your intonation must be improved. sometimes ı feel like that you are speaking arabic. there are some pronounciation mistakes such as according to, tragic, prevend, becomes, castle, however, mediternian. you speaks like you are reading. it isnt fluent. it didnt persuade me to go there.
his speech is not very fluent.he says some words wrongly such as alternative,tragic..in addition,he has grammar mistake. however, generally, it is good.
he starts to present his speech slowly but then he can reach the normal level. his speech is natural but his speech is not fluent. and he doesn't have a good intonation his pictures and music is very good.
In my opinion, with more attention to intonation,his speech would be better and more fluent, but in this form it is already good.additionally, the word 'tragic' is pronounced wrong.
ı think it would be better if he had paid attention to intonation. he has some gramatical mistake such as- in there -his prononciation is generally good.
you are speaking fluently. your intonation and pronunciation is great. ı couldnt catch any mispronounced words. the music is in a harmony with your photographs:) congratulations. your job is wonderful..
I think your voice is flat. You have grammatical mistakes, I caught one 'after going her room...' and you pronounce hotel(1:55)wrong. except for these, your video was informative and enjoyable.
actually i thought that you tried not to read from somewhere but if you aimed that you should have studied it much more mehmet.you should also try to be more fluent and persuasive. some mistakes i heard are "hotel,jewelry(3:07),taxi.
you should pay attention to your intonation.your photos are charming.and ı liked your presentation too much everything is in order. however you mispronounced the word hotel wrogly, except this you have a good pronounciation skill.
He is good at pronounciation except for ''history and hotel''.There are unnecessary pauses and the music bears down his voice at the 2nd part of the video, however it's quite good..
your pronunciation is very good. but you makes an impression like u are reading. you should pay attention to your intonation , i guess mate. overall, its ok.
Firstly, I want to say that the story that he told us was very good.It was a good idea for him to tell such a story in the video.However,'eternity,fantastic' were pronounced wrongly.
your intonation might be better.There are some pronunciation mistakes.For example,mediterranean,jetski,jewelry but your speech is undertandable and natural I think,congratulations :)
you speak calmly in your video it is a contribut,on to your video's effectiveness. but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as '''eternity,fantastic,hotel'' in general it is a good video
although there are some pronouncation mistakes,I liked your intonation and information which you shared.I suggest that you add frequency in your speech.
the unnecessary pauses in your speech makes the video unnatural, you should improve your intonations. some parts of the video, the music beats your voice down. I think hotels, jewelry and mediterranean are mispronounced.
hotels,jewellery are words ı could find mispronounced. in general, ı found the video fine and good but you should not say ıhhh.. so much in your video. your pronounciation is effective except a few words
he is not fluent and in some parts of it he has some unnecessary pauses. Intonation is sometimes good but sometimes unnecessary.On the other hand, he persuaded me to visit there..it is good.
l couldn' catch so many mistakes except the misprnounciations of hotels an djewellery.and you have stopped at some parts it may have ben caused from exciting.in generall it was not great but it iwas good
I understood each word that you said.You really impress me with the story and your intonation also gives the sense of the what story tries to imply.Good job!
your speech is very good but there are some unnecessary pauses.this is distracting. alternative/ɑːlˈtɝː.nə.t ̬ɪv/ was said wrongly except this, yr pronounciation is good.
You dont need to say ''Named'' at the beginning of the video... You should not make us aware of your reading the text...There are a few ''Eaıı'' at the begging of the sentences. Anyway, your pronunciaton is good and I like your video. Thank you Mehmet!
his voice is audible and his presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteHis presentation is good but he uses some photos twice.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation must be improved. sometimes ı feel like that you are speaking arabic. there are some pronounciation mistakes such as according to, tragic, prevend, becomes, castle, however, mediternian. you speaks like you are reading. it isnt fluent. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletehis speech is not very fluent.he says some words wrongly such as alternative,tragic..in addition,he has grammar mistake. however, generally, it is good.
ReplyDeletehe starts to present his speech slowly but then he can reach the normal level. his speech is natural but his speech is not fluent. and he doesn't have a good intonation his pictures and music is very good.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, with more attention to intonation,his speech would be better and more fluent, but in this form it is already good.additionally, the word 'tragic' is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteı think it would be better if he had paid attention to intonation. he has some gramatical mistake such as- in there -his prononciation is generally good.
ReplyDeleteFluency is deficiency of this video. Also intonation could be better. Yet your pronunciation is very good. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteintonation isnt good. it is not bad work.
ReplyDeleteI understand his words clearly. his pictures are attractive and he is natural.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking fluently. your intonation and pronunciation is great. ı couldnt catch any mispronounced words. the music is in a harmony with your photographs:) congratulations. your job is wonderful..
