some words are pronounced wrong such as period mountain and her speech was a bit incomprehensible when she started to speak but it was good in terms of intonation and content
she emphasizes the words a lot and for that reason her speech is not fluent. and her presentation is short but her pictures are harmonious with her speech
your voice is not so audible because of your voice recorder's bad quality. christian pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general. you speaks fluently. ı like your video but second time study with a better voice recorder. you persuaded me to go there.
ı think your video is very nice. but your sound isnt unfortunately audible. your intonation and pronunciation are great. ı noticed mountain and cristians were mispronounced as mehmet said.
you speak hoarsely at some parts,but generally your speech is fluent but you mispronounced some words such as platform, mountain.you used interesting photes ,liked your pictures.ı went there and agree with your nice advice.
She mispronounced mountain,christian and period as i could hear. And she is not speaking fluently enough but not bad. But it's a very interesting place and i really want to go there. Thanks..
In my opinion,her intonation was good but in some parts her voice wasn't audible.And there are some wrong pronounced words such as mountain and christian .After I saw her photos in the video I thought to go there.
Except from some wrong intonations and pronouncations the video is effective. mountain and christian are mistaken words I caught. lastly, ı can say the video is a bit short for this project.
Your voice tone is nice and fluency is good.There may be some pronunciation mistake such as Christian, but in generally with the photos it is a well prepared video:)
The mispronounciation of christian many times irritated me. it should be said like /ˈkrɪstʃən/ :) mountain should be spelled as /ˈmaʊntn/. her photos are interesting and your intonation is good.
ı could hear two or three mispronounced words and they are 'christian and platform,so your pronounciation wasn't bad.Your intonation was really well but ,there were one or two unnecessary pauses.Apart from this I really liked your pictures and the music was in a good harmony with the photos.:))
in general the video is good.speech is not bad and other insturments are good.but there are some mispronounced words like:christian population and mountain...
''... is one of the most **** historical...'' (The first sentence.) There is a pause between most and historical. you should correct this, because this makes the sentences not to be understood correctly. The rest is very good. I like it, thank you Pınar!
ı know this place very well, and thank you to remind me this place, ı will go and visit when ı go to Antakya.ıf you pay attention to your intonation,it would be much much better.well done:)
the words christian, mountain,period are mispronouced. i liked your video.your intonation could be more light not stressed .it is an attractive place.THANKS
Mountain is wrongly pronounced and the speech is some incomprehensible because of the quality of sound.
ReplyDeleteher presentation is short but her pronounciation is good.
ReplyDeleteHer voice isn't audible.
ReplyDeleteI caught almost no pronunciation mistake, but her voice is a bit low, a higher voice would be better.
ReplyDeletesome words are pronounced wrong such as period mountain and her speech was a bit incomprehensible when she started to speak but it was good in terms of intonation and content
ReplyDeleteshe emphasizes the words a lot and for that reason her speech is not fluent. and her presentation is short but her pictures are harmonious with her speech
ReplyDeletechristian and population words are pronounced falsely. her photos are in harmonious with her speech. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteSome sentences are imcomprehensible. Mountain is pronunced wrong. Yet, overall it is well-prepared video. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not so audible because of your voice recorder's bad quality. christian pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general. you speaks fluently. ı like your video but second time study with a better voice recorder. you persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeletepopulation was mispronounced. it is not very clear but generally, it is a good video.
ReplyDeletethe intonation and pronuncitaion is very good except the pronuncitaions of 'cristians' and 'mountain'.
ReplyDeleteı think your video is very nice. but your sound isnt unfortunately audible. your intonation and pronunciation are great. ı noticed mountain and cristians were mispronounced as mehmet said.
ReplyDeleteYou pronounce 'mountain, christianity and apostle wrong. except for these, your speech is fluent and effective.
ReplyDeletethe video is short and your voice is loud, so it tired a bit,but it was fluent again."mountain" is the wrong pronounciation i heard.
ReplyDeleteyour speech video was short chritian and mountain were pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteyou speak hoarsely at some parts,but generally your speech is fluent but you mispronounced some words such as platform, mountain.you used interesting photes ,liked your pictures.ı went there and agree with your nice advice.
ReplyDeleteintonation is really well. but your voice is not that audible. "population and mountain" mispronounced friend. :)you persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteShe mispronounced mountain,christian and period as i could hear. And she is not speaking fluently enough but not bad. But it's a very interesting place and i really want to go there. Thanks..
