she speaks slowly and without intonation. her speach isnt fluent. ı fell like she is reading. there are some pronounciation mistakes. her voice is audible. however she didnt persuade me to go there.
ı want to ask a question.two people said there are some pronunciation mistakes but which words are they? why didnt you say them? you must say them.and other friends! thanks for your comments:)
You should pay more attention to the intonation, your voice was a bit flat but your speech was good in general. Sometimes you pronounced 'Hungarian' wrong but sometimes it was correct. /hʌŋˈgeə.ri.ən/ it should be like this. look at 1:35 for example.
your pronounciation is really well i couldn't catch any misspelled word except Turkish.you speak fluently and clearly.but you should improve your intonation a bit.ı liked your video.
ı felt as if you were reading it from somewhere. ı guess this is bec. of your intonation. from 2.00 to 2.30 you mispronounced the word "three" for 3 times however, you speak fluently and i liked the video.
There is not much pronounciation mistakes except for ''after and hungarien-mispronounced just once-'' The speech is not fluent enough,but it could be a good sample..
Firstly,there isn't any pronunciation mistakes apart from turkish and hungarian.That is, pronunciation is almost good but her voice might be higher.The music is compatible with the presentation.Best regards :)
the lack of fluency and intonation diminishes the effectiveness of your video and there are few mistakes in pronunciation but in general, I can regard it as a good one...
She doesn't pay attention to intonation. Meanwhile, it is easy to understand the sentences.Tone of her voice is clear but she could have talk a bit louder.
There are some mispronounced words such as'Byzantine and Turkish'.You are speaking in the same tone so you must pay attention to the intonation but photos and music are well organized.
'corridor and photograph' are mispronounced.however, there is no problem with the pronounciation but the intonation. She speaks slowly :) but her words are very clear, pictures are nice and the music is melodious...
your slow speech makes your presentation clear and understandable.using your music,photos and tone of your tone are in harmanious succesfully.I liked it
corridor is only mispronounced word that ı could catch. She introduced the place very well but she should improve her intonation because talked smoothly. In general, video is great with nice photos and music.
'' turkish'' is pronounced incorrectly. it is ['tɜ:rkıʃ]. your voice is one of the most soothing voices I heard in the videos, which is so good.. it is evident that you know how to balance your fluency because you are neither too fluent nor too slow.. it was a good one, actually..
a soothing voice and nice photos.you ve spoken fluently in accordance with intonations.it was dood to watch.l did not get bored.thamk u for the work u have done
: northerns pronounced incorrectly.you start to narrate with introducing tekirdağ .it was good. But you said’ there are a soloon a kitchen a toilet..’ toilet is not a good place to say in videos like this.
her voice is audible. the photos of her speech is harmonious with her speech.
ReplyDeleteHer voice and pronunciation is good but there isn't intonation.
ReplyDeleteturkish is wrongly pronounced. she has no intonation. there is irritating vibration on the speakers, but the music is great.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake in the video, alo the video was good. the photos were related.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks with a low voice pitch at first. but then both her voice pitch and her pictures are good .
ReplyDeletein her speech ,she paid attention to the pronounciation.it was good .however,if she had paid attention to the intonation,it would be a better speech
ReplyDeleteher pronunciation is good. she says the word"hungarian" wrongly.nevertheless,she explains fluently.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and without intonation. her speach isnt fluent. ı fell like she is reading. there are some pronounciation mistakes. her voice is audible. however she didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteYou spoke very slow. There is no pronunciation mistake that I could see. However,your intonation should be better. It is a bit mediocre.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any mispronounced words but I think you can improve your intonations.
ReplyDeleteNice music :) you could be more fluent however the pronunciation and intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some pronunciation mistakes,she is very fluent. But it would be better if she had paid more attention to her intonation.
ReplyDeleteı want to ask a question.two people said there are some pronunciation mistakes but which words are they? why didnt you say them? you must say them.and other friends! thanks for your comments:)
ReplyDeleteYou should pay more attention to the intonation, your voice was a bit flat but your speech was good in general. Sometimes you pronounced 'Hungarian' wrong but sometimes it was correct. /hʌŋˈgeə.ri.ən/ it should be like this. look at 1:35 for example.
ReplyDeleteyou spoke in the same tone but the music and pictures attracted me anyway. i heard that the words "during and Turkish" are said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good I only catch "probably".please pay attention its pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was clşear and your photos wre in accordence with your speech but toilet was pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is really well i couldn't catch any misspelled word except Turkish.you speak fluently and clearly.but you should improve your intonation a bit.ı liked your video.
