You use the intonations effectively but on some parts your voice is flat. I couldnt find any wrong pronounced word except for 'away' at the beginning. Why didnt you give us the information about the music at the end such as whose piece that is?
Great!!! It is a well prepared video.Your music and your topic is very compatible and your photos are nice:)You should be better if you are speaking lively:)
there is not any significant mistake but you should speak lively. it is a wellorganized video. harmony of the photos with music is great. congratulations.
it is a good job. your video is well prepared. your pronounciation is generally good, there are minor mistakes.but please pay attention to your intonation a bit.
yr voice is clear and you speak fluently. ı liked yr video. you pronounce tower,considered,palace,peninsula incorrectly. you should check them .thnks:)
in one of your sentences you say'by the time' but it must have been ' by time', right. it is a good presentation but could be better i f you had been lively.
''building,magnificent'' were mispronounced and she should have said ''Sultan Mehmet the second or Mahmut the second.. But the rest is very good! Very good job.
Your photos are reaaly fascinating and they are in a great harmony with the music.I liked your intonation and your voice is clear.I couldn't find any mispronounced words.Thank you nihan:))
You use the intonations effectively but on some parts your voice is flat. I couldnt find any wrong pronounced word except for 'away' at the beginning. Why didnt you give us the information about the music at the end such as whose piece that is?
ReplyDeleteGreat!!! It is a well prepared video.Your music and your topic is very compatible and your photos are nice:)You should be better if you are speaking lively:)
ReplyDeletethere is not any significant mistake but you should speak lively. it is a wellorganized video. harmony of the photos with music is great. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit boring coz u r speaking without intonation. Yet, yoru pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is generally good but you can improve your intonation.good video.cong.:)
ReplyDeletei didnt hear many mistake, the only one i heard is "byzantine" information you gave is good
ReplyDeleteit is a good job. your video is well prepared. your pronounciation is generally good, there are minor mistakes.but please pay attention to your intonation a bit.
ReplyDeleteyou have a good pronuncation in general it is a good video, but you have to speak more lively to make us interested in your topic.
ReplyDeletethere is not much pronunciation mistakes but you speak not fluently in order to call our attention.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is not so good but your photos and the music make the video enjoyable. the rest was good actually.
ReplyDeleteif you are more lively,ı think it would be better,but in general it well done
ReplyDeleteit is a well informative video..ı could not catch so many pronunciation mistakes. i was fascinated by photos:)
ReplyDeleteyr voice is clear and you speak fluently. ı liked yr video. you pronounce tower,considered,palace,peninsula incorrectly. you should check them .thnks:)
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is prepared very well. ıt is better than your first one. Your voice is fluent.
ReplyDeleteThe photographs are attractive. I could not catch any pronunciation mistakes. Fluency and intonation are good generally. It is well-prepared project.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are very good. I like your pronunciation.Congradulations!
ReplyDeleteThe words such as built,building are mispronounced. The video is generally good but you could use your intonation more effectively.
ReplyDeleteI think 'built' is the only word mispronounced. The music and the pictures are very nice. Be careful about intonation...
ReplyDeletein one of your sentences you say'by the time' but it must have been ' by time', right. it is a good presentation but could be better i f you had been lively.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any pronunciation mistake in your video.Your musiv and photos are wonderful.I f only you spoke more lively.
ReplyDeleteI like your photos and music. Your voice is clear. However, you should use intonation effectively.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any problem apart from your intonation.in genaral, your information you gave,frequency and photos are succesful. cong nihan:)
ReplyDeleteHer speech was frequent and clear .Also her photos was harmonious with her music.I wish she spoke a bit lively .good jkob.
ReplyDelete''building,magnificent'' were mispronounced and she should have said ''Sultan Mehmet the second or Mahmut the second.. But the rest is very good! Very good job.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video in general it is well done with photos and music it is effective,cong.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't catch any pronounciation mistake and you are talking fluently and you give enough information to go there .cong
ReplyDeleteapart from your pronunciaton and intonation, it is well- prepared video. because, in some parts, you speak in plain speech.
ReplyDeleteI liked her photos and music. her voice was audible.
ReplyDeleteit is very nice in terms of fluency, clearness aand photos thanks nihan
ReplyDeleteYour photos are reaaly fascinating and they are in a great harmony with the music.I liked your intonation and your voice is clear.I couldn't find any mispronounced words.Thank you nihan:))
ReplyDeleteintonation might be better but I must say that I liked the music alot:) pronunciation is good thanks
ReplyDeleteyour intonation really effects me:)I could not find pronunciation mistake.thanks my dear friend:)
ReplyDeleteI liked your photos and music. Your speech is clear. However, you should pay attention to your intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear I think. intonation could be better.I can't hear pronunciation mistake
ReplyDelete