You give yourself away that you're reading it because there is no intonation and you give unnecessary pauses. you mispronounce 'written' because you pronounce double /t/.
the beginning and end are very sudden. it is too simple. you should have used intonation. however your photos are good. written and period are mispronounced.
your speech is reaaallly lacks of fluecny, you speak as if you are spelling the words. and the "of" is pronounced wrong, it is /ɒv/, it realy disturbs the ears, and also kilometer and war are wrongly pronounced
maybe you should have adorned it with a music.you should improve your intonation.your speech is as if you are reading,ı think you should have recorded your voice again then it would be better.'war' was pronounced wrong.
if you paid your intonation, the beggining of your video, the video would be more effective. and some mispronunced words could be heard like condition, tower ottoman.
ı am sorry but ı have to say that you have a lot of pronounciation mistakes.they are completely,entrance,ottoman, condition, destroyed, ottoman, period,color. as to your video, ı liked it. your photos are so clear that we can see this castle well.
I think you should speak more lively and you should be more careful about intonatiom.ın my opinion there are some mispronounced words as color built and condition.
apart from some mispronunciations, your speech is not so fluent.you could have spoken a bit fluently,though. may be a music can be more suitable for your video. however you are understandable. you could have been more careful about intonation.
You give yourself away that you're reading it because there is no intonation and you give unnecessary pauses. you mispronounce 'written' because you pronounce double /t/.
ReplyDeletethere are unnecessary durations,but except it is good presentation.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes but your speech is understandable.Develop your fluency in your speech::):)Best regards!!
ReplyDeletethe beginning and end are very sudden. it is too simple. you should have used intonation. however your photos are good. written and period are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI got the impression that you are reading it because you don't care about intonation, pauses and so on... Yet, I believe you will be better.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is reaaallly lacks of fluecny, you speak as if you are spelling the words. and the "of" is pronounced wrong, it is /ɒv/, it realy disturbs the ears, and also kilometer and war are wrongly pronounced
ReplyDeleteI liked your photos.If only you used much intonation.There are some pauses in your speeech.
ReplyDeletemaybe you should have adorned it with a music.you should improve your intonation.your speech is as if you are reading,ı think you should have recorded your voice again then it would be better.'war' was pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou give unnecesarry pauses and you should improve your intonation to take attention.but your photos are well organized.
ReplyDeleteyou have some unnecessary pauses ı think it could be better. but your pictures are good you have to study on intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech would be much better with more fluency and a theme music would genuinely do better. your pictures are strikingly well-organized.
ReplyDeleteyakup, you speak without fluency and intonation, you have choosen suitable photos actually. there is a harmony between your speech and video.
ReplyDeletethere is not fluency and intonation but your photographs are good
ReplyDeleteIt seems a bit monotonus speech:( you should attent to it.
ReplyDeleteyr voice is clear. tower and ottoman weresaid wrongly. you shouldnt say 'w' in tower and double 't' in ottoman. it s geneally good. thanks.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some mispronounced words, it is a good presentation. Pay attention to intonation.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are good but I think you should pay attention to the intonation
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes such as built,include,condition etc and you used almost no intonation.
ReplyDeleteif you paid your intonation, the beggining of your video, the video would be more effective. and some mispronunced words could be heard like condition, tower ottoman.
ReplyDelete'colour and war' are the words mispronounced. Be careful about intonation, the pictures are attractive...
ReplyDeleteyou must breathe sometimes when you talk :) much fulency is needed.
ReplyDeleteIf you used intonation, it could be a better video. However, pictures are well-chosen.
ReplyDeleteif only there was some intonation,I am sure it would be much more succesful job.
ReplyDeleteThere were some mispronounced words .Inspite the fact that his speech was understandable ,his intonation wasn't good nott very bad.I liked his photos.
ReplyDelete'' condition,written,completely,destroy,war,ottoman and Armenian'' were mispronounced.And there are unnecessary pauses for lack of the fluency.
ReplyDeleteı am sorry but ı have to say that you have a lot of pronounciation mistakes.they are completely,entrance,ottoman, condition, destroyed, ottoman, period,color. as to your video, ı liked it. your photos are so clear that we can see this castle well.
ReplyDeleteyou chose your photos well if you used your intonation effectively it would be better..
ReplyDeleteyou should speak slowly in order to give a good intonation and your voice is too low. but photos are good.
ReplyDeleteyour photos and your music are perfect but you should have paid attention to your intonation. in fact, it could be better.
ReplyDeleteit is not good in terms of intonation but good job.
ReplyDeleteif he paid more attention to his intonation, his presentation would be better. I liked his photos.
ReplyDeleteI think you should speak more lively and you should be more careful about intonatiom.ın my opinion there are some mispronounced words as color built and condition.
ReplyDeletephotos are really very attractive but it would be better if you had added music. but in general it is a good job . cong.
ReplyDeletedestroy and war were mispronunced and also you should be more carreful about intonation
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words. However, your photos are very nice. you should pay attention to intonation.
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronunciations, your speech is not so fluent.you could have spoken a bit fluently,though. may be a music can be more suitable for your video. however you are understandable. you could have been more careful about intonation.
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