video is short. the words bridge, constructed, world, walls, restoration, word are wrong pronounced words. it persuaded me to go there. however his intonation can be imporeved.
your voice was a bit low.restoration,bridge were pronounced wrongly but your speech was good you persuaded me to go there your slogan was very good too
the word bridge pronounced wrongly and you must use intonantion to make your presenttation more charming. yes you use attractive pictures and interesting information, but it did not satisfied me completely.in addition, the video is too short..
You speak slowly but the end of the video was really effective so I think it covers your faults a bit. You have pronunciation mistakes such as caravan, restoration and legend. However you persuaded me to go to there.
Constructed,world,undergoing,excellent are mispronounced words. This is the place ı've always wanted to go so, ı watched the video carefully. His pronounciation and intonation are not bad but actually,i loved his motto:))It's really good..
you speak in a stable tone you should make some intonation to effect.the pronouncitaion of legend,worth, various, trouble. it was short a bit,too. but the end was super i loved it :))
the bad side of video is your voice is low. it is good work and the last sentence makes it better. as the others mentioned there are some mispronounced words.
The speech is very clear and understandable. Pictures are choosen properly and concurs with speech. Intonation is good however there are mistakes in pronunciation
his voice could be higher and he pay more attention to his intonation.the motto he used at the end was very effective but there were mistakes in 'listen,enemies,difficulties'words.
it is a good presentation. you used beautiful photographs for your video.but ı think it could be better. you could have paid more attention some words in order not to mispronunce. ı noticed some words mispronounced such as meter and area and you should have been more excited because of presenting a new place for us.
Your video is short and your voice is low. You said your opinions in the video and, this was good to persuade peple to go there( If you want to forget all troubles in your life.....)
restoration bridge are some mispronounced words that drew my attention.your voice was very low and if you had paid attention to intonation,it would be better
ı liked your story really ı have been there before and ıt ıs a really historıcal brıdge. ı couldn t hear very well your voice and pronounciation could be better
The video could be longer but generally it is a good one. Maybe you can give a bit more importance to your intonation.’legend,various’ were pronunciation mistakes.
it can be some longer and the word legend should be pronounced as /ledʒənds/ not /lidʒənds/ and the word excellent should be prononuced as /eksələnt/ not /ekzələnt/
he pronounces the word "legend" wrongly. but the similarity of voices (fridge-bridge) between the sentences in the last is very good. I think it would be better if it was longer and try to speak with a higher voice pitch.
That you told about the story of malabadi bridge is fine. There are some pronunciation mistakes.But your slogan at the end is so impressive. The video is like both persuasive and informative one:)
the words bridge, constructed are pronounced incorrectly. you could have put a theme music.. your pictures are synchronized with your speech.. your sound is too low..
I think you should pay attention to your intonaiton because you paused where it is unncessary. some words like legend, constructed, furthermore are mispronounced.
the word bridge is pronounced wrong which is very important in your topic....but ı really want to go there...and listnening to the song malabadiiii köprüsü
your voice should be abit loud. His pronounciation has some mistakes such as bridge, the word, legend, constructed. The video is too short and it could be a good choice to add the song 'Malabadi Köprüsü'
I want to say that he spoke very slowly and his voice was a bit low.there were some mispronounced words such as restoration and constructed.Altough ı found his speech unwilling,his photos were good and ı wanted to see there.
your speaking never changes.its stable during yr speech. but voice is clear and understanble. ı think the place is very beautiful. you said 'bridge' wrongly
you should have given importance to intonation and used your voice effectively.so,maybe it is clear to understand and this adds affectiveness to your presentation.
video is short. the words bridge, constructed, world, walls, restoration, word are wrong pronounced words. it persuaded me to go there. however his intonation can be imporeved.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was a bit low.restoration,bridge were pronounced wrongly but your speech was good you persuaded me to go there your slogan was very good too
ReplyDeletethe word bridge pronounced wrongly and you must use intonantion to make your presenttation more charming. yes you use attractive pictures and interesting information, but it did not satisfied me completely.in addition, the video is too short..
ReplyDeleteYou speak slowly but the end of the video was really effective so I think it covers your faults a bit. You have pronunciation mistakes such as caravan, restoration and legend. However you persuaded me to go to there.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is low and intonation could be better. Also, there are pronunciation mistakes such as restoration and bridge. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteConstructed,world,undergoing,excellent are mispronounced words. This is the place ı've always wanted to go so, ı watched the video carefully. His pronounciation and intonation are not bad but actually,i loved his motto:))It's really good..
ReplyDeleteyou speak in a stable tone you should make some intonation to effect.the pronouncitaion of legend,worth, various, trouble. it was short a bit,too. but the end was super i loved it :))
ReplyDeletethe bad side of video is your voice is low. it is good work and the last sentence makes it better. as the others mentioned there are some mispronounced words.
ReplyDelete:) the slogan at the and is really good. but u should add some intonation to your speech friend.and the word "bridge" sounded wrong to me.
ReplyDeleteThe speech is very clear and understandable. Pictures are choosen properly and concurs with speech. Intonation is good however there are mistakes in pronunciation
ReplyDeletehis voice could be higher and he pay more attention to his intonation.the motto he used at the end was very effective but there were mistakes in 'listen,enemies,difficulties'words.
ReplyDeleteit is a good presentation. you used beautiful photographs for your video.but ı think it could be better. you could have paid more attention some words in order not to mispronunce. ı noticed some words mispronounced such as meter and area and you should have been more excited because of presenting a new place for us.
ReplyDeleteHis intonation could be better. there are some pronunciation mistakes such as bridge.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low and he could use more intonations.’restoration,bridge’ were told wrong.
