video is too long. ı know the place and what she said is true. the music is so harmonious with the photos. the words; hundred, additionally, castle, immigrants can be pronounced in a better way. sometimes ı cannot understand whta she said. i think it is a good example of a persuasive speech. but historical knowledges can be reduced. good work well done.
first of all ı want to say that it was too long but your intonation and pronouncation was good ı liked your music very much but in some parts of yor video you spoke very fast nad gave many historical informatin ı think it was a bit boring
You could have kept the video shorter because it may be boring after some time. Intonations are used really well and this video is rather persuasive and informative at the same time. You pronounce some words wrong such as additionally, damaged and recently(5:19).
ı agree with you about its being a bit long. but my intonation is good because ı paid attention especially to it.also, ı could not find the word dervish in dictionaries.in addition the music ı chose is attracting and in harmony with the pictures,inmy opinion. Thanks..
i liked the video very much but found some minor mistakes,too. you say /endʒəl// but it is /eɪndʒəl/ as we learned last year(2:30)and you used "yes friends" too many times
I got bored while watching your video and there were some repeated photos I mean you lengthen them some of them but your pronounciation is perfect, your voice is very high I coul hear clearly. you pronounced some words such as construction,located,of..etc however ı liked your intonation in general well done
On the beginning of the video, you are speaking very fast so I had diffulty catching in your words. I don't understand why you were speking like screaming. High voice doesn't show use the intonation. Be careful at that point. Your information is explained clearly and the details you gave are very neccesary for this video. Transition signals are the lack of this video, as well.
generally your intonation was good.but ı think it was a bit long because you explained its history deeply.so in some parts ı got bored.your pronounciation was good.ı liked it
the video is good organized, but it is long. your intonations aren't bad. If you didn't mention about its history deeply and spoke slower it would be better.
it is a bit long presentation. she pays attention to her intonation and that is good. her photos and music are in harmonious with each other. it is a persuasive speech.
You're talking fluently but the video is too long.Intonation is rather well,you generally pronounce vocabularies correctly.But maybe in the second video, you may shorten your video :)
the music is so high. and it didnt catch your words.by the way, ı got tired to hear the "sh" syllable of yours. if you can, pls correct it. and again " high friends". ı think this is not proper as this is a GoogleErth project.
You speech and sentences are chosen in a professional way. But video is so long that I really got bored while watching it. On the other hand choosing such a touching music just made your attractive.
The music playing in the backround was a good opinion but the video was a bit long. She could speak slower.Generally pronounciations were good but she pay attention to the words like earthquake, additionally.
it would be better if se was slower because the sentences are coordinated and well prepared. All people can watch the video so it not true to use ' friends '. 'About' is pronounced wrong. In general the speech is persuasive.
your video is so impressive that while ı was listening ı felt like a foreign was talking. with your questions, you make listeners curious and try to persuade them to go and feel the athmosphere. ı liked it so much
the music is well-chosen, but could be slower. in general the video is good. your pronunciation is also good, but you could make shorter, as it is a bit long.
The video could be shorter and then watching would be more delightful.Generally words were pronounced well but earthquake and immigrants could be said in a more appropriate way.
your speech and intonation is wonderful. the music is in harmony with the photographs. however, there is some pronunciation mistakes. you mispronounced the words of constraction and north-south
your video was in harmony with music and,your intonation was good. It was also good of you to say your opinions in the video such as 'in my opinion.' However your video is a bit long and you used 'yes friends' very much. Shortly I liked your video and your speech.
your video might be a bit shorter and you repeat some photos... but your intonation is well and video is harmonious with your speech it persuades the reader...
first of all,your video is too long. I couldn't catch any pronunciation error. sometimes,you speak fast. your muusic is in harmonious with your photos. you explains fluently.in general, it is good. I liked it.
I think she speaks fluently and the music is in harmony with her voice pitch and her pictures I liked her intonation a lot the only bad thing about her presentation is it is a bit long. but I think she can explain her topic well.
you dont speak in a classroom youı dont need to say 'hi'becouse you dont present it to class.and video is very long.the music dominants your voice at some parts of video.sometimes l yhought that this video has no an end.it bored me.it could be done better
your intonation changes well in some sentences which is an admirable thing. you say '' I think that is interesting'', I found it unnecessary because this is a googleearth project and that sentence has a subjective meaning. To be frank I did not get bored while watching it, which indicates that it was a good one, actually..
Using 'yes friends' very exceesively isn't very nice.But I find that her voice is in harmony with her intonation.Maybe this video should be more short not to detract people's attention.
There is an advertisement at the beginning of the video. You should cover it or change.:) Except this you speak fluently and your pictures are very good.
it's well prepared and your voice is clear intonation is good but I think you shouldn't have added your opinions to the video, and 'yes friends' is not suitable to say.
Firstly, her video is too long to follow, it may have been shorter. Castle was mispronounced. Intonation is as well as possible. Her photos are really good I like them but final project, her school number, hi friends, thank you for listening shouldn't be used because they are used in our presentations.This work is formal.