ReplyDeleteshe pronounced the word 'mountain' wrong. she could have paid more attention to intonation.However,I liked it generally.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not audaible and you pronuenced christian and mountain wrongly. However your photos were good and you persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is a bit inaudible,so it is hard to understand some parts.You can improve your intonation.
ReplyDeletemountain,christian and period are wrongly pronounced.Your intonation could be better,I think.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,her intonation was good but in some parts her voice wasn't audible.And there are some wrong pronounced words such as mountain and christian .After I saw her photos in the video I thought to go there.
ReplyDeleteI think 'christian' is mispronounced but her intonation is great and her pronounciation is good generally.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake except for the word "mountain" and you persuaded me to go there again. Cong.
ReplyDeletethere are some words such as christian,mountain
ReplyDeletemispronounced but in general, it is a good one with attractive photos and your fluency in speech.
there are some words mispronounced as the others said. Speech is good and intonation makes it better.
ReplyDeleteher lovely voice makes the video attractive. Photos are charming.On the other hand, there are some mispronounced words: mountain, christian.
ReplyDeletethe wrong pronunciation of 'mountain' is very clear.but I liked the video,foto and voice. and the choice of music was very successful:)
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but in general it is a good video, her photos and music are also wonderful
ReplyDeleteExcept from some wrong intonations and pronouncations the video is effective. mountain and christian are mistaken words I caught. lastly, ı can say the video is a bit short for this project.
ReplyDelete'Christian' was mispronunced.But I like your speech.Also, the music is fantastic
ReplyDeleteThe intonation and pronounciation were very well I think. I caught only 1 word that mispronounced and that was christian. generally well done.
ReplyDeleteThere are some wrongly pronunced words.However,I find your photos and music attractive.
ReplyDeleteeven though there are some mispronounced words, overall the video is effective and voice is good.
ReplyDeleteYour voice tone is nice and fluency is good.There may be some pronunciation mistake such as Christian, but in generally with the photos it is a well prepared video:)
ReplyDeleteSome words such as 'population and 'mountain' are pronounced wrongly,but her speech is fluent. I liked photos and some necessary information.
ReplyDeletegood ı lıked your information about st.pierre..but ı think you shouldnt have pronounce the christian wrong.
ReplyDeleteThe mispronounciation of christian many times irritated me. it should be said like /ˈkrɪstʃən/ :) mountain should be spelled as /ˈmaʊntn/. her photos are interesting and your intonation is good.
ReplyDeletealthough there are some words mispronounced, her video is good.I liked photos chosen.
ReplyDeletechristian and mountain were pronounced wrongly.. there was not any other mistake that bothered me..i think it was good
ReplyDeleteYou mispronounced the same word a few times and it irritated me. The photos are beautiful and you spoke fluently.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently ı couldnt catch any mistakes the photos and the music are harmonious with eachother well done ı liked your presentation
ReplyDeleteIn general, your video is good but I cannot say anything different from other
ReplyDeleteı could hear two or three mispronounced words and they are 'christian and platform,so your pronounciation wasn't bad.Your intonation was really well but ,there were one or two unnecessary pauses.Apart from this I really liked your pictures and the music was in a good harmony with the photos.:))
ReplyDeleteAs my friend said you should check the 'mountain'.Apart from this, I like your video and I want to go there
ReplyDeletein general the video is good.speech is not bad and other insturments are good.but there are some mispronounced words like:christian population and mountain...
ReplyDeleteyour voice was low.you pronounced mountain wrongly.it could be much better
ReplyDeleteI liked your intonation and pictures your speech and your video are in harmony cong.;)
ReplyDeletespeakin in a more attractive and persuasive way would better.it was interesting place
ReplyDeleteı think there is a problem with your recorder but your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteit would be better if yr voice was more clear intonation was good
ReplyDeleteyour pronouncation is good in general term but !christian and mountain' are wrong words that you are mispronounced
ReplyDelete''... is one of the most **** historical...'' (The first sentence.) There is a pause between most and historical. you should correct this, because this makes the sentences not to be understood correctly. The rest is very good. I like it, thank you Pınar!
ReplyDeleteı know this place very well, and thank you to remind me this place, ı will go and visit when ı go to Antakya.ıf you pay attention to your intonation,it would be much much better.well done:)
ReplyDeletethe words christian, mountain,period are mispronouced. i liked your video.your intonation could be more light not stressed .it is an attractive place.THANKS
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