hi victoria :) nice video.ur pronunciation is good and I like ur intonation.However focus is pronounced wrongly and while I was listening to u,I couldnot catch some words.I think it is because of the /g/ consonant which u pronounced in flag.that is all.congratulations...take care :)
Your intonation was suitable for the topic. This is a nice place to introduce. You affect us and inform a lot about the place. You mispronounce 'modern'. Well done!
you speak in accordance with your music and the music is a good choice, too. i like your video and the only mistakes i heard are "illustrate and width"
my other best friend it was perfect project. your voice is very effective in this video and your intonation is very suitable for it. ı want to thank you as you choose anıtkabir altuough you are a foreign person. there are some pronounciation mistakes but ı know you will correct them. thank you well done. to hear the name of our headmaster's name from your mouth makes me very happy.
your "th" pronunciations are very good, I'm jealous of you :):).although there are some mispronounced words, your speech is very good. intonation is good too. cong.
because of your accent, ı couldnt understand some words. your video is succesful. you chose good pictures to show us this place. there are a few pronounciation mistakes. one of them is "situated" (3.58).
hi victoria :) nice video.ur pronunciation is good and I like ur intonation.However focus is pronounced wrongly and while I was listening to u,I couldnot catch some words.I think it is because of the /g/ consonant which u pronounced in flag.that is all.congratulations...take care :)
ReplyDeleteYour intonation was suitable for the topic. This is a nice place to introduce. You affect us and inform a lot about the place. You mispronounce 'modern'. Well done!
ReplyDeletewidth is mispronounced. the rest is ok. you have some pauses I think that is because of your mother tongue but geerally it is ok.congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyou speak in accordance with your music and the music is a good choice, too. i like your video and the only mistakes i heard are "illustrate and width"
ReplyDeleteyour music, pictures and speech are all in harmony with eachother.you have minor mistakes with pronounciation.
ReplyDeletevery good video,the information you give is well chosen. ı liked the way yr telling the story. pronunciation is also good except some minor mistakes.
ReplyDeleteit is a well done video your intonation is good too but you have pronunciation errors such as modern in general it is a good video
ReplyDeletemy other best friend it was perfect project. your voice is very effective in this video and your intonation is very suitable for it. ı want to thank you as you choose anıtkabir altuough you are a foreign person. there are some pronounciation mistakes but ı know you will correct them. thank you well done. to hear the name of our headmaster's name from your mouth makes me very happy.
ReplyDeleteUr speech and the pics u've used are effective enough. The video is convincing.Almost no mistake. Good job, Viki
ReplyDeleteyour "th" pronunciations are very good, I'm jealous of you :):).although there are some mispronounced words, your speech is very good. intonation is good too. cong.
ReplyDeleteI liked your voice tone and also your intonation. It was really a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteI heard "Turkey" a bit strange. also, you could speak lively. Except these, you have a great job. cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteintonation and fluency are used very well. Well orginesed one;)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and ı couldn't catch a major pronunciation mistake.good job,cong.:)
ReplyDeleteI think width is wrongly pronunced.But your music,photos and pronunciation is very good.
ReplyDeleteYou speak fluently. I liked your video very much. That's a good one.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is effective. You really presented Anıtkabir perfectly.thnk u.
ReplyDeleteyour music is wonderful and very harmonious with your speech it is a good presentation
ReplyDeleteI thank you because of your choice of anıtkabir.your video is harmonious in terms of pronounciation, intonation, photos and music.
ReplyDeletefirstly ı can say this choice is perfect ı was very happy to see a foreign person to choose here. good intonation, music, speech and pronunciation :D
ReplyDeletebecause of your accent, ı couldnt understand some words. your video is succesful. you chose good pictures to show us this place. there are a few pronounciation mistakes. one of them is "situated" (3.58).
ReplyDeleteBetter than her former video.You could speak more fluently but the rest is ok.Great job!
ReplyDeleteIt is better than your first video I think it is good in terms of intonation
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