your speech and the video are well, but some part of the video there are unnecessary pause and I think you could make a different beginning. I couldn't find any mistaken words.
your intonation is good but at some parts you increase your voice pitch unnecessarily.also ı could not understand some sentences because you have pauses.this prevents your presentation running.your photos good but music is not suitable in my opinion.you also pronuonced the word restored wrongly.you could do better.
legend, ancient, princess are wrongly pronounced. his speach is fluent. intonation is good but ı feel like im in a history lesson. it didnt persuade me to go there.
Your intonation has had a big effect on me. It has made me watch your video willingly and without getting bored. You give interesting informations and I couldnt find any pronunciation mistakes so I think this video is one of the best ones. I have been persuaded.
a little thing you better to do is just a bit more mentioning about the place. :)you just kept me watch it without a breath. that was all good. fantastic !
ı understood you clearly. your intonation is good but there is some unnecesarry pause in this way, ı couldnt catch some sentences. and then you mispronuounced the word legend.
your presentation is good in general, but in my opinion you gave too much information about Şahmaran hamam. ın contrast you speak fluently, and I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake.
you speak fluently and your intonation and pronounciation is really good ı couldn t catch any mispronounced word.you gave us general information and the legend of şahmeran hamam in a clear way.a good video.
your speech is very clear.except for the pauses,it is a great video.I couldn't hear any pronunciation mistake and also intonation is very good.however,you can add music at the beginning.Good job ;)cong.
you pause sometimes and this cause your speech not to be fluent but in respect of pronuncation it is a very good one. the music is suitable to your topic I think your choice of pictures are good too.
I don't agree the opinion that ''legend and ancient'' are mispronounced. Although there are pauses, it's quite well-prepared and charming video. The only mispronounced word is''princess'' but the rest of the video is brilliant. Fluency and intonation are ok. Great job!
You are giving some pauses unnecessarily and rectangular was said wrongly.Except these ones,your words are clear in general and there is no problem with the fluency.well done video.
restore, ancient rectangular are spelled wrong. Unnecessary pauses are irritating a bit. nearly Intonation is nearly good. At the beginning you may add music but it is understandable video.
I want to say that his intonation ,photos and music were very good .There were some pauses between the sentences in the video but ıt was perfect presentation.
you should get rid of those pauses in your speech.. your video is one of the most well-prepared videos in terms of clearness of the voice.. there are few pronunciation mistakes but not many.. the video is better than avarage actually, mate ! :)
you said ‘In tarsus, sahmeran is the historical legend.’ First it must be ‘ sahmeran is a’ and secondly sahmeran is not a historical legend only legend.lastly not only in tarsus in turkey.I wish you should have never wrote that sentence.you pronounced ‘accordingly’ and ‘ initially’ wrongly. Your video is about the hamam but almost the whole of video is about şahmeran and her story.
your speech and the video are well, but some part of the video there are unnecessary pause and I think you could make a different beginning. I couldn't find any mistaken words.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but at some parts you increase your voice pitch unnecessarily.also ı could not understand some sentences because you have pauses.this prevents your presentation running.your photos good but music is not suitable in my opinion.you also pronuonced the word restored wrongly.you could do better.
ReplyDeletelegend, ancient, princess are wrongly pronounced. his speach is fluent. intonation is good but ı feel like im in a history lesson. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation has had a big effect on me. It has made me watch your video willingly and without getting bored. You give interesting informations and I couldnt find any pronunciation mistakes so I think this video is one of the best ones. I have been persuaded.
ReplyDeletea little thing you better to do is just a bit more mentioning about the place. :)you just kept me watch it without a breath. that was all good. fantastic !
ReplyDeleteyou used pronunciation and intonation well. conratulations :) and your speech is fluent.
ReplyDeletethe speech is fluent and intonated correctly but in some parts of the video the music irritated me a lot. good job.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear and fluent. it is good in terms of intonations and pronounciations.
ReplyDeleteI think there is no problem with intonation or pronunciation. His voice is very clear. : )
ReplyDeleteı understood you clearly. your intonation is good but there is some unnecesarry pause in this way, ı couldnt catch some sentences. and then you mispronuounced the word legend.
ReplyDeleteHis intonation and pronunciation are very good. I think it is a perfect presentation.
ReplyDeletei couldnt catch any wrong pronounciation and liked it alott. the imformations in the video are really interesting and make a sensation on the listener
ReplyDeleteyour pronouncatıon and intonation were good it was a good presantation ı think
ReplyDeleteexcept some unnecessary stops and unnecessary intonations it is good.you could speak at a rattling style.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation,fluency and pics are very nice. I couldn't catch any mispronounced word. Well done video. Cong.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is good in general, but in my opinion you gave too much information about Şahmaran hamam. ın contrast you speak fluently, and I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and your intonation and pronounciation is really good ı couldn t catch any mispronounced word.you gave us general information and the legend of şahmeran hamam in a clear way.a good video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear.except for the pauses,it is a great video.I couldn't hear any pronunciation mistake and also intonation is very good.however,you can add music at the beginning.Good job ;)cong.
