his voice so hoarse ı couldnt understand what he said very well. however his intonation is better than in class in this video. there are some wrongly pronounced words suc as; museum, bridge, magnificient, river, cosidered, southern, travelers. it didnt persuade me to go there.
magnificent,medivial,central,alloved pronounced wrongly, your speech was a bit slow but your photos were fascinating but you couldn't persuade me to go there
ı could not understand what you said completely. your intonation, on the other hand must be improved.also, you pronounced some words such as magnificient and museum wrongly but it generally well prepared.the music is very good.and you say ı am here with your video, the pictures you used were perfect.
I couldn't understand your speech clearly. You speak too slowly which makes the video sound melancholic. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as modern, period and collapse.
You aren't reading a poet. This video should be persuasive or informative. Yet, I cannot see these both.Your voice is too hoarse for me to get in words. Intonation is another deficiency of this video. You could use your voice better.
overall intonation is not very bad but u should give more importance to it for the second video rıdvan to prevent it sound monotonous, in your last sentence you wrongly pronounced the word "known", and other mistake i heard is flood.and i advice you to use more enjoyable music for the other one
ı think you made your speech according to music tone and it makes it slow. there are some mistakes in pronounciation. photos are good and the informations you have mentioned good,too.all in all people can be persuaded to visit there by watching your video.
ı felt as if ı was listening to a poem :D your voice is very affective in fact if you use it more tonic. and ı guees its because of your recorder that your voice is not clear.
Some parts of the video weren’t understood.Maybe he can improve his intonation and use it more effectively.There were some mistakes in pronunciation such as river,modern,collapse.But it was good in general.
your job is wonderful. the music and your speech are in harmony with the historical place.your speech which is in harmony with the music and adding your feeling into the video affected me while ı was listening to your presentation. but there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example, medieval, about, magnificient, southern..
oooo ı admired your music ıt is very sorrowful. while watching it ı was naerly to cry :)) you speak slowly not fulently. the photos are good you have some pronounciation mistakes like southern,mediavel. ıt is good anyway
your photos are impressive. you speak slow so sometimes I am bored. your music choice is good. I liked it.the words 'magnificient,medieval'are mispronounced.it persuaded me to go to Hasankeyf.
your voice and the music is in harmony but you can talk a bit faster, I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake cause I couldn't hear your voice. And lastly I can say that you persuaded me to go there.
Ithink your voice pitch and music is in hamony with each other. but I think You could explain it more effectively. your pictures are well-chosen. but use more intonation in your sentences
Because of your being vowel back, it is diffucult to understand your speech. But I found the music coherent with the video. Your intonation is not so bad.
You should present lively and your speech must be attractive... you prensented as if you were in a funeral ceremony. You should correct this, on the other hand this video is very good. Thank your for your great pictures and search.
in the beginning it says'' hasankeyf is a small town which has a thousand years past in Batman'' the sentence is somehow awkward and amateurish. it can be replaced with '' hasankeyf is a historical town in Batman'' etc in my opinion. you should be a bit more willing in your speech not to bore people...
Your music and photos are really nice but because your voice is so raucous and high, I couldn't understand some sentences and vocabularies:( pay attention to your voice in the second video.
there are some pronounciation mistakes. if he had spoken more fluently, his presentation would have been better. the photos and the music of his presentation is very very good.
your intonation should be improved.I resembled this speech to a prose. It isn't persuassive speech to convince us. Brigde, magnificent are mispronounced.
the music was very nice, ur voice was a little hoarse, but i liked ur video in general.. it is a place l have been for 100 times. hasankefy is an important town... we should '''' stop Ilısu Dam''' to save haasankeyf
l think the harmony of the tone of your speech with music and photos is great and attractive.but you could increase the tone of the speech at some parst of video after all.congratulations.well done.
music was good but you speak too smooth and hoarsely.and you say 'hasankeyf is a small town which had a thousand years passed in batman' . I didn't understand what kind of sentence this is.
His voice is too hoarse and cannot be heard clearly because of the recorder and he talks without emphasis.There are also some pronounciation mistakes such as' locate and modern'.
vowwww! I felt as ıf I was listening a speech of Şiwan Perwer=) You should have made use of this voice tone in your speaking but ı was dissapointed because you didn2t pay attention to intonation. The pictures were charming I wished to be there.
