your music is very suitable to topic and you use your voice pitch very effectively. ı couldn't catch any mispronounced words. because you parted your speech it is easier to follow your video well-done
starting with question is a good idea for an persuasive speech and takes attention, ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistake. your intonation is well in general. music and the photos are creating a marvellous harmony with your speech. good job,well done.
your photos and the musıc are ın a good harmony with eachother. you speak fluently ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes well done eda thank you ıt ıs a good example of informative speech.
Dear my friend, It is one of the best videos. I could not catch any mistakes. Congratulations!!!!( Actually I wanted to start with another expression in the beginning instead of 'dear' but I know you would be angry:)))
in some parts, you are speaking so fast that ı couldnt understand you. but overall your voice and pronounciation are good. in respect to pronouncaiton, there is no pronounciation mistake as far as ı can hear. it is a good speeck.
i didnt hear any striking mistakes your pictures and speech are very good.. =))
ReplyDeleteyr pronunciation is good. speech is fluent. economically was said wrongly. the restis ok good job thanks :)
ReplyDeleteI could not catch any mistake. everything is ok but a limited part was disorder of the video. good job.
ReplyDeleteyour music is very suitable to topic and you use your voice pitch very effectively. ı couldn't catch any mispronounced words. because you parted your speech it is easier to follow your video well-done
ReplyDeletestarting with question is a good idea for an persuasive speech and takes attention, ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistake. your intonation is well in general. music and the photos are creating a marvellous harmony with your speech. good job,well done.
ReplyDeleteyour photos and the musıc are ın a good harmony with eachother. you speak fluently ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes well done eda thank you ıt ıs a good example of informative speech.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't catch anny mispronounced word.your intonation photos and the music u used were also good .cong eda
ReplyDeleteı couldn't catch any mistake too. good job. intonation is good, and the music is good too.
ReplyDeletecong..
Dear my friend, It is one of the best videos. I could not catch any mistakes. Congratulations!!!!( Actually I wanted to start with another expression in the beginning instead of 'dear' but I know you would be angry:)))
ReplyDeleteyour photos and their transitions are very good. i think you can be a bit more lively. good work.
ReplyDeletethe level of your speech tone made your video presentation more effective I did not hear any mistakes in terms of pronunciation
ReplyDeleteThere is no important pronunciation mistake.Yet, you could make your video bit more tempting by using your voice lively. cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoken a bit more lively. But your pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeleteTere arent any major mistakes.Your intonatıon is good.Also your music and photos in harmonious
ReplyDeletemusic is really good.also ı liked your intonation and pronunciation.good job!
ReplyDeleteHer music was very compatible wit h the photos.Her speech was so clear that I understand evrything very well.
ReplyDeleteI couldnt catch any pronunciation mistake. U used ur voice effectively. Good job
ReplyDelete''modern'' was mispronounced but ıt was a good video generally.Good job!
ReplyDeletestarting with question means that you are willing to persuade us to go there. modern as my friend maviş said is wrongly said.music is a good idea.
ReplyDeletea slow and lifeless speech but good pronunciation. ı like your photos and infromation
ReplyDeletein some parts, you are speaking so fast that ı couldnt understand you. but overall your voice and pronounciation are good. in respect to pronouncaiton, there is no pronounciation mistake as far as ı can hear. it is a good speeck.
ReplyDeleteYour picture and music are in harmony also your intonation is good.
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