ı like the video more then mine. she speaks fluently and not reading something. firstly she gives information about hakkari and using a map. then she starts to persuade people to go there. but there are some wrong pronounced words, mountain, situated, west, east, accomadation, wonder. photos and voice are connected with each other. she persuade me to go there with this video.
Her speech is very fluent, she speaks very good in the video. I like the photos as they are very good and colourful, but some words such as square and western are pronunced wrong. the song is also good.
It was obvious that she wasn't reading the text from somewhere.Although some pronounciation mistakes (air,mountain,wonder),ı wasn't bored while watching.
your voice was very claer and your photos was too.you persuaded me to go there with your effective photos your song was in accordence with your speech but you have some pronounce mistakes(submit example)and you intonated 'go'very effectively
She uses intonations well and she really persuaded me to go and visit there one day. However she has some basic pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,boundary,turkey(1:01), accommodation,and wonder.
her giving information about hakkari is good choice because of her topic. the pistures are very attracting and she persuaded me to go there thanks to her strong advice. the music is in hormony with the pictures but she pronuenced some words such as mountain and air wrongly. in total it is a good job.
the song the photos and her voice is in harmony but there is some mistakes such as mention (0:11),eastern, Turkey (1:01), accommodation (2:31).. by the way i haven't heard "yayla culture" before, and coulnd't find in dictionary.
Cilo mountain or cilo maontains I couldn t differentiate between them :)) yes your photos are very good and you pronounce well despite of your mistakes such as mountain,wonder..etc. moreover you stop sometimes while watching and say "aaa"" or "emmm". however ı liked in general and ı want to see cilo mountains,hakkari. well done
That's a very good video in terms of intoruduction and persuasion.Your information is great. However, you repeated Cila mountains again again; this disturbed me while watching. You made some pronunciation mistakes such as mention, accomodation, rezervation, memorable.
I don't think she wasn't reading and she stopped between nearly every words. Her pronounciation is not bad, she pronounced some words; accomodation,occur,plateau. Her intonation isn't bad either.
your intonation is relly good.and the photos you chose were attracting however,you pronounced some words wrongly such as conquer every.but your video was generally attracting
Photos are really enchanting.You are speaking fluently and naturally.Your introduction and leaving are also good.The only mistake that attacts attention is the pronounciation of the west and east.
althoug there are some pronounciation mistakes, her pronounciation is generally good. her voice is audible. the photos and the music are harmonious with her speech.
ı felt as if ı was listening to a cute children excited :) your pronunciation is ok except some words like "mountain" but overall its ok. I guess you're better get your speech persuasive. one thing is so screaming and that's "hi friends". you're better off this next time :)
I think giving a brief information about hakkari made your speech so sensible.Your voice fits with the music behind the scene. I think you really got the points in your speech.
The photos were very attractive, they were chosen meticulously. The text was prepared well and in spite of wrongly pronounced words like coming out,mountain, the video was good.
the speech is persuasive however there are some mistakes in pronunciation of words like 'about' 'mention' 'south' etc. but intonation is good and effective
Some words(areas, evolved,mountain,every) are misspelled. But, the speech is fluent.. you are even interested in your place so much that you speak in a curious way about your video you have informed.
for the speech is really persuasive and the cilo mountains look fantastic and gorgeous, suzan made me go there and walk around the cilo mountains..on the other hand,i could not get some words maybe because of tone of her voice that was rising sometimes...and there are some words that were pronounced wrongly...for example 'evolved'
ıt is a good presentation. she explains fluently everything especially by giving examples.the 'mountain' is pronounced wrongly. ıt persuaded me to go there.
it is a good video you introduced the cilo mountains to me victoriously. but the music is very loud. in addition there are some words which were mispronounced such as area, length and evolved.
it's clear that you didn't have any written text while you were prepearing the video, it is good but for the numbers you should have taken notes, in order not to do the mistake that you did in the 1.55th second. Icouldn't catch a pronunciation mistake maybe it is because I'm bad in pronunciation.
The photos you used are really good. You informed me clearly and persuaded me to go there. However, you pronuenced some words wrongly such as 'area and southern'. Also you misspelled some words. Despite this mistakes, I really liked your video.
Firstly, I want to say that the music you chose is harmonious with your speech.. there are few pronunciation mistakes such as mountain, evolved but it is an ideal one...
I think starting like 'hi friends! I will talk about ... 'is a mistake because video will be broadcasted.However your voce is clear and understandable.
