first of everyone I have wanted to post a comment.there are some pronunciation mistakes and saying kafe is a big mistake, but I have not enough time to edit it.my voice is not good because of our recorder.I hope you like it.
College's pronunciation is wrong. Your voice is very hoarse so I couldn't understand anything. There is no intonation and your voice is very very disturbing.
despite aalll difficulties i tried to understand your speech and managed on the whole. your speech lacks of intonation, which makes it a bit boring. two mistakes i heard in your pronounciation are: centimeter and building
you can start with atractive questions instead of hello to take attention. because of your recorder it is hard to understand sometimes what are you saying. your intonation and fluency must be improved. it didnt persuade me to go there.
your voice is not clear maybe you should change your voice recorder.also,you should use more intonation to draw attention and not to make us bored.'build' was told wrong as ı heard.
There is big problem with your recorder... Apert from this problem, you have a few pronounciation mistakes. I wish that you will make a good presentation considering these problems next week. Anyway I like it.
Tone of your voice is not clear and I did not like the beginning of your presentation, it could have been better and I am sure about that your next presentation will be better.
ı couldnt understand clearly because of your recorder. as far as ı ccan hear, there are a few pronounciaiton mistakes. they are enjoy,among,decorate,monument,built and building.
first of everyone I have wanted to post a comment.there are some pronunciation mistakes and saying kafe is a big mistake, but I have not enough time to edit it.my voice is not good because of our recorder.I hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteyou start with 'hello' it is not good for a introduction.some times i couldn't understand what you say. you could speak more lively and understandable
ReplyDeleteCollege's pronunciation is wrong. Your voice is very hoarse so I couldn't understand anything. There is no intonation and your voice is very very disturbing.
ReplyDeletenext time please use a different voice recorder so that we can catch your words easily .good luck;)
ReplyDeleteYour voice isn't audible. It could have been better.
ReplyDeletedespite aalll difficulties i tried to understand your speech and managed on the whole. your speech lacks of intonation, which makes it a bit boring. two mistakes i heard in your pronounciation are: centimeter and building
ReplyDeleteYour voice isnt that audible. You could have put intonations in use not to bore your listeners. You pronounce 'modern' wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou can start with atractive questions instead of hello to take attention. because of your recorder it is hard to understand sometimes what are you saying. your intonation and fluency must be improved. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not clear maybe you should change your voice recorder.also,you should use more intonation to draw attention and not to make us bored.'build' was told wrong as ı heard.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you can pay a bit more attention to your pronunciation and intonation next time and your voice is inaudible.
ReplyDeletespeaking vividly would be better.the next time u will do the better.good luck and thank you halil
ReplyDeletemy dear mate, ı think you are a bit slow like me:( next time if you pay attention to this, ı hope it wil be better..
ReplyDeleteThere is big problem with your recorder... Apert from this problem, you have a few pronounciation mistakes. I wish that you will make a good presentation considering these problems next week. Anyway I like it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Halil!
build:[bɪld],college were mispronounced and the video recorder was really bad that ı could hardly listened..It would be better,nice try..
ReplyDeleteI think the recorder is problematic.I didn't understand your speech sometimes.The next time, you should be made a better presentation.Best regards!
ReplyDeleteyou already detected your msitakes. there is nothing to say. you can do better for the next one.
ReplyDeleteTone of your voice is not clear and I did not like the beginning of your presentation, it could have been better and I am sure about that your next presentation will be better.
ReplyDeleteı couldnt understand clearly because of your recorder. as far as ı ccan hear, there are a few pronounciaiton mistakes. they are enjoy,among,decorate,monument,built and building.
ReplyDeleteit isnot audible because of ur recorder as you said.you should pay attetion to intonation and you have a lot of pronounciation mistakes.
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