wherever, all over the world, selecuia, twelve, belong those are the wrods pronounced wrongly. but her intonation is good. she didnt give so many historical knowledges so itsnot boring. however ı cannot said she persuade me to go there. but ımnot sure if ı have never seen there, ı would think like that. may be beacuse of my being there before so many times effect my thoughts. all in all it is a well prepared work but her fluency can be improved.
your intonatıon was good but you had some pronouncation problems like guarentu your music was suitable for your video becase it was about a cradle cave and your music look like a nagle your informatıon was good
You try to persuade and it works actually because you have used intonations well. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as attract, cradle and guarantee'.
your voice comes as if you are far from the recorder. but your intonation attracts me to your presentation and that is important. your pictures are well organized. your music is well abd suitable with your topic.
what a fantastic place! ı am interested in ancient places like this cave. ı liked it. I couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes :))) or ı missed them. You tried to intonate them correctly and ı think managed but you could speak a bit fast
eventhough I am not totally sure I think 'introduce' used wrongly. I mean maybe we both should have a look at the usage grammatically. The rest is okay with photos and speech also I really liked the music
"Hi friends" is incorrect ı guess. The speech is ok but it will be more attractive if you raise your intonation at some points, my friend.and the word "introduce" wasnt pronounced correctly. nothin more :)
You are also saying 'hello friends' in introduction and 'thank you' at the end.I think you shouldn't have said so.You speak rather slowly but understandable.There isn't too much mistake to criticize.
In my opinion, your video is good in general, but there are some pronunciation mistakes that I could catch such as 'Roman' and 'guarentee'. maybe more attention to intonation would make your video better, but I like it.
I learned slow speeches make people so bored and distract them from the subject. Even if you gave information about the place, I would not have wanted to go there. You should you reduction in your speech.
firstly, you could have talked more fluently. secondly,you say at the beginning of the speech " hi friends" and at the end, you say thank you. ı think those sentences shouldnt have been said. lastly, there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example, monumental, guarantee
''hi friends'' is not a prefable beginning in my opinion..there are some minor pronunciation mistakes and if your speech were more fluently it would be a great one..
it is good presentation but you pronounced some words wrongly such as all over the world,probable,guarantee. besides,you shouldn't start with 'hi,friends'
ıt is a good presentation because she can make me want to go there and her intonation is good I think she can speak faster to be better. but the the her pictures are well-chosen and she pronounce "guarantee" wrongly
you say '' we know that Turkey is a historical country'' it is somehow an awkward sentence to begin with.. you pronounced the word guarantee incorrectly... it is [,gærən'ti:]. your pictures are charming..try to be a bit more fluent...
the beggining''hi friends''is not appropriate for this kind of video. the speech and intonations are not bad.the information is rewarding but there are some mispronunced words like wherever, all over the world, selecuia etc.
Guarantee is mispronounced. Her intonation is not bad. Some superfluous pauses and the problem of her sound recorder made me distract. Thank you is unnecessary.
its generally good, but you speak as if you were being interrupted by stg. you said magnificent wrongly and you say the word guarentee like a turkish word.
Her voice was understandable and her intonation was good but there are some mispronounced words like antic and guarantee. And I want to say that she shouldn't have started 'hi,friends' to the presentation in such a video.
you shouldnt have started by saying 'hi friends'...instead of this, you could say 'The Cradle Cave....'Apart from that, guarentee and cradle were mispronounced.. it was impressive so you persuaded me to visit there..
l could see that it is a very intersting and attractive place from photos.guarantee was pronouncued wrongly.you dont need to say hi friend in such presentation.it was a good video
beginnig to your speech isn't suitable for this format of presentation.but your intonation,pronouncation,photos and especially the choice your music are rather succesful.
starting with'Hi friends' is not suitable for this project.In addition, you pronounced the word 'quarantee' like a türkish word.and not in other words you should say in the other words.Your conservation isn't fluent, either. you were supposed to persuade us to visit Samandağ but I don't think this video will take anyone to there. you can do better ı think...
wherever, all over the world, selecuia, twelve, belong those are the wrods pronounced wrongly. but her intonation is good. she didnt give so many historical knowledges so itsnot boring. however ı cannot said she persuade me to go there. but ımnot sure if ı have never seen there, ı would think like that. may be beacuse of my being there before so many times effect my thoughts. all in all it is a well prepared work but her fluency can be improved.