ReplyDeleteYour video is short and your voice is low. You said your opinions in the video and, this was good to persuade peple to go there( If you want to forget all troubles in your life.....)
ReplyDeleterestoration bridge are some mispronounced words that drew my attention.your voice was very low and if you had paid attention to intonation,it would be better
ReplyDeletehis voice is low. There are some words mispronounced but the story is very nice.
ReplyDeleteı liked your story really ı have been there before and ıt ıs a really historıcal brıdge. ı couldn t hear very well your voice and pronounciation could be better
ReplyDeleteyour speech is a bit lower.. the words ’restoration,bridge,various' are mispronounced. but you chose suitable photos..
ReplyDeleteThe video could be longer but generally it is a good one. Maybe you can give a bit more importance to your intonation.’legend,various’ were pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyour photos are harmonious with your speech.the words 'bridge,area,meter' are pronounced wrongly.you could speak faster.
ReplyDeleteit can be some longer and the word legend should be pronounced as /ledʒənds/ not /lidʒənds/ and the word excellent should be prononuced as /eksələnt/ not /ekzələnt/
ReplyDeletehe pronounces the word "legend" wrongly. but the similarity of voices (fridge-bridge) between the sentences in the last is very good. I think it would be better if it was longer and try to speak with a higher voice pitch.
ReplyDeleteThat you told about the story of malabadi bridge is fine. There are some pronunciation mistakes.But your slogan at the end is so impressive. The video is like both persuasive and informative one:)
ReplyDeletethe words bridge, constructed are pronounced incorrectly. you could have put a theme music..
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are synchronized with your speech.. your sound is too low..
'restoration' and 'bridge' are among the mispronunced words that I could remember. maybe it would be better to speak faster. intonation was good.
ReplyDeleteit could be a bit longer, his speech is good but there are some pronounciation mistakes such as "bridge"
ReplyDeletePictures are really good chosen. You should wait a few second and some wrods were pronounced wrong such as birdge, world, restoration...
ReplyDeleteThank you.
It would be better if you had paid more attantion to the intonation.
ReplyDeleteThanks
If only your voice were much faster. But I like your pictures and presentation.Your using motto is wonderful to me.I like this video.
ReplyDeleteHis voice is low. If he had used intonation, it could have been a better presentation. But in general I like it. The pictures are well-chosen.
ReplyDeleteIt could be more understandable if yor voice were higher. moreover there are some pronounciation mistakes like 'listen' and 'bridge'
ReplyDeleteYou mispronounce 'excellent,bridge' but your speech is not bad.your slogan is so nice:) also, story and information about there rather influential.
ReplyDeleteYou could include more detail.It is some short and your tone is stable...
ReplyDeleteI think you should pay attention to your intonaiton because you paused where it is unncessary. some words like legend, constructed, furthermore are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletethe word bridge is pronounced wrong which is very important in your topic....but ı really want to go there...and listnening to the song malabadiiii köprüsü
ReplyDeleteif his voice had been a bit higher, his speech would have been more audible. I liked his presentation. especially the end of his speech is very good.
ReplyDeleteThe word 'bridge' is pronounced wrongly. However. his pronouncation and intonation is good. It is clear to understand what he tells.
ReplyDeleteyour voice should be abit loud. His pronounciation has some mistakes such as bridge, the word, legend, constructed. The video is too short and it could be a good choice to add the song 'Malabadi Köprüsü'
ReplyDeletehis speech is interesting and easy to understand.however intonation is not good enough.
ReplyDeleteit is understantable but he should be a bit louder. I like the video and it attracts people.
ReplyDeleteI want to say that he spoke very slowly and his voice was a bit low.there were some mispronounced words such as restoration and constructed.Altough ı found his speech unwilling,his photos were good and ı wanted to see there.
ReplyDeleteyour speaking never changes.its stable during yr speech. but voice is clear and understanble. ı think the place is very beautiful. you said 'bridge' wrongly
ReplyDeletethe speech is not bad.but the video is very short and the voice is a bit low.and there are some mispronounced words like bridge...
ReplyDeletegreat photos and a great slogan have made your video perfect.congratulations.everything is ok except the same tone of your speech
ReplyDeleterestoration,excellent and bridge were pronounced wrongly and video was short. your intonation was good
ReplyDeleteYou make mistakes in pronounciation and it disturbs me. You must pay attention to it if you want to be better.
ReplyDeleteHe speaks without paying attention to intonation and he doesn't persuade the person to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is a bit low as far as I understan the words bridge and restoration is misspronounced but intonation is good generally
ReplyDeleteyour voice is really low. You should speak a bit lively and pay attantion to intonation rules.For all, ıt is a good one...
ReplyDeleteBridge and restoration are mispronunced.Although your intonation is good, you can emphasize some words more effectively.thank you
ReplyDeleteyou should have given importance to intonation and used your voice effectively.so,maybe it is clear to understand and this adds affectiveness to your presentation.
ReplyDeletesome words such as restoration,area, bridge were mispronounced. There was no intonation. However, his sayings were good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit short and a bit low but your voice is clear.Develop yourself...
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and pictures despite some minor mistakes the whole is very good:)
ReplyDeleteYour voice is lowand there is some mispronounced words but I like your speech
ReplyDeleteyor voice is very low you should pay attention to your intonation ther are words which are mispronounced for example'bridge/brıd3/ area
ReplyDeletethe video is good. your voice is low but it is better in this way I think it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyou could drink a bottle of weter to make your voice more lively pictures are good but it could have been more long.Generaly it is good....
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