I think your tone of voice and music on the background is perfect but I wish You pay attention inotations.I am sure that inotation makes your presentation very attractive.
his voice so hoarse ı couldnt understand what he said very well. however his intonation is better than in class in this video. there are some wrongly pronounced words suc as; museum, bridge, magnificient, river, cosidered, southern, travelers. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletemagnificent,medivial,central,alloved pronounced wrongly, your speech was a bit slow but your photos were fascinating but you couldn't persuade me to go there
ReplyDeleteı could not understand what you said completely. your intonation, on the other hand must be improved.also, you pronounced some words such as magnificient and museum wrongly but it generally well prepared.the music is very good.and you say ı am here with your video, the pictures you used were perfect.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand your speech clearly. You speak too slowly which makes the video sound melancholic. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as modern, period and collapse.
ReplyDeleteYou aren't reading a poet. This video should be persuasive or informative. Yet, I cannot see these both.Your voice is too hoarse for me to get in words. Intonation is another deficiency of this video. You could use your voice better.
ReplyDeleteWhy is he speaking so slowly?? I got really bored.He mispronounced ''mediveal and 49''. And of course there is no intonation in this video.
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ReplyDeleteoverall intonation is not very bad but u should give more importance to it for the second video rıdvan to prevent it sound monotonous, in your last sentence you wrongly pronounced the word "known", and other mistake i heard is flood.and i advice you to use more enjoyable music for the other one
ReplyDeleteı think you made your speech according to music tone and it makes it slow. there are some mistakes in pronounciation. photos are good and the informations you have mentioned good,too.all in all people can be persuaded to visit there by watching your video.
ReplyDeleteı felt as if ı was listening to a poem :D your voice is very affective in fact if you use it more tonic. and ı guees its because of your recorder that your voice is not clear.
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ReplyDeleteThe speech is not fluent and clear however intonation and prononciation are good
ReplyDeletegenerally video was good but he could use more intonation so video wouldn't make me bored.'magnificient,about' are some of the pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteSome parts of the video weren’t understood.Maybe he can improve his intonation and use it more effectively.There were some mistakes in pronunciation such as river,modern,collapse.But it was good in general.
ReplyDeleteyour job is wonderful. the music and your speech are in harmony with the historical place.your speech which is in harmony with the music and adding your feeling into the video affected me while ı was listening to your presentation. but there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example, medieval, about, magnificient, southern..
ReplyDeleteHis speech is a bit slow. There isn't intonation but in general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteIt was a bit boring.He could affect with his intonation.Also medieval,river,collapse were mistold.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is too slow. Your voice is good so you should paid attention to the intonation. The music and photos are really good.
ReplyDeleteı generally didn t understand your video.if you had spoken fast and loud and paid attention to intonation,then it would be satisfactory
ReplyDeletehe speaks slowly and 'medieval and collapse' are mispronounced but the pictures are great.
ReplyDeleteoooo ı admired your music ıt is very sorrowful. while watching it ı was naerly to cry :)) you speak slowly not fulently. the photos are good you have some pronounciation mistakes like southern,mediavel. ıt is good anyway
ReplyDeletesome parts of the vide are not clear enough to understand you speak very low... some words are mispronounced but the photos are well-chosen
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ReplyDeleteyour photos are impressive. you speak slow so sometimes I am bored. your music choice is good. I liked it.the words 'magnificient,medieval'are mispronounced.it persuaded me to go to Hasankeyf.
ReplyDeleteyour voice and the music is in harmony but you can talk a bit faster, I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake cause I couldn't hear your voice. And lastly I can say that you persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyou could speak more lively and faster in the video. your intonation is good, but ın my opinion you should pay more attention to your second video.
ReplyDeleteIthink your voice pitch and music is in hamony with each other. but I think You could explain it more effectively. your pictures are well-chosen. but use more intonation in your sentences
ReplyDeleteBecause of your being vowel back, it is diffucult to understand your speech. But I found the music coherent with the video. Your intonation is not so bad.
