hi suzan thank u for this good project.Ur pronunciation is good except for some words such as palace, monumental, and develop.While u tried to pay attention to ur pronunciation, u missed one important point, that is intonation.U stressed almost every words.Anyway good job and thank u for this successful video :)
suzan, what a nice music.. it is so harmony with your subject. your intonation is really goodand also pronounciation but you mispronounced some words such as palaca and develop.except these everything is perfect.
palace, south, develop, monumental are same of the mispronounced words. your music is verygood. ı like it so much. intonation is perfect. and your speech has both informative and persuasive aspects. it persuaded me to go there.
your choice was very good ı don't know who suggested you to present this palace.your photos were very clear and effective but you had some difficulties while saying some words because of your mother tongeu:)))))
Yeah, I 've heard and visited there before as I lived in Doğubeyazıt in the past :))Anyway, u introduced the palace well and ur speech was persuasive. well done
you speaak so clearly that ı could understand everything you say.your photos are well-chosen .although there were some mispronounced word such as palace monumental,it was generally a good video.well done:)
I couldn't find any mistake. isn't the word palace pronounced as /pæləs/ friends? what is the problem please inform me cause couldn't catch the mistake. good work. cong.
Dear Suzi, you only mispronounced 'palace'. I liked your music, intonation, pictures and fluency. I did not find any mistakes. It was a very good presentation. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Her speech was fluent and undestandable . She prepared a good video .I want to say that people saying that Monumental is mispronounced should look at the dictionary ,please.
palace is mispronounced. you intonate some words unnecessarily. I think you should pay attetion to intonation admittedly, your photos are great.well done
building,destroyed and palace are mispronounced words. ı think your intonation isnt good because you emphasize some words unnecessarily. ,it is irritating. as to your pictures, ı liked them.the pictures and music are in harmony.
palace, building, magnificient are misprounced words. your unnecessary audio out are irritating. you could use your intonations more effective. ı like your music and photos
hi suzan thank u for this good project.Ur pronunciation is good except for some words such as palace, monumental, and develop.While u tried to pay attention to ur pronunciation, u missed one important point, that is intonation.U stressed almost every words.Anyway good job and thank u for this successful video :)
ReplyDeletepalace, south are mispronounced. there are some unnecessary pauses. generally it is good. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good and rich in information, however the word u used most, is wrongly pronounced: palace =))
ReplyDeletesuzan, what a nice music.. it is so harmony with your subject. your intonation is really goodand also pronounciation but you mispronounced some words such as palaca and develop.except these everything is perfect.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear. you makes unnecessary stresses. palace,monumental,around,minarets are the mispronunced words. music is very nice. thanks suzan
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ReplyDeletepalace, south, develop, monumental are same of the mispronounced words. your music is verygood. ı like it so much. intonation is perfect. and your speech has both informative and persuasive aspects. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour choice was very good ı don't know who suggested you to present this palace.your photos were very clear and effective but you had some difficulties while saying some words because of your mother tongeu:)))))
ReplyDeleteYeah, I 've heard and visited there before as I lived in Doğubeyazıt in the past :))Anyway, u introduced the palace well and ur speech was persuasive. well done
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very clear and you are careful about your intonation and pronounciation the pictures are very good well done go on ! cong.
ReplyDeleteyou speaak so clearly that ı could understand everything you say.your photos are well-chosen .although there were some mispronounced word such as palace monumental,it was generally a good video.well done:)
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any mistake. isn't the word palace pronounced as /pæləs/ friends? what is the problem please inform me cause couldn't catch the mistake. good work. cong.
ReplyDeleteDear Suzi, you only mispronounced 'palace'. I liked your music, intonation, pictures and fluency. I did not find any mistakes. It was a very good presentation. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
ReplyDeleteit is a good presentation. It is a good place to present and you did it well.
ReplyDeleteYour speech could be more fluent and you should speak without shouting. Except these, you have a good video. :D
ReplyDeleteyou should talk more fluenly except this everything is good ;)
ReplyDeletegenerally video is good and very informative but 'palace'was mispronounced.anyway,i liked it.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is ver good except from the wrongly pronınced word palace.
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ReplyDeleteI think your presentation is a good one. the word 'monumental and palace' are pronounced correctly. Friends, please look at dictionary.
ReplyDeleteYou mispronunce palace. However, it's a nice video.
ReplyDeleteHer speech was fluent and undestandable . She prepared a good video .I want to say that people saying that Monumental is mispronounced should look at the dictionary ,please.
ReplyDeletepalace is mispronounced. you intonate some words unnecessarily. I think you should pay attetion to intonation admittedly, your photos are great.well done
ReplyDeletebuilding,destroyed and palace are mispronounced words. ı think your intonation isnt good because you emphasize some words unnecessarily. ,it is irritating. as to your pictures, ı liked them.the pictures and music are in harmony.
ReplyDeletepalace, building, magnificient are misprounced words. your unnecessary audio out are irritating. you could use your intonations more effective. ı like your music and photos
ReplyDeleteIn terms of intonation and pronunciation I really could not find any mistakes apart from palaca.Thanks suzan
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