At the beginning of the speech ,she spoke fast but she spoke fluently.And her intonation,pronounciation were very good.However, she pronounced some words such as construction,castle mistakenly.
she speaks very fluently like a native person. ı liked the way she uses in her speech. music was perceft.well done.there were not many mistakes but construction, combine were said wrongly
you shouldnt have started with the sentence ' hi friends..you speak fluently and like a native speaker, but i think you speak a little fast. the video is long, this made me bored..all in all, it was a good choice.
I want to say that ,I was impressed by her fluent speech and although the video was too long I watched it without getting bored.On the other hand,I heard some pronounciation mistakes as 'construction,surrounding and compose'but in general I liked the video.
firstly,'yes friends' in your presentation is unnecessary because,for google earth project this word isn't good choice.apart from this,maybe you could have kept your speech a bit shorther after a while it began to a bit boring.
it is wrong of you to say 'Yes friends'.it is a bit long, isn't it? you speak fluently. if you improve your intonation skills more, you will do better jobs in future.
video is too long. ı know the place and what she said is true. the music is so harmonious with the photos. the words; hundred, additionally, castle, immigrants can be pronounced in a better way. sometimes ı cannot understand whta she said. i think it is a good example of a persuasive speech. but historical knowledges can be reduced. good work well done.
ReplyDeletefirst of all ı want to say that it was too long but your intonation and pronouncation was good ı liked your music very much but in some parts of yor video you spoke very fast nad gave many historical informatin ı think it was a bit boring
ReplyDeleteGenerally video was perfect but she could use more intonation.The word 'dervish' was said wrongly in some parts.Also,she could speak slower.
ReplyDeleteYou could have kept the video shorter because it may be boring after some time. Intonations are used really well and this video is rather persuasive and informative at the same time. You pronounce some words wrong such as additionally, damaged and recently(5:19).
ReplyDeleteı agree with you about its being a bit long. but my intonation is good because ı paid attention especially to it.also, ı could not find the word dervish in dictionaries.in addition the music ı chose is attracting and in harmony with the pictures,inmy opinion. Thanks..
ReplyDeletei liked the video very much but found some minor mistakes,too. you say /endʒəl// but it is /eɪndʒəl/ as we learned last year(2:30)and you used "yes friends" too many times
ReplyDeleteI got bored while watching your video and there were some repeated photos I mean you lengthen them some of them but your pronounciation is perfect, your voice is very high I coul hear clearly. you pronounced some words such as construction,located,of..etc however ı liked your intonation in general well done
ReplyDeleteOn the beginning of the video, you are speaking very fast so I had diffulty catching in your words. I don't understand why you were speking like screaming. High voice doesn't show use the intonation. Be careful at that point. Your information is explained clearly and the details you gave are very neccesary for this video. Transition signals are the lack of this video, as well.
ReplyDeleteIt's rather good and perfect by its some parts. She is speaking fluently and couldn't catch mispronounced words except south-north. I liked it.
ReplyDeletegenerally your intonation was good.but ı think it was a bit long because you explained its history deeply.so in some parts ı got bored.your pronounciation was good.ı liked it
ReplyDeletethe video is good organized, but it is long. your intonations aren't bad. If you didn't mention about its history deeply and spoke slower it would be better.
ReplyDeleteit is a bit long presentation. she pays attention to her intonation and that is good. her photos and music are in harmonious with each other. it is a persuasive speech.
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ReplyDeleteYou're talking fluently but the video is too long.Intonation is rather well,you generally pronounce vocabularies correctly.But maybe in the second video, you may shorten your video :)
ReplyDeletethe music is so high. and it didnt catch your words.by the way, ı got tired to hear the "sh" syllable of yours. if you can, pls correct it. and again " high friends". ı think this is not proper as this is a GoogleErth project.
ReplyDeleteYou speech and sentences are chosen in a professional way. But video is so long that I really got bored while watching it. On the other hand choosing such a touching music just made your attractive.
ReplyDeleteThe music playing in the backround was a good opinion but the video was a bit long. She could speak slower.Generally pronounciations were good but she pay attention to the words like earthquake, additionally.
ReplyDeleteShe speaks a bit slower but her pronunciaton is good. She should pay attention about intonation.
ReplyDeleteit would be better if se was slower because the sentences are coordinated and well prepared. All people can watch the video so it not true to use ' friends '. 'About' is pronounced wrong. In general the speech is persuasive.
ReplyDeleteyour video is so impressive that while ı was listening ı felt like a foreign was talking. with your questions, you make listeners curious and try to persuade them to go and feel the athmosphere. ı liked it so much
ReplyDeletethe music is well-chosen, but could be slower. in general the video is good. your pronunciation is also good, but you could make shorter, as it is a bit long.
ReplyDeleteIn general, the video is very well. it is a bit long and you used wrong intonations in some parts.
ReplyDeleteThe video could be shorter and then watching would be more delightful.Generally words were pronounced well but earthquake and immigrants could be said in a more appropriate way.
ReplyDeleteyour speech and intonation is wonderful. the music is in harmony with the photographs. however, there is some pronunciation mistakes. you mispronounced the words of constraction and north-south
ReplyDeleteıt is a good video in terms of pronounciation but 'construction' is mispronounced. besides it, the video is a bit long.