ReplyDeleteyour intonatıon was good but you had some pronouncation problems like guarentu your music was suitable for your video becase it was about a cradle cave and your music look like a nagle your informatıon was good
ReplyDeleteYou try to persuade and it works actually because you have used intonations well. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as attract, cradle and guarantee'.
ReplyDeleteyour voice comes as if you are far from the recorder. but your intonation attracts me to your presentation and that is important. your pictures are well organized. your music is well abd suitable with your topic.
ReplyDeleteShe could speak more influently.Antic and guarantee are pronounced wrongly.It is a good sample for informative speech.
ReplyDeleteThe fluence is the lack of this video, but that's one of the good videos in the site. There are some pronunciation mistakes. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeletewhat a fantastic place! ı am interested in ancient places like this cave. ı liked it. I couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes :))) or ı missed them. You tried to intonate them correctly and ı think managed but you could speak a bit fast
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand some words and affect,magnificant and guarantee are mispronounced. And she could have spoken little bit faster. but not bad:)
ReplyDeletein whole it is good but some parts are too slow, the pictures are good selected. the most clear mistake i heard is the word "guarantee"
ReplyDeletethe video is effective apart from some mistaken words. the music is harmonies with your speech.
ReplyDeleteyou could speak a bit faster it would be good for you. it is not bad. intonation is well, but i cant say it for pronounciation
ReplyDeleteeventhough I am not totally sure I think 'introduce' used wrongly. I mean maybe we both should have a look at the usage grammatically. The rest is okay with photos and speech also I really liked the music
ReplyDeleteTwelve,all over the world are said wrong. She can improve her fluency.
ReplyDeleteHer intonation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as; quarantee and attract. It is a good presentation.
ReplyDelete"Hi friends" is incorrect ı guess. The speech is ok but it will be more attractive if you raise your intonation at some points, my friend.and the word "introduce" wasnt pronounced correctly. nothin more :)
ReplyDeleteYou are also saying 'hello friends' in introduction and 'thank you' at the end.I think you shouldn't have said so.You speak rather slowly but understandable.There isn't too much mistake to criticize.
ReplyDeleteIn general the pronunciation and intonation are okey but the speech should be more fluent to attract viewer's attention
ReplyDeleteShe can use more intonation. Video is really informative but there are some mistakes while saying ‘antic,attract,guarantee’.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, your video is good in general, but there are some pronunciation mistakes that I could catch such as 'Roman' and 'guarentee'. maybe more attention to intonation would make your video better, but I like it.
ReplyDeleteI learned slow speeches make people so bored and distract them from the subject. Even if you gave information about the place, I would not have wanted to go there. You should you reduction in your speech.
ReplyDeletefirstly, you could have talked more fluently. secondly,you say at the beginning of the speech " hi friends" and at the end, you say thank you. ı think those sentences shouldnt have been said. lastly, there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example, monumental, guarantee
ReplyDeleteYour video is good for its visualization. However, you could speak more fluently.But your intonation was good.
ReplyDelete''hi friends'' is not a prefable beginning in my opinion..there are some minor pronunciation mistakes and if your speech were more fluently it would be a great one..
ReplyDelete"hi friends" is not good for entrance, and the music is some tiring. try to use intonation more.
ReplyDeleteit is good presentation but you pronounced some words wrongly such as all over the world,probable,guarantee. besides,you shouldn't start with 'hi,friends'
ReplyDeleteıt is a good presentation because she can make me want to go there and her intonation is good I think she can speak faster to be better. but the the her pictures are well-chosen and she pronounce "guarantee" wrongly
ReplyDeleteyou say '' we know that Turkey is a historical country'' it is somehow an awkward sentence to begin with.. you pronounced the word guarantee incorrectly... it is [,gærən'ti:]. your pictures are charming..try to be a bit more fluent...
