it didnt persuade me to go there. her intonation is better in class. the video is short. the words; fantastic, place, yards, origamally, christians, development, history pronounced wrongly. ı couldnt understand some words. you must pay attention to your intonation.
you sometimes pronounce christian piligramage wrongly your voice was clear and your intonation was good but ı think you shold use music durıng your speech
it isn't completely persuasive. your intonation is generally well but at some parts you increase your voice pitch unnecessarly.your presentation is a bit short.you could do better.ı liked your music.
while listening to you ı resembled you a native person although you have pronounciation mistakes your voice is good. you said these words such as originally, meter wrongly. the speech is short but it wasn t too bad thanks
ı think the video is too short. it could be longer. and your speech is very slow. it could be more fluently. while ı was listening to you, ı was bored. you could have mentioned about it by paying attention intonation.
you spoke a little loudly and your project is short. You pronuenced some words wrongly such as development, pilgrimage. Anyway your speech was understandable.
christianity,documents,meter are the mispronounced words that drew my attention.you speak so slowly.if you had spoken fluently,it would be better ı think.anyway,it was generally good
First of all, it could be longer and she could use more photos.She could use her intonation more effectively.’fantastic,development,history’ were pronounced wrong.
she intonates her sentences well. but the wrong-pronounced words make her presentation distracting. but the music which is in the beginning and in the end adds a good atmosphere to her presentation.
you speak too loudly,which irritates us. your intonation is genuinely good, it changes depending on the nature of the sentences.. the video is a bit short..
your intonation is really good as you intonate the words correctly. maybe the video could be longer. I caught the same pronunciation mistakes I liked your video
You intonate the words correctly and intona the sentences and words very good. I really like it but there is a problem with volume. You speak loudly and it causes a problem... Thank you Yasemen.
I think writing your name, your university is not a good idea.there are mispronounced words such as development.I wish your breathing hadn't affected the video.
Speaking loudly isn't very nice especially at the beginning.Your music choice is very good.But 'square and meter' are some of the wrong pronunced words.
She speaks loudly at the beginning of the speech but then it turns into normal. Intonation is perfect.Some of the words are mispronunced like 'square' and 'meter'.
Yasemen, your voice is so high at the beginning.I think there was a problem with the recorder.Your music is so nice but in some sentences you lengthen some words unnecessarily and you pronounce 'Christianity, meter and pilgrimage' wrongly pay attention:)
Some words 'fantastic' 'development' and 'place' are pronounced wrongly. Her stress on some words is unnecessary. However, I liked her pronouncation, music and photos.
there are a lot of mispronounced words such as history, development, meter, christianity... The music is not enough to be funny. Intonation isn't good and her voice is too loud.
I am sorry to say that she spoke very loudly during the speech.and the sound under her voice made me irritate.And there were some mispronounced words such as meter, christian and accure,pilgrimage.
apart from your voice l heard a noise.. maybe this was derived from my computer, but it irritated me.. christianity,accure,pilgrimage are prounced wrongly.. apart from that there was not any problem in my opnion..
christian and christianity has been pronouncued wrongly.you should pay more intention to intonations.somebody have said you ve spoken loudly but they must have forgatten turn the volume down.you should breath more but it was good
I don't think using the high voice means intonation.İt would be better if its time was a bit longer.the pronouncations of 'accure,pilgrimage' are wrong.
your speech is good but there are some words pronounced wrongly. For instance meter and fantastic. Moreover your speech is very short but ı like your presentation
it didnt persuade me to go there. her intonation is better in class. the video is short. the words; fantastic, place, yards, origamally, christians, development, history pronounced wrongly. ı couldnt understand some words. you must pay attention to your intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is a bit short i think. not many but there is a mistake i heard, the word meter is wrongly said it should be /mi:tər/ not /metər/
ReplyDeleteyou sometimes pronounce christian piligramage wrongly your voice was clear and your intonation was good but ı think you shold use music durıng your speech
ReplyDeleteI think you exaggerate the intonations a bit at the beginning. It is a very short video. You pronounce 'development,and meter' wrong.
ReplyDeleteit isn't completely persuasive. your intonation is generally well but at some parts you increase your voice pitch unnecessarly.your presentation is a bit short.you could do better.ı liked your music.
ReplyDeleteThere is an exaggeration for intonation. Your high voice doesn't mean intonation. Sometimes, your speech is disjointed.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning her voice is too high but later it's ok. She mispronounced 38 and meter. And I think it's a short but satisfactory video.
ReplyDeletewhile listening to you ı resembled you a native person although you have pronounciation mistakes your voice is good. you said these words such as originally, meter wrongly. the speech is short but it wasn t too bad thanks
ReplyDeleteat first it is hard to understand what you are saying. there some mistakes in pronounciaion such as development,meter,
ReplyDeleteThere is a problem with your intonation. As my fried said, meter and 38 are mispronounced. And I think it is a bit short.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't get the point at first. But then you really explained it well. the word 'meter' pronounced wrongly. Intonation is effective too.
ReplyDelete"meters" (1.38) is wrong pronounced. you should speek more lively. oeverall, its ok except its being without a music and short.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,the speech wasn't natural.There was no intonation and also 'Christianity,among,meters' are pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteShe is talking very loudly like shouting it is irritating but the pronunciations of words and intonation are good and the video is persuasive.
