it is a good video.there are some pronunciation mistakes like document.pictures are good the subject of the video is interesting.people will wonder here I think.
you stop too much at some place in vain some words are pronounced wrongly 'during. reflect...)the video is persuasive, interesting. pictures are well chosen
ı think you didn t watch my video really because ı definitely pronounce reflect and document correctly as ı have looked up their spelling and pronounciation before :)) thanks anyway
i know you tried to speak at the same time as your pictures but it made your speech too slow. a music would make the pauses less clear i thnk. i didnt hear any pronouncition mistakees u r veryy carefull =))
You speak too slowly. Your pronunciation is really good. I just heard you say 'flower' a bit weird but everything else is okay. This video really persuaded me and you werent boring. Well done!
document, reflect, flowers are some of the pronounciation mistakes. your intonation is well in general but there is unnecessary pauses. ı cannot say you spoke fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there unfortunately.
your intonation was good, but you pronounced some words wrongly. your pictures were in harmony with your speech. You persuade me and I liked your video.
l think there is no pronounciation mastake.and the photos are very nice.speaking a bit faster and persuasively would add another attractiveness on ur work.but,it is nice and good presantation.thank you gülşah
Your pronunciation is very good but in my opinion your intonation isn't. You should speak a bot more fluently so as not to cause your frinds to be bored.
it is a good video.there are some pronunciation mistakes like document.pictures are good the subject of the video is interesting.people will wonder here I think.
ReplyDeleteyou stop too much at some place in vain some words are pronounced wrongly 'during. reflect...)the video is persuasive, interesting. pictures are well chosen
ReplyDeleteı think you didn t watch my video really because ı definitely pronounce reflect and document correctly as ı have looked up their spelling and pronounciation before :)) thanks anyway
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is good. I caught all words you said but next time please speak faster good work cong;)
ReplyDeleteYour videoa nd pictures are in harmony. pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeletei know you tried to speak at the same time as your pictures but it made your speech too slow. a music would make the pauses less clear i thnk. i didnt hear any pronouncition mistakees u r veryy carefull =))
ReplyDeleteYou speak too slowly. Your pronunciation is really good. I just heard you say 'flower' a bit weird but everything else is okay. This video really persuaded me and you werent boring. Well done!
ReplyDeletedocument, reflect, flowers are some of the pronounciation mistakes. your intonation is well in general but there is unnecessary pauses. ı cannot say you spoke fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there unfortunately.
ReplyDeletei reaally liked your video.your pronounciation is very good,ı didn't hear any pronounciation mistake.well done:)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was good, but you pronounced some words wrongly. your pictures were in harmony with your speech. You persuade me and I liked your video.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonation are good but i think it'll be better if u speak a bit faster next time. :)
ReplyDeletel think there is no pronounciation mastake.and the photos are very nice.speaking a bit faster and persuasively would add another attractiveness on ur work.but,it is nice and good presantation.thank you gülşah
ReplyDeleteYou had better be faster next time..bec listeners get bored in slow speeches:(but i liked your pronuciation.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation is very good but in my opinion your intonation isn't. You should speak a bot more fluently so as not to cause your frinds to be bored.
ReplyDeleteIf she had spoken by using intonation it could have been better..'' document.flowers'' were mispronounced.Thanks..
ReplyDeleteYou are speaking slowly.In the next time,please speak a bit faster.Your speech is clear.There are hardly any pronunciation mistakes.thanks......
ReplyDeleteI could not catch any pronunciation mistake. just more intonation please and add music please. the rest is great.
ReplyDeleteYou could have talked faster,but I like your video and your pronuncation generally.
ReplyDeleteı think you speak so slowly so it is boring. you should care about intonation. ı couldnt catch pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou should speak a bit fast. intonation is important for a persuasive speech.watch out it
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