there is no intonation and tells slowly. I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake. there is no music while she is speaking. If she uses music,it could be better.
kilometer, history, spreading, christianity are pronounced wrongly. intonation must be improved. you speaks fluently but it sounds me like you are reading from paper. it didnt persuade me to go there.
there are some words pronounced wrong such as christianity,channel and she speaks rather slow and didn t pay attention to intonation.but the pictures are quite attracting
you could have spoken more fluently. your intonation should be improved. there are a few pronunciation mistakes for example christianity and spreading.
You couldnt persuade me and your voice is flat you could have used intonations to make your speech enjoyable. I couldnt catch any pronunciation mistake.
you could give moore importance to your intonation instead of speaking in a stable tone. some mistakes i heard are "christianity,catholic,documentary,mediterranean"
why didn't you use more charming photos??and you should improve your intonation.also you pronounced the words documentary and catholic wrongly, except these words ı liked your pronounciation.it is a persuasive one but could be better with music.
With better photos and by speaking more lively this video would be great. Because of the fact that she is speaking too slow,there should have been a music. There are almost no mispronounciation.
I did not find any word pronuenced wrong, but your voice was the same during the presentation and you should have used your intonation well. The photos are good. You had pauses while saying this sentence:every year many tourists come to....(3:00)
your speech is stable and "christianity" is pronounced incorrectly. you should pay more attention to your intonation mate, cuz at some parts its as if that you are reading,ı think. thnx.
History,christianity,christian,channel,mediterranean are wrongly pronounced.You should be said Jarusalem instead of Kudüs. Kudüs is turkish,my dear friend.The photos are compatible with your speech.It is given detailed information about the place.Your intonation could be better.Best regards:)
ın some parts of the video you paused unnecessarily and you should your intonations instead of speaking slowly. apart from these, the video is effective.
I think her photos are not enough. Her pronouncation is good, but her tone of voice should have changed in some parts of her speech, because it was monotonoous.
You could have talked more vividly.Christianity was mispronounced and your voice is a bit hoarse so I couldn't catch many of the sentences.Maybe you can also add music.
christian, church, catholic, history and kilometer should have been pronounced in correct way. I think you should improve intonation and your voice could have been a bit louder to convince.
you speak too slowly ıt could be better ıf you could speak a bit enthusiastically. you should pay attention to intonation ı liked your effects thanks for your work
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ReplyDeleteI think there isn't pronunciation in her presentation.
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ReplyDeletethere is no intonation and tells slowly. I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake. there is no music while she is speaking. If she uses music,it could be better.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good and I think your intonation is good too. you only need better pictures.
ReplyDeletechannel is wrongly pronounced. she prepared the photos of her presentation well.
ReplyDeletekilometer, history, spreading, christianity are pronounced wrongly. intonation must be improved. you speaks fluently but it sounds me like you are reading from paper. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteher speech is good,but she could speak more lively. I couldn't catch any wrong pronunciation in the video.
ReplyDeleteher pronunciation and intonation are ok but she could speak lively.
ReplyDeletethere are some words pronounced wrong such as christianity,channel and she speaks rather slow and didn t pay attention to intonation.but the pictures are quite attracting
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes. Your intonation should be improved. Also you should speak lively to attract our attention.
ReplyDelete'cristianity' and 'continued' were not pronounced correctly but intonation is good and the speech is fluent
ReplyDeleteit couldhave been more effective if you had used intonation and pronounciation better
ReplyDeleteHer speech is not that effective and persuasive.She should improve her intonation.
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoken more fluently. your intonation should be improved. there are a few pronunciation mistakes for example christianity and spreading.
ReplyDeleteYou couldnt persuade me and your voice is flat you could have used intonations to make your speech enjoyable. I couldnt catch any pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteyou could give moore importance to your intonation instead of speaking in a stable tone. some mistakes i heard are "christianity,catholic,documentary,mediterranean"
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was not good enough your photos and pronouncation were good and your speech was persuasive
ReplyDeletewhy didn't you use more charming photos??and you should improve your intonation.also you pronounced the words documentary and catholic wrongly, except these words ı liked your pronounciation.it is a persuasive one but could be better with music.
