it is too hard to understand what she said. her photographs are good and explain what she says. there are some wrongly pronounced words such as; situated, distinct, excavation, local. it cannot be said a good example of an persuasive or informative speech. i feel like im in a history lesson. the final of the video is the best part of it. and her tone at the end is just ok to persuade people to go there.
Her text was a bit complicated but the intonations used by her was really good.Maybe the text might have been more comprehensible.ın addition to these,there were some mistakes in pronounciation like 'conquered,tourism'.
You use the intonations well but this video isn't that enjoyable. You give too much detail about it and it may bore the people who watch.You pronounce excavation,tourism and forward wrong.
her photos are good but she did not use intonation very well. also if she used a music in hormony with her pictures then it would be better. and the details she gave were too much. anyway ı liked it and at the end she persuaded me to go there thanks to her photes.
I got bored a little while watching. The reason for this is that it is a bit long and I dont like historical speechs a lot :)) I couln t hear your voice clearly anyway your speech and the photos were informative. ı liked them
You made some pronunciation mistakes such as musque,considered.However, your voice and intonation are very good.There are a bit necessary details in the speech, but overall it is a good video.
Her pronounciation is good but she mispronounced few words suc as excavation, conquered and magnificent. Although most of the photos are ok but the video bored me a little because she speaks too slow and beyond intonation.
her speech was good and she intonated the sentences well however there were unnecessary intonations in some parts.you mentioned about its history ı think it was a bit boring in some parts.but generally good
Although the photos are good,her speech is too slow and she did not use the intonation well so the video is a bit boring.Tourism and conquered are mispronounced.
Your expression style is rather well but you are giving much details and I couldn't understand many of the vocabularies you used.The photos are wonderful but maybe in the second project you may add music to the video.
Your intonation is very good. you know where to pause and where to raise your voice. especially the end part of your speech really convince me to go there. and you keep me listenin to you.
It was a good informative speech but it didn’t affect me. Although she advised us to go there, I am not eager to visit there. Also there were some words wrongly pronounced like situated, local.
I coulndn't hear your voice at first but then it just turned into a fluent speech except for little mistakes. Inspite of public opinion I think if you added music no one could hear your after all voice too.
I think you could have added music to your video in the beginning..your intonation is very good and informative. Although some words are spelled wrongly, your tone and speech is fluent and a good example of accent.
the word 'introduce' was used wrongly..it should be 'introduce sth to sb'...some words like 'excavation' were pronounced wrongly..and i could not catch many words...the tomb of prophet daniel in tarsus did not attract me...
ı think if you had added music to your presentation, it would be better. by this way, it could be more attractive. in addition ı couldnt catch a lot of words. ı couldnt understand what you wanted to say in some parts. but on the whole it is a good video. especially your speech and tone of voice is good.
Mosque,introduce,excavation,considered and about were wrongly pronounced and her voice made me sleep in some parts of video, it is too long and slow to follow the video...
intonations are good made but there are some pronunciation mistakes for example the word commander is pronounced as /kɔmendər/ but it should be pronounced as /kəmɑ:ndər/ or /kəmændər/.
your pronunciation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as considered,excavation. you speak slowly so it can sometimes bore me. however,in general,it is good.
there are some pronunciation mistakes like situated, distinct but your intonation changes in some sentences,which is an appreciatable point. I think an authentic music would do good in your video..
I think that your intonation is very good.And using some questions make the speech well.But mosaic and conquer words are wrongly pronounced.It is generally a good video to me.
Her intonation is really effective.The pictures and her speech are in harmony with each other. Although there are some pronunciation mistakes, she speaks fluently and her presentation is good.
She pronounces some words such as 'conquer' 'mosaic'and 'local' wrongly. However, her pronuncation is very good and I liked her pronuncation. Also pictures are coherent with her speech, but her voice could have been clearer.