ReplyDeletethe video is a bit long and the historial backgroun is a bit boring, but generally it is a good work
ReplyDeleteyour video was in harmony with music and,your intonation was good. It was also good of you to say your opinions in the video such as 'in my opinion.' However your video is a bit long and you used 'yes friends' very much. Shortly I liked your video and your speech.
ReplyDeleteyour video might be a bit shorter and you repeat some photos... but your intonation is well and video is harmonious with your speech it persuades the reader...
ReplyDeletefirst of all,your video is too long. I couldn't catch any pronunciation error. sometimes,you speak fast. your muusic is in harmonious with your photos. you explains fluently.in general, it is good. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI think she speaks fluently and the music is in harmony with her voice pitch and her pictures I liked her intonation a lot the only bad thing about her presentation is it is a bit long. but I think she can explain her topic well.
ReplyDeleteyou dont speak in a classroom youı dont need to say 'hi'becouse you dont present it to class.and video is very long.the music dominants your voice at some parts of video.sometimes l yhought that this video has no an end.it bored me.it could be done better
ReplyDeleteyour intonation changes well in some sentences which is an admirable thing. you say '' I think that is interesting'', I found it unnecessary because this is a googleearth project and that sentence has a subjective meaning. To be frank I did not get bored while watching it, which indicates that it was a good one, actually..
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ReplyDeleteUsing 'yes friends' very exceesively isn't very nice.But I find that her voice is in harmony with her intonation.Maybe this video should be more short not to detract people's attention.
ReplyDeleteThere is an advertisement at the beginning of the video. You should cover it or change.:)
ReplyDeleteExcept this you speak fluently and your pictures are very good.
it is a bit long and you must speak more slowly but it is well organised
ReplyDeleteit's well prepared and your voice is clear intonation is good but I think you shouldn't have added your opinions to the video, and 'yes friends' is not suitable to say.
ReplyDeletethe speech and the intonations are good.Information is rewarding,but the video is too long and boring.
ReplyDeleteHer speech is fluent but it would be a better presentation if she spoke a bit slower. In general, I liked the video.
ReplyDeleteCastle is a silent word and 't' should have been omitted.
ReplyDeletegenerally well apart from some ponounciation mistakes and you spoke a bit quickly I think.
ReplyDeletesımendağ:):) it is really a nice video...but too long..Genarally good..there is allmost no pronouncation mistakess:
ReplyDeleteFirstly, her video is too long to follow, it may have been shorter. Castle was mispronounced. Intonation is as well as possible. Her photos are really good I like them but final project, her school number, hi friends, thank you for listening shouldn't be used because they are used in our presentations.This work is formal.
ReplyDeleteShe pronunces a word 'southnorth' wrongly. There are not many mistakes and I liked it. Her speech is very fluent,it is clear.
ReplyDeletethe music is in harmony with this speech and phfotos. her speech and intonation is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteI agree that it is long speech but it is easy to understand and intonation is also good.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning of the speech ,she spoke fast but she spoke fluently.And her intonation,pronounciation were very good.However, she pronounced some words such as construction,castle mistakenly.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks very fluently like a native person. ı liked the way she uses in her speech. music was perceft.well done.there were not many mistakes but construction, combine were said wrongly
ReplyDeleteyou shouldnt have started with the sentence ' hi friends..you speak fluently and like a native speaker, but i think you speak a little fast. the video is long, this made me bored..all in all, it was a good choice.
ReplyDeletethe music was perfect.you speak so fluenth .but you must not say your opinion because it is a google project.and it is a little long.
ReplyDeleteI want to say that ,I was impressed by her fluent speech and although the video was too long I watched it without getting bored.On the other hand,I heard some pronounciation mistakes as 'construction,surrounding and compose'but in general I liked the video.
ReplyDeleteShe could have been lively. Its lenght made me bored. The speech is fluent and pronounciation is ok in general.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is fulent but it is a bit long so at the last of the video I lost my attention.but generally intonation is good
ReplyDeletefirstly,'yes friends' in your presentation is unnecessary because,for google earth project this word isn't good choice.apart from this,maybe you could have kept your speech a bit shorther after a while it began to a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteit is wrong of you to say 'Yes friends'.it is a bit long, isn't it? you speak fluently. if you improve your intonation skills more, you will do better jobs in future.
ReplyDeleteyou could use more intonation.you give too much details and I think it is unnecessary but in general your pronunciation is really good.cong
ReplyDeleteher video was long so I got bored. however, her intonation was good.
ReplyDeleteI agree with @hmet.Also,I am bored while watching this video.
ReplyDeleteYour speech and voice is perfect. Moreover, I like your pronounciation but I think it is wrong to say 'yes friends'
ReplyDeleteI liked your voice a lot eda:)
ReplyDeletegenerally your video and your speech is very good congratulations:)
you are speakıng very fast at the begining the video so I cooldn't you sometimes and your voice is high
ReplyDeleteI got bored as I was watching your video,it could be shorter to interest us.but in generall it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteoooo the music is too high... but generaly it is good except the longness
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