ReplyDeleteThere are problems with some sentences consedering intonation. On the other hand, the pictures, your voice and search are very good. Thank you.
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ReplyDeletethe beggining''hi friends''is not appropriate for this kind of video. the speech and intonations are not bad.the information is rewarding but there are some mispronunced words like wherever, all over the world, selecuia etc.
ReplyDeleteit is a good presentation, her intonation is good,music is also good but there are some pronounciation mistakes like "attract"
ReplyDeleteintroduction is good but 'hi friends'.There are some pronounciation mistakes. photos are attractive.
ReplyDeleteThere are some wrong pronounced words like them,guarantee.But the music and pictures are in harmony.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is very good. 'Guarantee' has been misspelt and beginning saying 'hi friends'is wrong to me.But the video and her speech are effective.
ReplyDeleteYou sould have used efficent words to increase the influence.Generally your pronounciation is good...
ReplyDeleteIt is a good presentation, and it is better than most of other videos.
ReplyDeleteyou are like a politician:):) selukia piearaaaa.... generally good... I love myhometown very muchhh..
ReplyDeleteguarantee is wrongly pronounced. her voice is audible.
ReplyDeleteGuarantee is mispronounced. Her intonation is not bad. Some superfluous pauses and the problem of her sound recorder made me distract. Thank you is unnecessary.
ReplyDeleteThe word 'guarantee' is pronunced wrongly.However, her intonation is good. And I think photos are attracting.
ReplyDeleteits generally good, but you speak as if you were being interrupted by stg. you said magnificent wrongly and you say the word guarentee like a turkish word.
ReplyDeletethe words guarantee, attract are wrong pronounced.the video is well-prepared and interesting to listen
ReplyDeleteintonation and pronunciation are good in the video I catched some words' mispronounciation but in all with photos it is really good.
ReplyDeleteHer voice was understandable and her intonation was good but there are some mispronounced words like antic and guarantee. And I want to say that she shouldn't have started 'hi,friends' to the presentation in such a video.
ReplyDeleteyou shouldnt have started by saying 'hi friends'...instead of this, you could say 'The Cradle Cave....'Apart from that, guarentee and cradle were mispronounced.. it was impressive so you persuaded me to visit there..
ReplyDelete'hi friends we know that turkey is a ' this is not a good start for a video.the music was not good.intonation was good.
ReplyDeleteI think she could have spoken more fluently without saying the words one by one.Also,there are some misspelled words as 'cradle and guarentee.'
ReplyDeletel could see that it is a very intersting and attractive place from photos.guarantee was pronouncued wrongly.you dont need to say hi friend in such presentation.it was a good video
ReplyDeleteI liked the intonation and pronounciation. The video was also good. It would be really good if you hadn't make mistakes in pronounciation.
ReplyDeletethe intonation is good but ıt might be better world is mispronounciated
ReplyDeletebeginnig to your speech isn't suitable for this format of presentation.but your intonation,pronouncation,photos and especially the choice your music are rather succesful.
ReplyDeletestarting with'Hi friends' is not suitable for this project.In addition, you pronounced the word 'quarantee' like a türkish word.and not in other words you should say in the other words.Your conservation isn't fluent, either. you were supposed to persuade us to visit Samandağ but I don't think this video will take anyone to there. you can do better ı think...
ReplyDeleteyou could have used intonation more effectively.your photos are attractive and in harmony with music.Congratulations!
ReplyDeletethere were some misspelled words such as attract, guarantee, selecuia. She didn't speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteI agree with NİHAN.Best regards!
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and pictures.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some minor pronounciation mistakes, ıt does not destroy the whole congratulations ece=)
I like your photos but I think it is not a good start. you shouldn't say 'hi friends'. moreover there are some words pronounciated wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou sholdn't say 'hi'friends and guarantee is wrongly pronounced.it could be effective because the photos are impressive
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ReplyDeleteentry is not very effective-a wrong entry we can say, maybe.voice could be better. music is good and the video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech and your pictures are must go at the same time in order to follow you.your intonation is good apart from some small pronounce(garanti)
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