your voice level is too low. there are some pronounciation mistakes. intonation isnt good in general. it lacks of fluency. unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
your photographs and the music are in a harmony. ı liked your music. it is a good job but there are some mispronounced words such as constuction, deliberately, monument.
I think video is organized well, but there are some pronounciation mistakes. For example, you should pronounce position and original with "ə" instead of "o"
the harmony of music and your voice is good but it is a bit low. i liked your speech at the begining but bored towards the end.and you pronounced "thought, persian" wrongly.
Your voice isnt low for me so I liked your video because I understood all of it. You could have paid more attention to the intonations. Helicopter is pronounced wrong.
Unfortunately your presentation is not too good because in my opinion, you didn't pay much attention to intonation and to your pronunciation. I hope your next video will be a better one.
ı couldn't hear what you were saying so ı could not evaulate your sentences rightly.you should pay attention to your intonation.yes the pictures are good but it is not persuasive completely and could be better.
Really impressed. Kadir ı think you should always speak English:) I loved you harmony with music,photos and your fluency but you should pay attention to your pronounciation more.Very good:)
I couldnt be persuaded mate. maybe its bec of your voice's volume is too low to understand wat you are saying and to get impressed by. so all ı can say is your photos are good and i suppose it could be better :)
if you had paid attention to intonation and spoken abit faster and lively,it could be better.the photos are attracting. by the way there were some mispronounced words anyway ı liked it in general and ı want to go there some day.
I liked it but your voice is low.I think there is no intonation and some pronounciation mistakes.your music are in harmonious with your photos. ıt persuaded me to go to nemrut mountain.
your voice pitch is really low. and sometimes I couldn't catch what you were saying but in respect of music and picrtures it is convincing to go there I think
I liked your photos.Music is also perfect,it is so sensational but you must pay attention to the intonation because you are speaking with the same tone.
the photos are attractive enough to go there.the tone of your speech could be done better.youl pay attantion to intonation a bit more.it was good and nice
It is a well organized video.Your voice is a bit low maybe it results from the recorder.There are some pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,deliberately.I liked the music you chose.Best regards:)
your voice is too low to analyze your words in detailed way. Persian and turist are said wrong.Intonation should be more effective but your photos are excellent!
Some words such as mountain and persian were pronounced mistakenly.Despite the fact that his speech was too slow to hear for me,the photos that were harmonious with music were really attractive. Thanks.
His voice is too low.There are some unnecessary pauses and his speech is too smooth.On the other hand the pictures are realy interesting and in harmony with the music
You should talk more attractive, because your voice tone make me think as if it was a tragic story... But this is not just because of your voive but also the music you used for background. Except for this the video is very good. Thank you Kadir!
your voice level is too low. there are some pronounciation mistakes. intonation isnt good in general. it lacks of fluency. unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletemountain was pronounced wrongly. his intonation is not good but I liked the music and photo harmony.it has a sudden ending.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low for me to get in your words. Therefore, I can't comment on your video. Sorry.
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ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low for me to get in your words. Therefore, I can't comment on your video. Sorry.
same in here :(
He has a smooth tone of voice but I can't say it is persuasive enough.
ReplyDeleteyour photographs and the music are in a harmony. ı liked your music. it is a good job but there are some mispronounced words such as constuction, deliberately, monument.
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good presentation but his voice is very low. Also the word 'maintain' is pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteI think video is organized well, but there are some pronounciation mistakes. For example, you should pronounce position and original with "ə" instead of "o"
ReplyDeletethe harmony of music and your voice is good but it is a bit low. i liked your speech at the begining but bored towards the end.and you pronounced "thought, persian" wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was too low ı coldn't understand what you meant but your photos were effective and persuasive
ReplyDeleteYour voice isnt low for me so I liked your video because I understood all of it. You could have paid more attention to the intonations. Helicopter is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteintonation is not good and because of the music and your voice tone your video seems a bit boring. generally, it is well organized.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately your presentation is not too good because in my opinion, you didn't pay much attention to intonation and to your pronunciation. I hope your next video will be a better one.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't hear what you were saying so ı could not evaulate your sentences rightly.you should pay attention to your intonation.yes the pictures are good but it is not persuasive completely and could be better.
