it is short but it is good I think.there are some pronunciation mistakes.the word ortodoks captured my attention. may be it is said in different noyt like Turkish.
actually your video is very simple, you should start it by imforming us about your speech's theme,and a colorful voice would also b better. i think " enterance and original" are the words you said wrongly.
you could have prepared this video better. It is short and wasnt effective and you dont give much importance to the intonations. Entrance is mispronounced.
it is too short when it compared with the other videos. but you intonation is good and your speach is fluent. however there are some pronounciation mistakes like enterance and original. all in all it persuaded me to go there.
I think intonation is lack in your video and you should improve it.your speech could be more fluent,as well.maybe you can add music while starting and finishing so video doesn't start and finish suddenly.apart from 'original',ı didnt hear another pronunciation mistake.
your video is too short. your photos are good but ı think you could have spoken more fluently. as to your prnounciation mistakes, two of mispronounced words are eartquake and permission.
it is short but it is good I think.there are some pronunciation mistakes.the word ortodoks captured my attention. may be it is said in different noyt like Turkish.
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ReplyDeleteOrtodoks is pronounced wrong. Also, your speech is as if you are reading from a paper. Fluency is the anothr lack of this video.
ReplyDeleteapart from some minor mistakes , I liked your video cong;)
ReplyDeleteI think you talk very fast. Also there are some pronunciation mistakes. ın general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteactually your video is very simple, you should start it by imforming us about your speech's theme,and a colorful voice would also b better. i think " enterance and original" are the words you said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou could have prepared this video better. It is short and wasnt effective and you dont give much importance to the intonations. Entrance is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteit is too short when it compared with the other videos. but you intonation is good and your speach is fluent. however there are some pronounciation mistakes like enterance and original. all in all it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteI think intonation is lack in your video and you should improve it.your speech could be more fluent,as well.maybe you can add music while starting and finishing so video doesn't start and finish suddenly.apart from 'original',ı didnt hear another pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too high.apart from the shortness of the video and a few mistakes your intonation is good.You could have done better.
ReplyDeletethe video hasn't got an introduction and ending part.Moreover,it is too short.
ReplyDeletefloors was misprnouncued l think.it was a nice video and it could be better...
ReplyDeleteExcept some mispronunciations, I think it is good.Next time,you had better add music to draw attention and not to bore
ReplyDeleteThe video is short and '' christianity,entrance,icon'' were mispronounced. In addition the pronounciation of '' orthodox'' was completely wrong.
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech completely but there are some pronunciation mistakes and your speech is too short.
ReplyDeleteit is a short video. beginning and end are sharp. a few pronunciation mistakes. you could have done better. I hope you do better for the next one.
ReplyDeleteYour video could have been longer,because it is too short. You should have paid attention to intonation of words more
ReplyDeleteI think the words 'christianity ,ortodoks and originality'are mispronounced. I think,she should be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteyour video is too short. your photos are good but ı think you could have spoken more fluently. as to your prnounciation mistakes, two of mispronounced words are eartquake and permission.
ReplyDeleteit is too short and you made me sleep. Fluency is an important part of a speech. watch out it.
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