ReplyDeleteI think your voice is flat. You have grammatical mistakes, I caught one 'after going her room...' and you pronounce hotel(1:55)wrong. except for these, your video was informative and enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteactually i thought that you tried not to read from somewhere but if you aimed that you should have studied it much more mehmet.you should also try to be more fluent and persuasive. some mistakes i heard are "hotel,jewelry(3:07),taxi.
ReplyDeleteyour photos wre effective and clear and your speech was good too but intonation was not used in your speech if you had used it would had been better
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to your intonation.your photos are charming.and ı liked your presentation too much everything is in order. however you mispronounced the word hotel wrogly, except this you have a good pronounciation skill.
ReplyDeleteHe is good at pronounciation except for ''history and hotel''.There are unnecessary pauses and the music bears down his voice at the 2nd part of the video, however it's quite good..
ReplyDeleteThe information and the pics are nice and effective,but i think you should work on your intonation a bit more.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is very good. but you makes an impression like u are reading. you should pay attention to your intonation , i guess mate. overall, its ok.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I want to say that the story that he told us was very good.It was a good idea for him to tell such a story in the video.However,'eternity,fantastic' were pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation might be better.There are some pronunciation mistakes.For example,mediterranean,jetski,jewelry but your speech is undertandable and natural I think,congratulations :)
ReplyDeletepictures,music,speech are harmonious. some words are mispronounced but place is explained well.
ReplyDeleteyou speak calmly in your video it is a contribut,on to your video's effectiveness.
ReplyDeletebut there are some pronunciation mistakes such as '''eternity,fantastic,hotel'' in general it is a good video
but for some pronouncation mistakes( hotel, fantastic) it is good.Photos are really perfect.
ReplyDeletethanks :)
You must use your intonation in a more effective way. The words hotel andjewellery are mispronuenced
ReplyDeletein spite of some pronounciatin mistakes your explanations and photos are perfect so it is a well prepared video
ReplyDeletealthough there are some pronouncation mistakes,I liked your intonation and information which you shared.I suggest that you add frequency in your speech.
ReplyDeletethe unnecessary pauses in your speech makes the video unnatural, you should improve your intonations. some parts of the video, the music beats your voice down. I think hotels, jewelry and mediterranean are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good job. there are minor pronounciation mistakes but despite of them well done.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good presentation.Your photos and music in harmony.Yrt there is a slight pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeletehotels,jewellery are words ı could find mispronounced. in general, ı found the video fine and good but you should not say ıhhh.. so much in your video. your pronounciation is effective except a few words
ReplyDeleteHe should have talked more fluently. He speaks so monotonous. Pronouncation could have been better.
ReplyDeleteI like your video and intonation but I believe you can do better. Please check some words like hotel and alternative.
ReplyDeleteI liked your last words:) but there are mispronounced words such as 'hotels,beaches.princess.' and you must pay attention to the intonation much more.
ReplyDeletesome words were mispronounced. However, I liked his video, photos.his sayings were understood easily.
ReplyDeletehe is not fluent and in some parts of it he has some unnecessary pauses. Intonation is sometimes good but sometimes unnecessary.On the other hand, he persuaded me to visit there..it is good.
ReplyDeleteYou could have been more lively I think. It was a good presentation anyway.
ReplyDeletememo! all you need is to be a bit fluent in your speech.. your intonation is not bad...
ReplyDeletethere were some words which were misprounced such as hotels and jewellery.. your speech should have been more fluent..
ReplyDeletel couldn' catch so many mistakes except the misprnounciations of hotels an djewellery.and you have stopped at some parts it may have ben caused from exciting.in generall it was not great but it iwas good
ReplyDeleteı couldnt catch clear mistakes but you pause a lot while speaking and this is very irritating. ıt is good video anyway thanks
ReplyDeleteunnecessary pauses makes the intonation smooth
ReplyDeletebut the rest is great in terms of pronounciation,music and pictures
His voice is clear but there are some unnecessary pauses.I liked his photos and the music very much.He persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteI understood each word that you said.You really impress me with the story and your intonation also gives the sense of the what story tries to imply.Good job!
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very clear and I cauht all words you said. this is a nice video. congratulations;)
ReplyDeletethe starting sound is like the sound in atari games and of course not suitable.but the story is good and you narrated it very well.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very good but there are some unnecessary pauses.however your photos are very good
ReplyDeletethe photos and his pronouncation are good.However, ther are some grammar mistakes such as it id good.He speaks naturally.I can understand him clearly.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very good but there are some unnecessary pauses.this is distracting. alternative/ɑːlˈtɝː.nə.t ̬ɪv/ was said wrongly except this, yr pronounciation is good.
ReplyDeletethe pictures and the music is well done. ı liked the way his speaking style. despite misspelled words in generally it is good.
ReplyDeleteYou dont need to say ''Named'' at the beginning of the video... You should not make us aware of your reading the text...There are a few ''Eaıı'' at the begging of the sentences. Anyway, your pronunciaton is good and I like your video. Thank you Mehmet!
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