ReplyDeleteYour voice, intonation and pronunciation is perfect. There is nothing to say more.Well Done.....
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently ı liked your photos. you persuaded me to visit it. ı couldnt catch any pronounciation mistakes except for ancient :) congrulations
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation are well.but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as entrance,expose. however, in general, it is good.cong.
ReplyDeleteyou pause sometimes and this cause your speech not to be fluent but in respect of pronuncation it is a very good one. the music is suitable to your topic I think your choice of pictures are good too.
ReplyDeletepronunciation and intonations are good. I understand it,it is good speech.
ReplyDeleteIt is clear and understandable, but your stops time to time makes the video a bit boring
ReplyDeletethanks :))
apart from pronunciation mistakes such as legend, ancient, princess. your photos are in
ReplyDeleteharmony with your music.
good work but you should pronounce the word ancient as /eɪnʃənt/.
ReplyDeleteThere is no mistake in your pronunciation. Intonation is also good.Your speech is clear.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is very good and your photos and music are also wonderful but pauses in the video make it a bit boring
ReplyDeleteit is a good job but there are some wrong pauses and wrongly pronounciated words like 'ancient', 'princess', 'entrance', 'expose' and 'legend'.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonation is good.But there are some unnecessary pauses.2ancient' is wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteI don't agree the opinion that ''legend and ancient'' are mispronounced. Although there are pauses, it's quite well-prepared and charming video. The only mispronounced word is''princess'' but the rest of the video is brilliant. Fluency and intonation are ok. Great job!
ReplyDeleteı think common, ancient, entrance are misprononunced words. your video ended suddenly. that's all.
ReplyDelete'Restore' is wrongly pronounced. I liked his pronouncation. However, there are some unnecessary pauses.
ReplyDeletehis pronounciation and intonation is very good. the photos an the music of his presentation are also good. his presentation is attractive.
ReplyDeletelistener can follow the sentences one by one so this makes the speech clearly.you used the intonation and pronounciation truely.cong:)
ReplyDeletealthough there are some pauses, his video, intonation, pronounciation are very good.
ReplyDeletea clear speech..but the word princess disturbed my ears:)
ReplyDeleteYou are giving some pauses unnecessarily and rectangular was said wrongly.Except these ones,your words are clear in general and there is no problem with the fluency.well done video.
ReplyDeleterestore, ancient rectangular are spelled wrong. Unnecessary pauses are irritating a bit. nearly Intonation is nearly good. At the beginning you may add music but it is understandable video.
ReplyDeleteI want to say that his intonation ,photos and music were very good .There were some pauses between the sentences in the video but ıt was perfect presentation.
ReplyDeleteThe only serious problem is interruptions that you made sometimes. It would be better if some words would have been pronounced correctly.
ReplyDeleteyou should get rid of those pauses in your speech.. your video is one of the most well-prepared videos in terms of clearness of the voice.. there are few pronunciation mistakes but not many.. the video is better than avarage actually, mate ! :)
ReplyDeleteancient, princess and legend were mispronounced..in addition to that, there were some unnecessary pauses..
ReplyDeleteexcept of princess 's intonation and unnecessary pauses, intonation and pronounciation are good,well done :))
ReplyDeleteYou speak fluently and your intonation is impressive I could not any mistake.well done
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very understandable and your intonation is very good I am not bored while watching good work;)
ReplyDeletea clear voice and good intonation,but I think there are some unnecessary pauses.
ReplyDeleteyou said ‘In tarsus, sahmeran is the historical legend.’ First it must be ‘ sahmeran is a’ and secondly sahmeran is not a historical legend only legend.lastly not only in tarsus in turkey.I wish you should have never wrote that sentence.you pronounced ‘accordingly’ and ‘ initially’ wrongly. Your video is about the hamam but almost the whole of video is about şahmeran and her story.
ReplyDeletethere are some unnecessary pauses. generally it ok.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is very clear and fluent. Congratulations!
ReplyDeletethe intonation is good but princess is wrongly pronounced ther are unnecessary pauses but generally it is good:)
ReplyDeletethe word princess is wrongly spelled.there are some unnecessary pauses,you could be better ıf you pay attention to these,but it is ok.
ReplyDeleteI think there is a mistake with the first sentence. Şahmeran is not the legend but a legend. Your video is very good. Thank you Latif!
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