ReplyDeleteReally impressed. Kadir ı think you should always speak English:) I loved you harmony with music,photos and your fluency but you should pay attention to your pronounciation more.Very good:)
ReplyDeletehe hasn't persuasive intonation, but he has a fluent speech.his video is also good,yet it could be better.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is not good enough, but your speech is fluent. Also, your voice is too low. The photos are good.
ReplyDeleteI couldnt be persuaded mate. maybe its bec of your voice's volume is too low to understand wat you are saying and to get impressed by. so all ı can say is your photos are good and i suppose it could be better :)
ReplyDeleteif you had paid attention to intonation and spoken abit faster and lively,it could be better.the photos are attracting. by the way there were some mispronounced words anyway ı liked it in general and ı want to go there some day.
ReplyDeleteI liked it but your voice is low.I think there is no intonation and some pronounciation mistakes.your music are in harmonious with your photos. ıt persuaded me to go to nemrut mountain.
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is really low. and sometimes I couldn't catch what you were saying but in respect of music and picrtures it is convincing to go there I think
ReplyDeleteı couldn t hear clearly but ı heard the word mountain pronounced wrongly. the musıc and the photos are harmonius with eachother ıt is good in general
ReplyDeleteoh, my friend you can raise your voice up in the movie maker: right click on your voice and select the volume that's all I can't hear you
ReplyDeleteIt is not persuasive much. maybe, your voice is low to understand. but generally you present us a great variety of information..
ReplyDeleteYour voice can not be heard kadir. I couldn not understand sorry. BUt I Like your photos.
ReplyDeletealthough your voice is low your photos and music are harmonious so it is a well organised video
ReplyDeleteyour voice, music and speech are harmonies I think. only you should pay attention your pronouncation :D I liked it
ReplyDeletewell done apart from some pronounciation mistakes. the speech is fluent good job.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is slow.I can't hear exactly.But I have learned o lot of information thank to your presentation.And your photos are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteHe could have talk more fluently. And his voice was not loud enough. I realized that he didn't pay attention to pronouncation.
ReplyDeleteif his speech had been higher, his presentation would have been better. the photos of his presentation are very attractive.
ReplyDeleteyou should speak in a more vivid way.
ReplyDeleteI think a bit higher voice gives attractive to your video.but your work is well-organized.and apart from some mistakes in pronouncation I liked it.
ReplyDeleteyour tone could be higher.. with your photos I think the video is well done and attractive..
ReplyDeleteI liked your photos.Music is also perfect,it is so sensational but you must pay attention to the intonation because you are speaking with the same tone.
ReplyDeletethe photos are attractive enough to go there.the tone of your speech could be done better.youl pay attantion to intonation a bit more.it was good and nice
ReplyDeleteIt is a well organized video.Your voice is a bit low maybe it results from the recorder.There are some pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,deliberately.I liked the music you chose.Best regards:)
ReplyDeletethe music is perfect. I became sad and I cried :) the pictures are also good. there is no problem with intonation...
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low to analyze your words in detailed way. Persian and turist are said wrong.Intonation should be more effective but your photos are excellent!
ReplyDeleteIf you pay attention to pronounciation you will be great. You were fluent and I liked the photos so much.
ReplyDeleteSome words such as mountain and persian were pronounced mistakenly.Despite the fact that his speech was too slow to hear for me,the photos that were harmonious with music were really attractive. Thanks.
ReplyDeletewhat the video mainly needs is a louder tone and a livelier speech.. your pictures and music are charming.. try to be more persuasive mate!
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good presentation but your voice is very low. In addition to this, the word 'maintain' is pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeletealthough the voice is low, intonation is not bad as ı could hear,pictures and music are in harmony,ı liked it;)
ReplyDeleteHis voice is too low.There are some unnecessary pauses and his speech is too smooth.On the other hand the pictures are realy interesting and in harmony with the music
ReplyDeleteI think your speech a bit smooth for this reason you should give the sense to listener with vivid intonation.Thanks
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluent but your voice is too low I liked the whole pictures and the music are in harmony congratulations
ReplyDeleteit was a good work except low voice. you spek fluent and your intonation is perfect
ReplyDeletedeliberately, beauty were said wrongly.it lacks of fluency.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is very low I couldn't catch some parts. However your presentation is good. You persuaded me to go there.Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low, the intonation is good I think , the photos are marvellous:)
ReplyDeleteYou should talk more attractive, because your voice tone make me think as if it was a tragic story... But this is not just because of your voive but also the music you used for background. Except for this the video is very good. Thank you Kadir!
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