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ReplyDeleteWith better photos and by speaking more lively this video would be great. Because of the fact that she is speaking too slow,there should have been a music. There are almost no mispronounciation.
ReplyDeleteshe has a few pronunciation (history) mistakes but generally it is good.maybe she can give more importance to her intonation.
ReplyDeleteI did not find any word pronuenced wrong, but your voice was the same during the presentation and you should have used your intonation well. The photos are good. You had pauses while saying this sentence:every year many tourists come to....(3:00)
ReplyDeleteyour speech is stable and "christianity" is pronounced incorrectly. you should pay more attention to your intonation mate, cuz at some parts its as if that you are reading,ı think. thnx.
ReplyDeleteHer intonation didn't influence me in a positive way.And she pronounced some words such as 'convert ,catholic' mistakenly.
ReplyDeleteHistory,christianity,christian,channel,mediterranean are wrongly pronounced.You should be said Jarusalem instead of Kudüs. Kudüs is turkish,my dear friend.The photos are compatible with your speech.It is given detailed information about the place.Your intonation could be better.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteYou should have paid more attention to the intonation.in general video is nice.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently but there are some pronunciation mistakes in your speech and the music synchronizes with your voice but it is a good one.
ReplyDeleteChristianity should be pronounced as /krɪstiænəti/ not /krɪstianəti/ and you should make some intonations
ReplyDeleteExcept intonation, your speech and the photos are great.Well-prepared :))
ReplyDeleteapart from some pronounciation mistakes I think it is a good video. well done.
ReplyDeletethere are some problems about intonation and pronounciaion but your explanations are good and in general it is a good video
ReplyDeleteın some parts of the video you paused unnecessarily and you should your intonations instead of speaking slowly. apart from these, the video is effective.
ReplyDeleteI like your pronunciation and intonation.If only you spoke much more lively.But it is a well prepared job.
ReplyDeleteI think her photos are not enough. Her pronouncation is good, but her tone of voice should have changed in some parts of her speech, because it was monotonoous.
ReplyDeletechristianity, history, kilometer is said incorretly. you could have musıc at the begınnıng
ReplyDeleteapart from some mistakes in your pronuncation,I liked your perpormancE very much.
ReplyDeletechristiaity and hitory sr pronounced wrong. please pay attention the intonation..But ı lıked it
ReplyDeleteYou could have talked more vividly.Christianity was mispronounced and your voice is a bit hoarse so I couldn't catch many of the sentences.Maybe you can also add music.
ReplyDelete'catholic and christian' are mispronounced. the intonation is ok and the pictures are interesting...
ReplyDeletechristian, church, catholic, history and kilometer should have been pronounced in correct way. I think you should improve intonation and your voice could have been a bit louder to convince.
ReplyDeleteControversely to most of us, you have a good intonation but there are mispronounced words. If your voice was louder it would be better.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation and I intonation is good... you could have chosen better photos..
ReplyDeleteI think you shoul speak fluently. also please correct celebrate and great.
ReplyDeleteyou speak too slowly ıt could be better ıf you could speak a bit enthusiastically. you should pay attention to intonation ı liked your effects thanks for your work
ReplyDeletethe pronounciation is good but channel,intonation should be more lively,the rest is ok:)
ReplyDeleteThe tonation should be more lively.The words 'christianity and catholic' are said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation should be more vivid ,in this way you can draw attention.good work
ReplyDeleteI liked the video and your voice. Despite some minor mistakes this is a good work:) cong.
ReplyDeletechristianity and channel were pronounced wrongly. but your intonation was good. it is good work in generl
ReplyDeletethere were some mispronounced words.However, her video was good.
ReplyDeleteorthodox and catholic were said wrongly. generally it ok
ReplyDeleteyour photos are good but I think you should pay attention to the intonations
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and christianity is wrong pronouncation she could'nt persuade me the intonation could be good.
ReplyDeletespeaking lively would add more on your presantion.there were nice photos.it could be better with an attractive and persuasive speech.
ReplyDeleteEverything is very good, but you should be more attractive and lively... With this, it would be better. Anyway, I like it. Thank you Kısmet!
ReplyDeleteıf you present more lively,it would be much better.but in generally it is nice.
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