Your intonation is very good.it was really interesting but ı think'curious,probably,closely,meters,throughout' were mispronounced.generally ı liked it,it is really persuasive.
I think the words 'flood and kilometer' are mispronounced but your pronunciation is ok and also there is no problem with your intonation. The pictures are very attractive. I thank you too, Erdem...
Kilometer,throughout,because are mispronounced words.Apart from these, your pronunciation is good and your speech is fluent.The photos are very nice.Best regards!
your video and speech is good. flooding is the most clear mistake you made and also kilometer is wrongly pronounced. but curious is right i know because i said it wrong in my video :D
Although there are some mistakes in pronounciation,I really liked your video;especially your intonation.Your photos also are very attractive.Thank you erdem:))
erdem congratulations!I like ur video and ur choice of music.It seems really interesting and it is the first time I have heard about that place.That u put a video as well as the pictures makes it enjoyable.However, I heard some pronunciation mistakes such as probably and kilometers.Also,you said it is name originaly comes from instead of its name.Nevertheless, good job :)
you could have spoken more lively ı think. your mispronounced words are probably,kilometer, protection. your pictures are well-chosen. ı liked your intonation
l think probably and kilometer was mispronouncued.speaking vividly would be better.very nice photos and very interesting place..thank u erdem
ReplyDeleteProbably, kilometer, meter, throughout, wonder seem to be mispronunced. You should pay attention to them. I think it is a good informative speech.
ReplyDeleteI like the way he speaks, his intonation was really really good.But unfortunately he mispronounced ''probably,flooding,magnificent''.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Your intonation is very good.it was really interesting but ı think'curious,probably,closely,meters,throughout' were mispronounced.generally ı liked it,it is really persuasive.
ReplyDelete"Because", "masterpiece" and "throughout" were pronuonced wrong. Except these, your video is fairly good. I liked your intonation. Good job, Erdem! ;)
ReplyDeleteHhehe. I tried to spell ''Throughout'' many times but I see now I did not manage. :) Thank you Friends for your feedbacks.
ReplyDeleteI think the words 'flood and kilometer' are mispronounced but your pronunciation is ok and also there is no problem with your intonation. The pictures are very attractive. I thank you too, Erdem...
ReplyDeleteKilometer,throughout,because are mispronounced words.Apart from these, your pronunciation is good and your speech is fluent.The photos are very nice.Best regards!
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good you have just a few pronunciation mistakes. generally it is good.
ReplyDeleteyour video and speech is good. flooding is the most clear mistake you made and also kilometer is wrongly pronounced. but curious is right i know because i said it wrong in my video :D
ReplyDeleteintonation is effective it has become good.
ReplyDeleteThe word is ''Floating.'' :)
ReplyDeleteI like your pronouncatıon,but 'flooding' is a great pronouncation mistake. Your intonation is generally good,but it can be better.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some mistakes in pronounciation,I really liked your video;especially your intonation.Your photos also are very attractive.Thank you erdem:))
ReplyDeletecurious,probably,closely,meters are pronounced wrongly but your intonation is really perfect.GOOD WORK:)
ReplyDeleteerdem congratulations!I like ur video and ur choice of music.It seems really interesting and it is the first time I have heard about that place.That u put a video as well as the pictures makes it enjoyable.However, I heard some pronunciation mistakes such as probably and kilometers.Also,you said it is name originaly comes from instead of its name.Nevertheless, good job :)
ReplyDeleteyour voice was too low ı could hardly hear your voice but your photos were effective.
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoken more lively ı think. your mispronounced words are probably,kilometer, protection. your pictures are well-chosen. ı liked your intonation
ReplyDeleteyou should speak more vividly to persuade us to go there but your place is really interesting...
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