Some words 'evolve' and 'mountain' are wrong pronunced. I liked her pronuncation and intonation. Furthermore, photos are very attractive. I liked her presentation.
this video was very interesting to me. because ı have never been to hakkari. her intonation is good.the word mountain was pronounced wrong.generally video is well prepared.
you makes me curious about that place because you speak in excting way.sometimes you say hımm..it isnt appropriate but this makes you natural.you dont read your text. there were no intonation in long sentences. the words mountain,Turkey, air were wrongly pronouncced.
you speak fluently and you have chosen impressive photos which are in harmony with the given information,so l can say that i was impressed by your presentation...it was presuasive..
it is agreat video.l liked it very much.your speech and the photos are great.you heve spoken so fluently and attractively.after watching,l ve decided to go there..congratulations susan
suzan achieved a goog job.in terms of fluency, and competiblity of sound with pictures I have no right to critisize you=) at some points you confused and made some pauses but in general it is welldone...
I think she spoke fluently.She uses the intonation well but the mistakenly pronounced words are mountain,south,situated,western,square and occur.That is, it is not a bad one.:)
ı like the video more then mine. she speaks fluently and not reading something. firstly she gives information about hakkari and using a map. then she starts to persuade people to go there. but there are some wrong pronounced words, mountain, situated, west, east, accomadation, wonder. photos and voice are connected with each other. she persuade me to go there with this video.
ReplyDeleteHer speech is very fluent, she speaks very good in the video. I like the photos as they are very good and colourful, but some words such as square and western are pronunced wrong. the song is also good.
ReplyDeleteIt was obvious that she wasn't reading the text from somewhere.Although some pronounciation mistakes (air,mountain,wonder),ı wasn't bored while watching.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was very claer and your photos was too.you persuaded me to go there with your effective photos your song was in accordence with your speech but you have some pronounce mistakes(submit example)and you intonated 'go'very effectively
ReplyDeleteShe uses intonations well and she really persuaded me to go and visit there one day. However she has some basic pronunciation mistakes such as mountain,boundary,turkey(1:01), accommodation,and wonder.
ReplyDeleteher giving information about hakkari is good choice because of her topic. the pistures are very attracting and she persuaded me to go there thanks to her strong advice. the music is in hormony with the pictures but she pronuenced some words such as mountain and air wrongly. in total it is a good job.
ReplyDeletethe song the photos and her voice is in harmony but there is some mistakes such as mention (0:11),eastern, Turkey (1:01), accommodation (2:31).. by the way i haven't heard "yayla culture" before, and coulnd't find in dictionary.
ReplyDeleteCilo mountain or cilo maontains I couldn t differentiate between them :)) yes your photos are very good and you pronounce well despite of your mistakes such as mountain,wonder..etc. moreover you stop sometimes while watching and say "aaa"" or "emmm". however ı liked in general and ı want to see cilo mountains,hakkari. well done
ReplyDeleteThat's a very good video in terms of intoruduction and persuasion.Your information is great. However, you repeated Cila mountains again again; this disturbed me while watching. You made some pronunciation mistakes such as mention, accomodation, rezervation, memorable.
ReplyDeleteI don't think she wasn't reading and she stopped between nearly every words. Her pronounciation is not bad, she pronounced some words; accomodation,occur,plateau. Her intonation isn't bad either.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is relly good.and the photos you chose were attracting however,you pronounced some words wrongly such as conquer every.but your video was generally attracting
ReplyDeleteHer pronunciation and intonation is a good one. I think the pictures, which she chooses, are harmony with her speech.
ReplyDeletePhotos are really enchanting.You are speaking fluently and naturally.Your introduction and leaving are also good.The only mistake that attacts attention is the pronounciation of the west and east.
ReplyDeleteyou use intonations well and it is a good choice to talk about the city firstly. photos are good. it is very normal to stop a bit while talking
ReplyDeletealthoug there are some pronounciation mistakes, her pronounciation is generally good. her voice is audible. the photos and the music are harmonious with her speech.
ReplyDeleteı felt as if ı was listening to a cute children excited :) your pronunciation is ok except some words like "mountain" but overall its ok. I guess you're better get your speech persuasive. one thing is so screaming and that's "hi friends". you're better off this next time :)
ReplyDeleteI think giving a brief information about hakkari made your speech so sensible.Your voice fits with the music behind the scene. I think you really got the points in your speech.
ReplyDeleteThe photos were very attractive, they were chosen meticulously. The text was prepared well and in spite of wrongly pronounced words like coming out,mountain, the video was good.
ReplyDeletethe speech is persuasive however there are some mistakes in pronunciation of words like 'about' 'mention' 'south' etc. but intonation is good and effective
ReplyDeletethe information is good but you did not use intonation effectively. Mountain, southern, memorable are mistaken words.
ReplyDeleteSome words(areas, evolved,mountain,every) are misspelled. But, the speech is fluent.. you are even interested in your place so much that you speak in a curious way about your video you have informed.
