I think the information about the place is satisfying. He gives enough information about the history of the tree,its physical features and why the tourists go there. But I don't think it is persuasive.I mean,this video is not attractive enough to catch the attention of the people.Moreover,there are some pronunciation mistakes.He pronounced the word ‘mountain’ wrong and he repeated it twice in the same way. It was the most disturbing mistake in the video.
he has a good voice pitch but somewhere he has to say "he was shocked" but he says "he shocked." and he pronounces the word "mountain" wrongly. however his way of explaining the topic is very good.
First of all,I think the video could be betterif he used music in it.He started well,but finished in a bad way.I think he shouldn't have used 'that's all' in the end.Instead of it,he could use a persuasive sentence to draw attention of the tourists.
you speaks english like arabic you have to pay attention to your tone. there are so many mispronounced wrods because of the stressings which is a result of your first languages being arabic ı think. in general intonation is bad and you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there. you can do your presantations more effective with musics.
you spoke a bit short.you should pay attention to the pronounciation of climb we dont say b while pronouncing it ,do we? and you should pay attention to the article- the-you generally didn t use the artical .ı think it could be better
there are pronunciation mistakes. for example, mountain, square and climb. in addition there are a lot of pauses. unfortunately, your intonation is bad.
Your video is too short because it starts late and ends early. the silence disturbs. You couldnt persuade me because your voice tone was a bit boring. You pronounce meter wrong.
I didn’t find this video effective. The speech is not fluent and there are so many pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,interested,eleven,meter etc. I think it could have been better if he paid much more attention.
pronouncing words in a correct way doesnt enough to make it fluent and your video is the evidence. i only heard that the pronounciation of "mountain" is wrong. but your speech was really short and you should have made us listen to a theme music instead of the silence. try to make your speech more fluent
it is long entrance and if you used a music it would not be noticed immediately.you did not use intonation effectively so it is not spersuasive and you have pauses which distract me.you pronounced the word climb, meter and mountain wrongly.it could be better.
''tree,last,mountain,climbing,shocked,tourists,survived'' these are the mispronounced words that ı could catch. Why did he speak words by words?? Not fluency but Nice try:)
In my opinion, he extended the beginning of the video and there are some wrong pronounced words such as eleven,mountain .Inspite of these,the photos were dgood and he tried to tell us his subject well.
your voice and intonation is good. But you say 'He shocked'(00:55) and this was wrong. You should have finished your presentatinon with a recommediation instead of saying 'that is all' Also there were unnecessary pauses.
aww mate :) your accent is just like an İtalian one's.. anyway, your speech is not fluent enough and ım sorry but i am not persuaded to visit there. at the end, "that's all !" sounds a lil bit weird mate. ı suppose that you could do it better :)
Gökhan you started to talk late in the video. why? :))There are some mistakes that you mispronunced wrongly.But your intonation is good and also I like the photos.
you started too late to talk but good again, I couldn't catch any mistake. you persuaded me to go there again, but you could have finished your speech in another way.
the pause at the beggining and your intonations irritates the listener. you should improve your intonation and pay attention next time. some mispronounced words like schoked, mountain, tree are irritating, but good job :D
your speech began a bit late. ı think you should not say 'r' sound so much in your speech. meter, square are the misprononunced words. but ıt ıs awell prepeared video
maybe frequency in your speech makes your video more attractive.and there are some unnecessary pause in the beginning of the start.but information about tree is very clear.
he is not fluent and there are a lot of mispronounced words. some of them monutain, turist, shocked and tree. If he add music, it may be funny.I am sorry it is boring...
you should put a music at the beginning and speak more fluently.. there are mispronounced words like mountain,shocked etc.. I had expected a much better video...
you don t speak fluently ın some parts of the speech.you pronounce some words such as mountain,meter wrongly. you say " he shocked" ı thşnk that is a wrong sentence you should have said "he was shocked or he got shocked" thanks
Firstly, you start to talk very late... you should talk or chose a background music. If you had a bacground music this would be a good prensentation. Also your speech is not a fluent one, but anyway I like your presentation. Thank you Gökhan!
Firstly, when I watched the video, I thought that he forgot to talk:). He started to speak very late. Also he says the word 'mountain' in wrong form.
ReplyDeletehis presentation is short. he starts to speak after 20 second.
ReplyDeleteI think the information about the place is satisfying. He gives enough information about the history of the tree,its physical features and why the tourists go there. But I don't think it is persuasive.I mean,this video is not attractive enough to catch the attention of the people.Moreover,there are some pronunciation mistakes.He pronounced the word ‘mountain’ wrong and he repeated it twice in the same way. It was the most disturbing mistake in the video.
ReplyDelete'mountain' and 'square' are pronunced wrong, additionally I caught some grammar mistakes, but generally the video is good.
ReplyDeletehe pronounces 'suare,meter' words wrongly. he starts to speak later without music.but he explains some photos one by one.so it is good.
ReplyDeletehe has a good voice pitch but somewhere he has to say "he was shocked" but he says "he shocked." and he pronounces the word "mountain" wrongly. however his way of explaining the topic is very good.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all,I think the video could be betterif he used music in it.He started well,but finished in a bad way.I think he shouldn't have used 'that's all' in the end.Instead of it,he could use a persuasive sentence to draw attention of the tourists.
ReplyDeleteyou speaks english like arabic you have to pay attention to your tone. there are so many mispronounced wrods because of the stressings which is a result of your first languages being arabic ı think. in general intonation is bad and you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there. you can do your presantations more effective with musics.
ReplyDeleteyou spoke a bit short.you should pay attention to the pronounciation of climb we dont say b while pronouncing it ,do we? and you should pay attention to the article- the-you generally didn t use the artical .ı think it could be better
ReplyDeleteSpeech is a bit disjointed. There are unnecessary pauses. Also, some pronunciation mistakes are made.