ReplyDeleteı felt as if you were reading it from somewhere. ı guess this is bec. of your intonation. from 2.00 to 2.30 you mispronounced the word "three" for 3 times however, you speak fluently and i liked the video.
ReplyDeleteThere is not much pronounciation mistakes except for ''after and hungarien-mispronounced just once-'' The speech is not fluent enough,but it could be a good sample..
ReplyDeletethere is no intonation she talks very calm. she has also pronunciation mistakes like Turkish, independence.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is recognizable but you should paid attention to your intonation. The photographs are good and your speech is persuasive.
ReplyDeleteFirst I can say that she told us Tekirdağ before the real presentation influenced me in a positive way.Her voice was audible .
ReplyDeleteFirstly,there isn't any pronunciation mistakes apart from turkish and hungarian.That is, pronunciation is almost good but her voice might be higher.The music is compatible with the presentation.Best regards :)
ReplyDeletepronunciation is good and informations about the museum are well explained.speech can be more lively, it is good in all.
ReplyDeletethe lack of fluency and intonation diminishes the effectiveness of your video and there are few mistakes in pronunciation but in general, I can regard it as a good one...
ReplyDeletebesides lovely voice, photos are perfect. they are in harmony with speech.
ReplyDeleteexcept for a few pronounciation mistakes it is a well prepared video
ReplyDeleteno pronunciation mistake, but there is no intonation, you can't persuade me with this voice
ReplyDeleteThere is no mistake in terms of pronunciation. I like the video.But if u had used intonation it would have been fantastic:)
ReplyDeleteIt is a really wonderful presentation.Your pronunciation and intonation is very good.I can2t find mistakes.It worths listening.
ReplyDeleteyou should use intonations and should not speak so fast.
ReplyDeleteThere is no mistake in terms of pronunciation.
ReplyDeletebut the voice might be higher :)
She doesn't pay attention to intonation. Meanwhile, it is easy to understand the sentences.Tone of her voice is clear but she could have talk a bit louder.
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounced words such as'Byzantine and Turkish'.You are speaking in the same tone so you must pay attention to the intonation but photos and music are well organized.
ReplyDeletethe photos are perfect.. Apart from some words such us turkish and byzantine..it is good
ReplyDelete'corridor and photograph' are mispronounced.however, there is no problem with the pronounciation but the intonation. She speaks slowly :) but her words are very clear, pictures are nice and the music is melodious...
ReplyDeleteyour slow speech makes your
ReplyDeletepresentation clear and understandable.using your music,photos and tone of your tone are in harmanious succesfully.I liked it
corridor is only mispronounced word that ı could catch. She introduced the place very well but she should improve her intonation because talked smoothly. In general, video is great with nice photos and music.
ReplyDelete'' turkish'' is pronounced incorrectly. it is ['tɜ:rkıʃ]. your voice is one of the most soothing voices I heard in the videos, which is so good.. it is evident that you know how to balance your fluency because you are neither too fluent nor too slow.. it was a good one, actually..
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently, but you should pay more attention to intonation..
ReplyDeleteI think it's ok all except from some pronounciations of words such as Turkish, Byzantine etc.
ReplyDeletea soothing voice and nice photos.you ve spoken fluently in accordance with intonations.it was dood to watch.l did not get bored.thamk u for the work u have done
ReplyDeleteı liked your photos and your pronounciation is good. ıt is a good sample of informative speech well done nihan
ReplyDeleteI really liked the music,but I think you should have paid more attention to intonation:))
ReplyDeletethere is no mispronounciation as ı can hear,the speech is fluent but the intonation should be a bit better
ReplyDeleteTo me,apart from some pronounciation mistake it is good.when I close my eyes, I can visualize the rakoczi museum.
ReplyDelete: northerns pronounced incorrectly.you start to narrate with introducing tekirdağ .it was good. But you said’ there are a soloon a kitchen a toilet..’ toilet is not a good place to say in videos like this.
ReplyDeletedespite some minor mistakes I liked your video your words are very understandable cong.;)
ReplyDeletethe speech and the voice not bad.but there is no effective use of intonations.it's an avarage video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech, photos and intonation are good
ReplyDeletestyle of tellin the story is good but you should stress the words turkish was said wrongly
ReplyDeleteher voice is good but, you should pay attention to your intonation it s an advice my dear friend:)
ReplyDeleteYour voice rises and lowers and that makes it harder to understand the speech... On the other hand the res is very good. I like it, thank you Nihan!
ReplyDeleteIt has been a good work....
ReplyDeleteı liked your presenting style,it is fluent and in harmony,if you pay attention a bit to intonation,it would be much better:)
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