ReplyDeletefor the speech is really persuasive and the cilo mountains look fantastic and gorgeous, suzan made me go there and walk around the cilo mountains..on the other hand,i could not get some words maybe because of tone of her voice that was rising sometimes...and there are some words that were pronounced wrongly...for example 'evolved'
ReplyDeleteıt is a good presentation. she explains fluently everything especially by giving examples.the 'mountain' is pronounced wrongly. ıt persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good video,she was speaking fluently.However,evolved,square were pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteit is a good video you introduced the cilo mountains to me victoriously. but the music is very loud. in addition there are some words which were mispronounced such as area, length and evolved.
ReplyDeleteshe introduces it well. Pictures are very nice. 'mountain and accomodation' are mispronounced but the video is attractive.
ReplyDeleteit's clear that you didn't have any written text while you were prepearing the video, it is good but for the numbers you should have taken notes, in order not to do the mistake that you did in the 1.55th second. Icouldn't catch a pronunciation mistake maybe it is because I'm bad in pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteThe photos you used are really good. You informed me clearly and persuaded me to go there. However, you pronuenced some words wrongly such as 'area and southern'. Also you misspelled some words. Despite this mistakes, I really liked your video.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I want to say that the music you chose is harmonious with your speech.. there are few pronunciation mistakes such as mountain, evolved but it is an ideal one...
ReplyDeleteHer voice was so clear that I could understand every wor of her speech.The only problem is that she said a wrong phrase 'part south of Turkey '.
ReplyDeleteHer intonation and using of her voice is very good.In addition to this,she gives much information.And it is good for me.I like this video.
ReplyDeleteIn general the video is good.her speak fluent,her voice is clear.that is a good video.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is very good, but on the orher hand; you should not start with ''Hi friends''. Except this, the speech is very good.
ReplyDeleteI think starting like 'hi friends! I will talk about ... 'is a mistake because video will be broadcasted.However your voce is clear and understandable.
ReplyDeleteher photos are good her voice is also good and so it is a good presentation
ReplyDeleteShe uses her voice effectively. Intonation is fairly good. It is a successful presentation.
ReplyDeletethe photos are admirable. It is understandable there are a few mistakes but tey aren't outstanding or disturbing a lot.
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ReplyDeleteher photos and voice are in harmony. Intonation is good but there are some wrongly pronounced words such as mountain, every, lover.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is understandable.The only thing I can comment is that your voice seems a little interrupted.
ReplyDeletethe pronouncation of mountain is really disturbing...your voice reminds my little nephew:):)
ReplyDeleteSome words 'evolve' and 'mountain' are wrong pronunced. I liked her pronuncation and intonation. Furthermore, photos are very attractive. I liked her presentation.
ReplyDeletethis video was very interesting to me. because ı have never been to hakkari. her intonation is good.the word mountain was pronounced wrong.generally video is well prepared.
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ReplyDeletealthough there are some mispronounced words I like the speech. intonation is good and with photos it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteyou makes me curious about that place because you speak in excting way.sometimes you say hımm..it isnt appropriate but this makes you natural.you dont read your text. there were no intonation in long sentences. the words mountain,Turkey, air were wrongly pronouncced.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and you have chosen impressive photos which are in harmony with the given information,so l can say that i was impressed by your presentation...it was presuasive..
ReplyDeleteit is agreat video.l liked it very much.your speech and the photos are great.you heve spoken so fluently and attractively.after watching,l ve decided to go there..congratulations susan
ReplyDeleteit is a good video but there are some mistakes. you started with saying hi friends.evolve and mountain were pronounced incorrect
ReplyDeleteThe photos are great and she speaks fluently.However,as I could hear the words 'area,accomadation,evolved and memorable'are misspelled.
ReplyDeletethe speech is very fluently,cong..ıntonation is also good and pronounciation is good apart from turkey which is pronounciated wrong
ReplyDeleteYour speech is really clear and it is fluent. You are lively and it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteit is very successful presentation among the others I watched.photos,intonation and music on the background add interest to your video.
ReplyDeletesuzan achieved a goog job.in terms of fluency, and competiblity of sound with pictures I have no right to critisize you=) at some points you confused and made some pauses but in general it is welldone...
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good and speech is fluent.I cannot catch different pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteshe spoke fluently. However, some words such as mention, situated, mountain, accomodation were mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think she spoke fluently.She uses the intonation well but the mistakenly pronounced words are mountain,south,situated,western,square and occur.That is, it is not a bad one.:)
ReplyDeleteYour photos and presentation is very good.Your intonation is also good but mountain is pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and pictures
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is also very good congratulations:)
the photos are good and she speaks vet fluently.there are some intonation mistakes such as 'accommadition, mountain'
ReplyDeleteThe video and the speech are in harmony.I want go and see this place thanks to her presentation.It is very attracting.
ReplyDeletethe work is good.there are some pronunciation mistakes as I can catch like occurs,memoriable, etc.Its pitures are good and its music too.
ReplyDeleteas friend said the speech is very fluently couldn't have been better
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