ReplyDeletethere are pronunciation mistakes. for example, mountain, square and climb. in addition there are a lot of pauses. unfortunately, your intonation is bad.
ReplyDeleteyour speech isnt fluent also mountain,mythological and eleventh are mispronounced.please check them one more time.
ReplyDeleteas it is mentioned above there are pronunciation mistakes however he intonated sentences correctly.
ReplyDeleteYour video is too short because it starts late and ends early. the silence disturbs. You couldnt persuade me because your voice tone was a bit boring. You pronounce meter wrong.
ReplyDeleteI didn’t find this video effective. The speech is not fluent and there are so many pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,interested,eleven,meter etc. I think it could have been better if he paid much more attention.
ReplyDeletepronouncing words in a correct way doesnt enough to make it fluent and your video is the evidence. i only heard that the pronounciation of "mountain" is wrong. but your speech was really short and you should have made us listen to a theme music instead of the silence. try to make your speech more fluent
ReplyDeleteyou started to speak a bit late mountain pronounced wrongly but your speech was in harmony with your speech
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes and i think you shouldn't have started your speech late in order to make the video long.
ReplyDeleteit is long entrance and if you used a music it would not be noticed immediately.you did not use intonation effectively so it is not spersuasive and you have pauses which distract me.you pronounced the word climb, meter and mountain wrongly.it could be better.
ReplyDelete''tree,last,mountain,climbing,shocked,tourists,survived'' these are the mispronounced words that ı could catch. Why did he speak words by words?? Not fluency but Nice try:)
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, he extended the beginning of the video and there are some wrong pronounced words such as eleven,mountain .Inspite of these,the photos were dgood and he tried to tell us his subject well.
ReplyDeleteyour voice and intonation is good. But you say 'He shocked'(00:55) and this was wrong. You should have finished your presentatinon with a recommediation instead of saying 'that is all' Also there were unnecessary pauses.
ReplyDeleteaww mate :) your accent is just like an İtalian one's.. anyway, your speech is not fluent enough and ım sorry but i am not persuaded to visit there. at the end, "that's all !" sounds a lil bit weird mate. ı suppose that you could do it better :)
ReplyDeletethere are pronunciatio mistakes such as mountain,stream. explaining some parts with photos makes it good but last part could be better.
ReplyDeleteI didn’t like the end of his presentation and He started to talk very late. He also pronunces the word 'mountain' wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour arabic dialect affects your english.Also there are some mispronounced words. I am really curios about that place.
ReplyDeleteGökhan you started to talk late in the video. why? :))There are some mistakes that you mispronunced wrongly.But your intonation is good and also I like the photos.
ReplyDeleteyou started too late to talk but good again, I couldn't catch any mistake. you persuaded me to go there again, but you could have finished your speech in another way.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but your informations about the place are enough so it is a well pepared presentation
ReplyDeletethe pause at the beggining and your intonations irritates the listener. you should improve your intonation and pay attention next time. some mispronounced words like schoked, mountain, tree are irritating, but good job :D
ReplyDeletethere was no intonation. he spoke very fast so his sayings sometimes weren't understood.
ReplyDeleteyour speech isnt very fluent Yet I like it generally.'mountain' is wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteyour speech began a bit late. ı think you should not say 'r' sound so much in your speech. meter, square are the misprononunced words. but ıt ıs awell prepeared video
ReplyDeletemaybe frequency in your speech makes your video more attractive.and there are some unnecessary pause in the beginning of the start.but information about tree is very clear.
ReplyDeletethere is a long pause at the beginning of the video and I think you should improve your intonation.you mispronounce the words''shocked,mountain''
ReplyDeleteThere are alot of pauses and pronounciation mistakes and maybe you could have started to speech earlier or you can add music at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteı cought a grammar mistake..not he shocked he was shocked....any way ı Am really wondering musa tree
ReplyDeletethere is no problem with intonation but the speech isn't fluent.
ReplyDeletewrongly pronounced words and lots of pauses make the presentation boring.
ReplyDeletehe is not fluent and there are a lot of mispronounced words. some of them monutain, turist, shocked and tree. If he add music, it may be funny.I am sorry it is boring...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Çiğdem and deepstroke that is Eyyüp.Also, climbing, eleventh are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyou should put a music at the beginning and speak more fluently.. there are mispronounced words like mountain,shocked etc.. I had expected a much better video...
ReplyDeleteyou don t speak fluently ın some parts of the speech.you pronounce some words such as mountain,meter wrongly. you say " he shocked" ı thşnk that is a wrong sentence you should have said "he was shocked or he got shocked" thanks
ReplyDeleteintonation is not bad I think but but you should care the pronounciation some more
ReplyDeletethe words^mythological and mountain' was pronounced wrongly. You should have paid more attention to intonation.
ReplyDeleteyou start talking very late;) but in general it is a good video
ReplyDeletemountain was pronounced wrongly. and the end you sid' and that is all' you mustn't say that. your voice and picures were good.
ReplyDeletemythological , eleven , meter were said wrongly . voice is clear. yhe effects used on the photos tires me .
ReplyDeletemountain and some words is pronounced wrongly. you sometimes have pauses.the words are understandable. you could pay attention to intonation
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words
ReplyDeleteyou can start to talk earlier or you can ask question instead of becoming silent.Apart from this in general I like video
ReplyDeleteat the beginning of the video there are some pausesand the speech isn'nt fluent
ReplyDeleteFirstly, you start to talk very late... you should talk or chose a background music. If you had a bacground music this would be a good prensentation. Also your speech is not a fluent one, but anyway I like your presentation. Thank you Gökhan!
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