In my opinion,her speech was audible and while I was listening to her ı was bored a bit but the photos in the video were good.And I liked her intonation.
you have used the phrase of introduce wrongly.it is introduce stto somebody.and there is an irritating sound behind your voice.you have given a lot of information.it is good
the length of your presentation can be classified as good. ı am sure you could have done better if you had paid attention to use intonation skills more efficiently.
there cab be more interesting information about the tomb and there are some words in Turkish like Kilikyalılar. the intonation is good and I think it is not boring. there are some pronunciation mistakes
hi tuğba.U speak slowly but I think it is the nature of ur speech and ur personality.Therefore it did not bother me much.Ur intonation and pronunciation is good but of course u made some mistakes,such as excavation,forward, and considered etc.good job :) thank u
it is too hard to understand what she said. her photographs are good and explain what she says. there are some wrongly pronounced words such as; situated, distinct, excavation, local. it cannot be said a good example of an persuasive or informative speech. i feel like im in a history lesson. the final of the video is the best part of it. and her tone at the end is just ok to persuade people to go there.
ReplyDeleteHer text was a bit complicated but the intonations used by her was really good.Maybe the text might have been more comprehensible.ın addition to these,there were some mistakes in pronounciation like 'conquered,tourism'.
ReplyDeleteYou use the intonations well but this video isn't that enjoyable. You give too much detail about it and it may bore the people who watch.You pronounce excavation,tourism and forward wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour video was too long but it was effective your photos was good and your intonation too
ReplyDeleteher photos are good but she did not use intonation very well. also if she used a music in hormony with her pictures then it would be better. and the details she gave were too much. anyway ı liked it and at the end she persuaded me to go there thanks to her photes.
ReplyDeletetoo much detail bored me, a thme music would make it better, but the intonation was good again, i couldnt find any striking pronounciation mistake
ReplyDeleteI got bored a little while watching. The reason for this is that it is a bit long and I dont like historical speechs a lot :)) I couln t hear your voice clearly anyway your speech and the photos were informative. ı liked them
ReplyDeleteYou made some pronunciation mistakes such as musque,considered.However, your voice and intonation are very good.There are a bit necessary details in the speech, but overall it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteHer pronounciation is good but she mispronounced few words suc as excavation, conquered and magnificent. Although most of the photos are ok but the video bored me a little because she speaks too slow and beyond intonation.
ReplyDeleteher speech was good and she intonated the sentences well however there were unnecessary intonations in some parts.you mentioned about its history ı think it was a bit boring in some parts.but generally good
ReplyDeleteAlthough the photos are good,her speech is too slow and she did not use the intonation well so the video is a bit boring.Tourism and conquered are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteYour expression style is rather well but you are giving much details and I couldn't understand many of the vocabularies you used.The photos are wonderful but maybe in the second project you may add music to the video.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is very good. you know where to pause and where to raise your voice. especially the end part of your speech really convince me to go there. and you keep me listenin to you.
ReplyDeleteı think it would be better if the parts you mentioned was in harmony with photos. your pronunciation is not bad. there is few mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThe video is accurate and fluent. Intonation and pronouncations of the word is good except the words 'about' and 'considered'.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good informative speech but it didn’t affect me. Although she advised us to go there, I am not eager to visit there. Also there were some words wrongly pronounced like situated, local.
ReplyDeleteI coulndn't hear your voice at first but then it just turned into a fluent speech except for little mistakes. Inspite of public opinion I think if you added music no one could hear your after all voice too.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have added music to your video in the beginning..your intonation is very good and informative. Although some words are spelled wrongly, your tone and speech is fluent and a good example of accent.
ReplyDeleteThe intonations were fairly good. However, there were some words wrongly said like distinct, tourism.
ReplyDeletethe word 'introduce' was used wrongly..it should be 'introduce sth to sb'...some words like 'excavation' were pronounced wrongly..and i could not catch many words...the tomb of prophet daniel in tarsus did not attract me...
ReplyDeleteı think if you had added music to your presentation, it would be better. by this way, it could be more attractive. in addition ı couldnt catch a lot of words. ı couldnt understand what you wanted to say in some parts. but on the whole it is a good video. especially your speech and tone of voice is good.
ReplyDeleteMosque,introduce,excavation,considered and about were wrongly pronounced and her voice made me sleep in some parts of video, it is too long and slow to follow the video...
ReplyDeletethe video is not attractive. 'conquer and situated' are mispronounced but her intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteThe video is a bit boring but her intonation is good. there are some pronunciation mistakes such as conquer and distinct.
ReplyDeleteintonations are good made but there are some pronunciation mistakes for example the word commander is pronounced as /kɔmendər/ but it should be pronounced as /kəmɑ:ndər/ or /kəmændər/.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really good. On the other hand, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as mosaic and conquer.