ReplyDeleteı think the video is too short. it could be longer. and your speech is very slow. it could be more fluently. while ı was listening to you, ı was bored. you could have mentioned about it by paying attention intonation.
ReplyDeleteThe video could be a bit longer. Also the word 'meter' is pronounced wrongly. The intonation doesn't effect the listeners.
ReplyDeleteI couldn’t understand some of the words but there were pronunciation mistakes like ‘meter,development’.And she could speak lower.
ReplyDeleteyou spoke a little loudly and your project is short. You pronuenced some words wrongly such as development, pilgrimage. Anyway your speech was understandable.
ReplyDeleteshe exaggerates the intonation. 'meter' is mispronounced but the music is very nice.
ReplyDeletechristianity,documents,meter are the mispronounced words that drew my attention.you speak so slowly.if you had spoken fluently,it would be better ı think.anyway,it was generally good
ReplyDeleteyou sometimes are spaking loudly and the words documents, meter are pronounced wrongly..
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, it could be longer and she could use more photos.She could use her intonation more effectively.’fantastic,development,history’ were pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced the word vision as /vi:ʒən/ but it should be pronounced as /vɪʒən/ and I think you make word stresses in wrong places.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as'meters,square'. your voice is loud.you stres words.your photos are also nice.
ReplyDeleteshe intonates her sentences well. but the wrong-pronounced words make her presentation distracting. but the music which is in the beginning and in the end adds a good atmosphere to her presentation.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking loudly. Some words like meter. development, square are mispronunced. But the rest, music and tone is effective
ReplyDeleteyou speak too loudly,which irritates us. your intonation is genuinely good, it changes depending on the nature of the sentences.. the video is a bit short..
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really good as you intonate the words correctly. maybe the video could be longer. I caught the same pronunciation mistakes I liked your video
ReplyDeleteYou intonate the words correctly and intona the sentences and words very good. I really like it but there is a problem with volume. You speak loudly and it causes a problem... Thank you Yasemen.
ReplyDeletethis video could be a bit longer and her voice is someties loudly but her intonation is good
ReplyDeleteI think writing your name, your university is not a good idea.there are mispronounced words such as development.I wish your breathing hadn't affected the video.
ReplyDeleteSpeaking loudly isn't very nice especially at the beginning.Your music choice is very good.But 'square and meter' are some of the wrong pronunced words.
ReplyDeleteShe speaks loudly at the beginning of the speech but then it turns into normal. Intonation is perfect.Some of the words are mispronunced like 'square' and 'meter'.
ReplyDeleteYasemen, your voice is so high at the beginning.I think there was a problem with the recorder.Your music is so nice but in some sentences you lengthen some words unnecessarily and you pronounce 'Christianity, meter and pilgrimage' wrongly pay attention:)
ReplyDeletethere is no intonation. and at first it is aloud.
ReplyDeleteThe music increased the effect but you have some pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeletemeter is mispronounced....
ReplyDeleteSome words 'fantastic' 'development' and 'place' are pronounced wrongly. Her stress on some words is unnecessary. However, I liked her pronouncation, music and photos.
ReplyDeletethere are a lot of mispronounced words such as history, development, meter, christianity... The music is not enough to be funny. Intonation isn't good and her voice is too loud.
ReplyDeletethe words meter,square are wrong pronounced. generally your video is well-prepared and interesting.
ReplyDeleteat first her voice was loud.'meter,history' are some of the mispronounced words but intonation is good in the video and I liked the photos.
ReplyDeleteI am sorry to say that she spoke very loudly during the speech.and the sound under her voice made me irritate.And there were some mispronounced words such as meter, christian and accure,pilgrimage.
ReplyDeleteapart from your voice l heard a noise.. maybe this was derived from my computer, but it irritated me.. christianity,accure,pilgrimage are prounced wrongly.. apart from that there was not any problem in my opnion..
ReplyDeleteat some words you make your voice high and emphasize St. Paul too much.some words were pronounced wrongly.It could be much better.
ReplyDeletechristian and christianity has been pronouncued wrongly.you should pay more intention to intonations.somebody have said you ve spoken loudly but they must have forgatten turn the volume down.you should breath more but it was good
ReplyDeletemy voice is like that cuz of being ill then :(:(
ReplyDeletechristian/ˈkrɪs.tʃən/
ReplyDeletechristianity/krɪs.tiˈæn.ɪ.ti/
The words'meter and development' were mispronounced and she should have paid more attention to her intonation.
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounced words and the intonation must be better.
ReplyDeleteat first the voice is high but then it is good and intonation is not bad meter is mispronounced
ReplyDeleteI don't think using the high voice means intonation.İt would be better if its time was a bit longer.the pronouncations of 'accure,pilgrimage' are wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced meter wrongly. your voice was not soft enough to follow.I know you can do better my friend.. wish you success...
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention your intonation.I could not understand some words and you can use soft kind of voice.
ReplyDeleteshe mispronounced some words such as meter, place,fantastic. there was no intonation.At the beginning her voice was high and her speech wasn't fluent.
ReplyDeleteI didn't like the video.You are only shouting.I am sorry but truth is bitter.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video and pictures but please next time please use a different voice recorder yasemen congratulations;)
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good but there are some words pronounced wrongly. For instance meter and fantastic. Moreover your speech is very short but ı like your presentation
ReplyDeleteI liked it very much and the intonation is good
ReplyDeletethe video is good but voice isnot very good because of thecnical problems I think and it is short and there are pronunciation mistakes.
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