well the questions are making me wonder.However, you could make this video perfect by using intonations and stresses. You mispronounce the words 'equipped, and interesting'.
"First Ahmet" is the wrong usage. Also, there is no intonation, you are speaking as if you are reading from somewhere else. You could be careful about these points.
I liked your introduction part and it is a good video in general. However, please pay attention to 'th' sound because it leads mispronunciation as it did in your video.
gökhan your video is good but you could have spoken more fluently and you could have cared about intonation. as to pronunciation mistakes, your mispronounced word which ı could catch is again
''muslim'' was mispronounced and first Amhet is not correct. It should have been Ahmet the first I think.The rest is ok. Better than your former video.Good job!
I think you should check the pronunciation of "mosque". it is mispronunciation.however you use intonation effectively. the speech is also fluent.in general, the video is well prepared.
well the questions are making me wonder.However, you could make this video perfect by using intonations and stresses. You mispronounce the words 'equipped, and interesting'.
ReplyDeleteinteresting is mispronounced. it could have been better if you had used music. generally it is good. congratulations.
ReplyDelete"First Ahmet" is the wrong usage. Also, there is no intonation, you are speaking as if you are reading from somewhere else. You could be careful about these points.
ReplyDeletei didnt hear any mistakes.informations u gave are good
ReplyDeleteyou prnounced the word construction wrongly.except this ı liked your video.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't catch any pronunciation errors ı liked it but you can use intonation more effectively.
ReplyDeleteUsing questions in the beginning of the project is a good way. Your intonation and voice tone are good. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI liked your introduction part and it is a good video in general. However, please pay attention to 'th' sound because it leads mispronunciation as it did in your video.
ReplyDeleteı didn't hear any significant mistake.your video is good but you can use music in your videogood job:)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video gökhan. There are minor pronunciation mistakes. generally it is a good one.
ReplyDeleteyou make a false usage ''first Ahmet'' you should have said ''Ahmet the first''...you r speking without intonation...
ReplyDeletefirst Ahmet :D
ReplyDeleteyou must intonate more carefully, i liked the video
the video lacks intonatin I think. you should intonate the sentences depending on their meanings. the rest (picture etc.) was goood, actually.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any mistakes.You video and photos were chosen attentively to me.
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. I like your photos. It is effective.But you mispronunce the word 'interesting'.
ReplyDeleteit is a good video but be careful about intonation...
ReplyDeletebeginning with some questions is effective.your video and the choice your photos are succesful.
ReplyDeleteHis video was good in general except for minor prononciation mistakes.If he had used the intonation the video would have been better.
ReplyDeleteIt is well prepared and ı liked your intonation,cong.:)
ReplyDeleteI agree with @hmet:) Good job! Dear my friend:)
ReplyDeletegökhan your video is good but you could have spoken more fluently and you could have cared about intonation. as to pronunciation mistakes, your mispronounced word which ı could catch is again
ReplyDeleteyour questions make me curious about your the rest of your video but your voice could be a bit high...
ReplyDelete''muslim'' was mispronounced and first Amhet is not correct. It should have been Ahmet the first I think.The rest is ok. Better than your former video.Good job!
ReplyDeletemaybe you could have used intonation more effectively, all in all I liked your video good job.
ReplyDeleteyou could your intonation and pronunciation more effective but good job. ı liked your video :D:D:D
ReplyDeleteabout intonation I agree with my friends but generally I like your voice
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounciations.Some of them are ' sultan,Muslim and decoration.Also,you could be more careful about intonation.
ReplyDeleteI think you should check the pronunciation of "mosque". it is mispronunciation.however you use intonation effectively. the speech is also fluent.in general, the video is well prepared.
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