ReplyDeleteApart from some minor pronınciation mistakes, your speech is well and fluent. your pictures are well-chosen...
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as considered,excavation. you speak slowly so it can sometimes bore me. however,in general,it is good.
ReplyDeleteI liked her pronunciation but she pronounces the word "local" wrongly and I think she has to intonate the sentences more carefully
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes like situated, distinct but your intonation changes in some sentences,which is an appreciatable point. I think an authentic music would do good in your video..
ReplyDeleteI think that your intonation is very good.And using some questions make the speech well.But mosaic and conquer words are wrongly pronounced.It is generally a good video to me.
ReplyDeletethere are too much detail in the text.its hard to understand and follow and also there are some pronunciation mistakes.however,in general,it is good.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is really good, speech is fluent and well prepared but there are some pronouncation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteFirstly; at the end of the video, I forgor what you said at the beginning. On the orher hang your speech is very good and you speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good as you paid attention to your intonation and pronunciation. but in general your presentation is good.
ReplyDeletein fact she well prepared but there are some pronounciation mistakes like conquer
ReplyDeleteHer intonation is really effective.The pictures and her speech are in harmony with each other. Although there are some pronunciation mistakes, she speaks fluently and her presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteIf there were a music it would be perfect but now I can say only it is good. The intonation made it mmore understandable.
ReplyDeleteit is audible...but ı had difficulty in understanding some words..your intonation rather good...you change your voice as the photos change very well
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes such as conquer, tourism. I liked her presentation.
ReplyDeleteI think I could have talked more slowly but I think my pronounciation is good.
ReplyDeleteShe pronounces some words such as 'conquer' 'mosaic'and 'local' wrongly. However, her pronuncation is very good and I liked her pronuncation. Also pictures are coherent with her speech, but her voice could have been clearer.
ReplyDeletethe speech is well prepared and her intonation is good too. it was interesting to listen to her.
ReplyDeleteconquer,situated are wrongly pronounced.Pictures are compatible with your speech but your voice is not clear.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and intonation is also good, magnificent was wrong and the word prevent should be pronounced as 'pri-vent'
ReplyDeletesome words are mispronounced and speech is long and some parts can't be understood but I like photos and it is good in general.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,her speech was audible and while I was listening to her ı was bored a bit but the photos in the video were good.And I liked her intonation.
ReplyDeleteI think there are too much details and this makes the listener to get bored..some words such as conquer, tourism, excavation....
ReplyDeleteyou pronunced conquer and mozaic wrongly but in general it is a well prepared video.
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ReplyDeleteI think the video is a bit long so this bores the listener.There are some mispronounced words as'mozaic and magnificient'but her intonation isn't bad.
ReplyDeleteyou have used the phrase of introduce wrongly.it is introduce stto somebody.and there is an irritating sound behind your voice.you have given a lot of information.it is good
ReplyDeletetourism is pronounciated wrongly, intonation is good but it should be better.photos are good
ReplyDeleteI liked your intonation.maybe if you didn£t use the more detail,your presentation would be very atractive.
ReplyDeleteIt was a long video which made me bored. Without so many details it would have been better.
ReplyDeletethe length of your presentation can be classified as good. ı am sure you could have done better if you had paid attention to use intonation skills more efficiently.
ReplyDeleteher intonation is good but she should have said some word more stressed.Also She makes some mistake while pronouncing conquered and tourism
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good but long. Nevertheless, I like your presentation and intonation
ReplyDeleteı liked your video and pictures. your intonation is also very good congratulatios tuğba:)
ReplyDeletethere are pronouncation mistakes such as magnificent the intonation is good, I don't know but I did'nt like it
ReplyDeletealthough some misspelled words,intonation is very well.The pictures are really impressing.
ReplyDeletethere cab be more interesting information about the tomb and there are some words in Turkish like Kilikyalılar. the intonation is good and I think it is not boring. there are some pronunciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteyou spoke as if you are speaking to someone else.ıt could become more lively
ReplyDeletehi tuğba.U speak slowly but I think it is the nature of ur speech and ur personality.Therefore it did not bother me much.Ur intonation and pronunciation is good but of course u made some mistakes,such as excavation,forward, and considered etc.good job :) thank u
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