You could have used the intonations more effectively. Somewhere, you say ' caused part of the .. collapse, it should be to collapse. Yout pronunciation was good.
your music is a good choice with your topic. your intonation is good and pronounciation is also good but you could prounounce the word monumental in a better way, not wrong.
music is very effective but the voice recorder caused some probems like ı couldnt catch some wrods you said. it a little long but full of informative knowledges. well done
you pronounced the word monumental as /mɒnʊmentəl/ but it should have been pronounced as /mɒnjʊmentəl/ the rest is good. maybe you could have paid a bit more attention to intonation, only maybe :) good job. cong.
your intonation and pronounciation are very successful. ı liked your video. the music is in harmony with your voice and topic. ı couldnt catch any mispronounced words. congratulations:)
loved your music.It made me feel good in this middle of the night. your intonation and pronounciation(except ottoman) are very good.Just ı didn't like the pauses. Thanks..
You could have used the intonations more effectively. Somewhere, you say ' caused part of the .. collapse, it should be to collapse. Yout pronunciation was good.
ReplyDeletejust do not talk too close to the microphone. the rest is ok. I could not catch any mistake. good job body... good job... welldone. :)
ReplyDeletei like your speech and the music's suitability with your topic. the only mistake in your pronunciation is "monumental"
ReplyDeleteyour music is a good choice with your topic. your intonation is good and pronounciation is also good but you could prounounce the word monumental in a better way, not wrong.
ReplyDeletemusic is very effective but the voice recorder caused some probems like ı couldnt catch some wrods you said. it a little long but full of informative knowledges. well done
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced the word monumental as /mɒnʊmentəl/ but it should have been pronounced as /mɒnjʊmentəl/ the rest is good. maybe you could have paid a bit more attention to intonation, only maybe :) good job. cong.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is low due to the recorder. Your fluency is good. You prepared your project very well. good job!!!!
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciaiton is very good but you should really improve your intonation. Then, your video could be perfect. ;)
ReplyDeletethere is no clear mistakes in pronunciation however you should be more fluent ;) anyway well orginised one thnk you ;)
ReplyDeleteı liked your music,it is in harmony with your place.ı think u can improve your intonation.ı couldn't catch any significant mistake.well done:)
ReplyDeleteI sometimes couldnt hear your voice exactly.yet ı couldbt find major mistakes in terms of pronunciation.you music and photos are good.
ReplyDeleteYou have done your project well but Pay attention to intonation a bit more. ıt is good one.
ReplyDeleteYou should improve your intonation.Except this, your speech is good.
ReplyDeleteI liked the music very much. Pics and ur intonation are good,too. good job
ReplyDeleteyour voice is irritating because of sound recorder so I couldn't understand some parts of it.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are very successful. ı liked your video. the music is in harmony with your voice and topic. ı couldnt catch any mispronounced words. congratulations:)
ReplyDeleteı think you could pay attention to your intonation because the speech is a bit fast. the music and phots are good :D ı liked your video
ReplyDeleteloved your music.It made me feel good in this middle of the night. your intonation and pronounciation(except ottoman) are very good.Just ı didn't like the pauses. Thanks..
ReplyDeleteyour music is good choise and I like your pronunciation and intonation well done:)
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