Your presentation was well prepared but it bored me while watching and actually couldnt persuade me to go there. 'bazaar' is mispronounced nearly everywhere.
your intonation is good but your voice is a bit irritating. your pronounciaion is generally good but bazaar mispronounced.your music is good and well prepared video.
ı think it is a good video and your pictures are very good your voice is not irritating it is convincing ı liked it cong. "bazaar" is wrong pronounced.
It is not a boring place I think. It is one of the most attractive places of İstanbul, if you love history. I liked pictures very much. It is a good presentation I think.
I think your presentation is perfect. I liked it very much. Your voice, intonation, pronunciation, music and pictures are all harmony with each other. I liked it.
I think your music ,intonation ,pronounciation were really good but I don't understand people who say that you mispronounced 'bazaar'.they should look at this word from the dictionary.Every thing was okey.
firstly,what ı want to say is that your music is really irritating. in some parts, it is so loud that it was hard to hear you.you could have used a better music. as to your pronunciation and intonation, they are generally good. especially ı liked your intonation. however, you have some mistakes such as era and bazaar in some parts.
I liked your photos and music.you have an understandable speech, it is fluent. intonation is used carefully. ıthink bazaar is pronounced rightly. however I can't hear a pronunciation mistake.
Your presentation was well prepared but it bored me while watching and actually couldnt persuade me to go there. 'bazaar' is mispronounced nearly everywhere.
ReplyDeletebazaar is mispronounced. please pay attention to it because there many bazaar words. photos and music were good. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteThe background music is a bit irritating. Your pronunciation and intonaition are good. Yet, you mispronounced "section" wrong. Cong. =)
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced "jewelry" wrongly. i didnt hear any other mistakes
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but your voice is a bit irritating. your pronounciaion is generally good but bazaar mispronounced.your music is good and well prepared video.
ReplyDeleteı think it is a good video and your pictures are very good your voice is not irritating it is convincing ı liked it cong. "bazaar" is wrong pronounced.
ReplyDeletealthough it is a bit bored me, it is a good presentation in generall cong.
ReplyDeleteIt is not a boring place I think. It is one of the most attractive places of İstanbul, if you love history. I liked pictures very much. It is a good presentation I think.
ReplyDeleteThe pics you've chosen are nice. Apart from a few pronunciation mistakes, it is good in general.
ReplyDeletesorry,but it is a bit boring.'bazaar and jewelry' were mispronounced.ı liked your intonation.well done:)
ReplyDeleteI wish you had spoken more effectively and attractively. Apart from this problem it is one of the good presentation.Thank you Hilal!
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation is perfect. I liked it very much. Your voice, intonation, pronunciation, music and pictures are all harmony with each other. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonaition are good...
ReplyDeletethere are few mispronounced words such as 'bazaar and jewelry' in general well-done
Ypur intonation and pronunciation is very good to me.As my firends said bazarr is wrongly pronunced word.
ReplyDeleteThere is a problem with record because her voice echoes but her intonation is good, pictures are intresting...
ReplyDeleteBazaar is wrongly pronunced word. But intonation is good.
ReplyDeletewithout the problem with record,I am sure İt would be perfect.I liked your intonation and lively voice.I think 'bazaar' is mispronunced.
ReplyDeleteI think your music ,intonation ,pronounciation were really good but I don't understand people who say that you mispronounced 'bazaar'.they should look at this word from the dictionary.Every thing was okey.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and intonation is really good it is a good presentation
ReplyDeletethere is a problem wth your voice tone. generally well prepared.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and speech.good job,cong.
ReplyDeletefirstly,what ı want to say is that your music is really irritating. in some parts, it is so loud that it was hard to hear you.you could have used a better music. as to your pronunciation and intonation, they are generally good. especially ı liked your intonation. however, you have some mistakes such as era and bazaar in some parts.
ReplyDeleteIn every respect, it is well prepared video.Best regards! hilal :):)
ReplyDeleteI think the music isnot a good choice.you should study the pronounciation of bazaar. video is not bad in general.
ReplyDeleteIt's well-prepared but ''bazaar'' was mispronounced. And actually ı didn' like your music at all.Good!
ReplyDeletethe word "bazaar" is pronounced as [bə'zɑ:r]. I advise you that you should look its pronunciation.
ReplyDeletebazaar, constructed, repaired, section are mispronounced. and music choice is not good
ReplyDeleteyour music isn't suitable ı think and you could pay attention to your intonations but photo and pronunciation are good
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good but you should give more importance to intonation thaks hilal:)
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is good ,but there are some unnecessary pauses.However,ın general it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteI liked your photos and music.you have an understandable speech, it is fluent. intonation is used carefully. ıthink bazaar is pronounced rightly. however I can't hear a pronunciation mistake.
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