the subject is very good but voice is trembled so it is understood easily.to make a better comment ıt should be recorded in a better way.pictures are good.
your should make end of your speech more clear i thnk. your pronounciationw as good on the whole no matter how dfficult it is for understanding :) modernization is the pronounciation mistake you made
your recorder must be changed for the second project. your voice come as a robot. however your intonation and fluency is good. ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes but it can be just because of the recorder. good work.
your recorder is so bad so ı couldnt catch some words but as far as ı can hear there is no pronounciation mistakes. your intonation is good and you speak fluently.
the subject is very good but voice is trembled so it is understood easily.to make a better comment ıt should be recorded in a better way.pictures are good.
ReplyDeletepronounciation is good but next time please use a different voice recorder. your pictures are very nice cong;)
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is a good one, but voice isn't audible.
ReplyDeleteyour should make end of your speech more clear i thnk. your pronounciationw as good on the whole no matter how dfficult it is for understanding :) modernization is the pronounciation mistake you made
ReplyDeleteYour speech and pronunciation is really good generally. You give the knowledge about the place effectively. Well done!
ReplyDeleteyour recorder must be changed for the second project. your voice come as a robot. however your intonation and fluency is good. ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes but it can be just because of the recorder. good work.
ReplyDeleteyour voice as if you were an hostess:) ı think you should change your voice recorder to make your speech clear.generally,i liked id.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteyour speech was fluent, but because of your voice recorder your voice wasn't audible enough. but in general your video was good...
ReplyDeleteAlthough your voice is not that audible,I liked your pronounciation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteit would have been better if you have used a good voice recorder and also without the stop you make unnecessarily. your pictures are well-choser.
ReplyDeleteEverthing is ok apart from your recorder. I liked your pronunciation and intonation.
ReplyDeletethere must be a problem wth ur recorder.l had difficulty in understnding u.but the intonatioın u used was ok..it was nice
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand your words clearly but as much as I catch in, your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteHer voice was not clear and it was hard to listen. But I guess she was speaking fluently..Good job!
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech maybe it results from the recorder .You were speaking fluently as far as I hear.Best regards!
ReplyDeleteyou have a good intonation and pronunciation. you speak fluently. you just change the recorder please. the rest is ok.
ReplyDeleteYour pronuncation is really good. However,your voice is not clear,so next time you should pay more attention
ReplyDeleteyour recorder is so bad so ı couldnt catch some words but as far as ı can hear there is no pronounciation mistakes. your intonation is good and you speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteyou should change your recorder immediately. ı couldnt understand sorry
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