your intonation is really very good your voice is audible the pictures of palace are marvelous there are some minor pronunciation errors but they are not very bothering
you pronounced welcome incorrectly(ı could not catch that you pronounced welcome incoorectly but gülşah said it to me)your voice was too low ı could not hear clearly.but your photos were effective and clear
your pictures are very good and you speak fluentlyy however you have some pronounciation mistakes such as welcome and period. welcome is very clear. your tone is soft which is a good point thanks vatoo :)) well done
In my opinion, you used your voice very good and your intonation is also good. Although I caught some minor mistakes, your general video is really good....
your intonation is really really good.ı could catch some mispronounced words such as period and welcome.however,your video was generally good .well done.
VEry good video! Everything was perfect.But ''ottoman and when you first used ''period'' was mispronounced. Anyway I loved your fluency of speech.Great job!
at the begining of the video, you said fascinating in a wrong way. it should be said as /fæsəneɪtɪŋ/.you shouldn't have said the sound of 'g' but your intonation is very good.your photos are actually great.
your intonation is really wonderful. in addition your voice is so clear that ı ccan understand what you said. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you pronounced wrongly some words such as period(00.43) and building.
Your intonation was the best I've listened to until now. It really doesnt bore. 'period, and modern' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyou use intonation effectively, and your pronounciation is generally good except some minor mistakes.good job,erdem.
ReplyDeleteı liked yr video very much. yr intonation and pronunciation is really good. voice is clear. ı could hear only one mistake.ottaman was said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently i liked the pictures and informations you gave. mediterranean is the only mistake i heard.
ReplyDeleteperiod is mispronounced. the rest is ok. congratulations body. :)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really very good your voice is audible the pictures of palace are marvelous there are some minor pronunciation errors but they are not very bothering
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced welcome incorrectly(ı could not catch that you pronounced welcome incoorectly but gülşah said it to me)your voice was too low ı could not hear clearly.but your photos were effective and clear
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are very good and you speak fluentlyy however you have some pronounciation mistakes such as welcome and period. welcome is very clear. your tone is soft which is a good point thanks vatoo :)) well done
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, you used your voice very good and your intonation is also good. Although I caught some minor mistakes, your general video is really good....
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really really good.ı could catch some mispronounced words such as period and welcome.however,your video was generally good .well done.
ReplyDeletegood work period should be pronounced as /pɪəriəd/ no other mistake could I catch. cong.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation and voice are really good. The pictures are attractive. It was well-prepared. Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeletegood pronunciation, good intonation, beautiful pictures. well done.
ReplyDeleteevrything is perfect except talking very fast :d
ReplyDeleteErdem, you have great job. Your intonation and intonation are very good. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteIt worths listening this video.Your pronunciation and intonation is really good.But as my friens said period is 3wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteYou're well-prepared.Intonation and pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeleteıt is well prepared video.i liked it and i couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake.everything is ok.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteIt is among the best videos i think. Ur pronunciation and intonation are great. Moreover, ur voice is very clear. Cong.
ReplyDeleteit is a well-prepared video. your intonation and pronunciation are good. a good job!
ReplyDeleteVEry good video! Everything was perfect.But ''ottoman and when you first used ''period'' was mispronounced. Anyway I loved your fluency of speech.Great job!
ReplyDeleteat the begining of the video, you said fascinating in a wrong way. it should be said as /fæsəneɪtɪŋ/.you shouldn't have said the sound of 'g' but your intonation is very good.your photos are actually great.
ReplyDeletegood choice, music, information, intonation and pronunciation
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really wonderful. in addition your voice is so clear that ı ccan understand what you said. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you pronounced wrongly some words such as period(00.43) and building.
ReplyDeleteI THİNK there is nothing to say because everythink is ok thanks erdem:)
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