speech watching it about five times.As I understood ,she pronounced 'mosque ,anatolia' mistakenly.If she had used a better recorder, her speech would have been more effective.
ReplyDeleteit isn'clear enough to understand, there are some mispronounced words such as mosque as friends said.
ReplyDeleteher voice isnt clear. christianity,ottoman and mosque are the words that were wrogly pronounced
ReplyDeletemɒsk/US /mɑːsk , ˌkrɪs.tiˈæn.ɪ.ti/US /-tʃiˈæn.ə.t ̬i,
a:təmən
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ReplyDeleteyour voice is hoarse,so it is hard take pleasure while listening...this problem may be because of the recorder tool you have used..your pronouncation is good in genarall...
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very irritating because of your recorder. you speak good but it could be much better if you used a better recorder.
ReplyDeleteThe voice isn't clear because of the recorder and her speech causes the listeners to get bored.Furthermore,the word 'mosque'is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteThere must have been a problem with the recorder. I can't understand what you say. The voice is too low.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is to slow to understand and not clear.so,I cannot make a detail comment about your presentation I'M SORRY
ReplyDeletethe recorder made the voice inaudible,ı can not understand
ReplyDeleteyour pictures seem as if censored by rtük=)ı didnt enjoy this work .there is no intonation.Maybe like me, you didn't have ennough time to prepare=) It isn't persuasive at all. but I know you can do better works. wish you success my friend...
ReplyDeleteI had difficulty in hearing what she said so I think she had some problems with recorder.Also she mispronounces 'because'.
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech completely.there are some pronunciation mistakes.the content is good,I think.Best regards!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand your speech because of your recorder but your presentation is not bad
ReplyDeleteI could not catch some words please for the next time, use a different kind of voice recorder
ReplyDeletethe voice isn't audible and her speech isn't clear you should careful about your intonation
ReplyDeletethecnically, the video could be better and voice should be louder. there is a pronunciation mistake -mosque- shuoldn't be done by an elt student.
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