ReplyDeleteit isn't clear enough intonation isn't clear but music and speech are in harmony
ReplyDeleteYou should present lively and your speech must be attractive... you prensented as if you were in a funeral ceremony. You should correct this, on the other hand this video is very good. Thank your for your great pictures and search.
ReplyDeleteIt could be more lively and fluently. Also some parts of the video are not very clear but photos are great.
ReplyDeleteTo me,your photos and music is good.Yet,you should speak more effectively.
ReplyDeletein the beginning it says'' hasankeyf is a small town which has a thousand years past in Batman'' the sentence is somehow awkward and amateurish. it can be replaced with '' hasankeyf is a historical town in Batman'' etc in my opinion. you should be a bit more willing in your speech not to bore people...
ReplyDeleteExcept his speaking colorlessly and some pronunciation mistakes, the pictures are attractive.
ReplyDeleteYour slow speech and wrong intonations make the video a bit boring. Southern, magnificent and mediveal are the mistaken words I heard.
ReplyDeleteThe video is good but it coul be much better by speaking according to intonation rules.
ReplyDeleteYour music and photos are really nice but because your voice is so raucous and high, I couldn't understand some sentences and vocabularies:( pay attention to your voice in the second video.
ReplyDeleteactually ı hardy understand what he said..magnificent is tyhe word ı cought wrongly pronounced
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes. if he had spoken more fluently, his presentation would have been better. the photos and the music of his presentation is very very good.
ReplyDeleteI didn't liked his intonation. It was difficult for me to understand the video. It could have been better. However, his photos are good.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation should be improved.I resembled this speech to a prose. It isn't persuassive speech to convince us. Brigde, magnificent are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletespeech could be more lively.there isn't intonation and I catched some misspelt words such as magnificient.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion ,his speech wssn't clear.Therefore,I couldn't understand completely what he told .the only good thing in the video were his photos.
ReplyDeleteı couldnt understand the video well.the music makes us cry :D but unlike others, ı know that you pronounce 'magnificient'/mægˈnɪf.ɪ.sənt/ correctly
ReplyDeletethe speaker speaks so slowly.the voice is not clear and there are some mispronounced words like magnificent,medivial,central.etc.
ReplyDeletethe music was very nice, ur voice was a little hoarse, but i liked ur video in general.. it is a place l have been for 100 times. hasankefy is an important town... we should '''' stop Ilısu Dam''' to save haasankeyf
ReplyDeletel think the harmony of the tone of your speech with music and photos is great and attractive.but you could increase the tone of the speech at some parst of video after all.congratulations.well done.
ReplyDeletemusic was good but you speak too smooth and hoarsely.and you say 'hasankeyf is a small town which had a thousand years passed in batman' . I didn't understand what kind of sentence this is.
ReplyDeleteI am bored as you speak slowly and your intonation is not good.You would make better I believe.
ReplyDeleteHis voice is too hoarse and cannot be heard clearly because of the recorder and he talks without emphasis.There are also some pronounciation mistakes such as' locate and modern'.
ReplyDeletethe voice is not clear to be understood well,the intonation should be better
ReplyDeletevowwww! I felt as ıf I was listening a speech of Şiwan Perwer=) You should have made use of this voice tone in your speaking but ı was dissapointed because you didn2t pay attention to intonation. The pictures were charming I wished to be there.
ReplyDeleteI think your tone of voice and music on the background is perfect but I wish You pay attention inotations.I am sure that inotation makes your presentation very attractive.
ReplyDeleteyou can talk a bit loud because you speak as if you would sleep.However your intonation is good.Also you pronounce words carefully.good job
ReplyDeletehis sayings weren't understood clearly. he mispronounced some words such as modern,museum, magnificient.also there was no intonation.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and pictures a lot. please next time use a different voice recorder I am sure it will be more effective congratulations:)
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech.maybe,it results from the recorder.
ReplyDeletethe video is good. however,there is no intonaion and it was hard to understand him.
ReplyDeletegenerally the video is good the speech and intonation is good
ReplyDeleteyou spoke as if you era reading a poem or you are so sad that you couldn't spoke clearly the music is not well chosen
ReplyDeletethe video is good but your voice is low as if you talk about sth romantic. music is good too.maybe voice cuold be louder.
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