ı think it is too short for our project. also the words; mention, about, hundred, kilometer, ancient, along, villagers were pronounced wrongly. the video is not fluent. also his intonation is not suitable to persuade people to go there. he can use ı advice, suggest,recommend ro persuade people at the end. it was like an historical information.
the speech is a bit slow, it could be more persuasive and faster. i heard some pronounciation mistakes: you say /ent ʃnt/ it is /eɪnt ʃənt/ (0:33), you say /lɔ:s/ it should be /luːz/(01:43)
You could have kept the video a bit longer to give us more detail because you already talk too slowly. You pronounce ' along, ancient, think, heaven, lose' really wrong.
you must pay attention to your intonation while describing a place others do not know. there are some mistakes about your pronoun ciation. and ı did not undersatnd when it finished.it is too short.it is attractive with pictures but not persuasive.
There isn't any intonation and the speech was fairly short.The sentences are like Turkish.'constructed,villager,ancient' words are pronounced wrongly.He should be more fluent.
ıt is a very short video for our project you talk slowly the photos could be better and you say ı am just mentıon that is wrong however ıt isn t bad in general
Eventhough the speech is a bit slow, I really liked it because it sounds like you are talking just like the old man in the children programms which we have studied before.
while watching the video it can be understood that you tried to pay attention using intonations effectively. the video is short. you made some mistakes in pronounciations.
If only the video was longer because the speech is persuasive and concurs with pictures. Intonation is good but there are mistakes in pronunciation like : hundred, ancient
I think it wasn’t prepared well.The photos aren’t enough for the introduction and the tone he used is so simple. There are some mistakes in pronounciation in the words like constructed,heaven.
firstly, the video could have been longer. secondly, you mispronounced some words such as mention,ancient, about and beauty. lastly, ı think you could have been successful if you had tried to do better. you used the same photographs in some parts. there are a lot of pause. there is too short speech. ı am sorry but to me, it isnt a good presentation
your video is a bit shorter than the others..you pronounce the words hundred, kilometer, ancient, along, villagers wrongley and additionally you had better speed up....
it is a short video for your presentation.you speak so slowly and there are some words pronounced wrong such beauty,ancient.you should also pay attention to intonation.ıt could be better
your pictures are really charming and it is clear that you seached your topic with details but it would be better if it was longer and I think you should speak more fluently.
As ı said before, you should have added music to your video and so, It would be more sensational.. ı could not find pronunciation mistakes except a few. Your voice and pronunciation is good.
your intonation is genuinely good, it changes in some sentences.. your video is too short (it is 02:06). you should try to be a bit more fluent not to bore us..
Timing is not good I think and your seach for this presentation is not enough. You should give more information and make use of intonation in your speech. Thank you.
If the video were a bit longer and your intonation better, I think there would be a a lot of people would like to go there. İn general it is good bur can be much beter.
His video is too short and photos are limited to give information about there. You must speak a bit faster and fluently because it made me bored. There are mispronouned words such as about, along.
In my opinion,he spoke very slowly and he made unnecessary pauses between the sentences.Altough his speech wasn't fluent ,his pronounciation was good except for some words like ancient.It would have been a bit longer and better.
its very clear, but you speak so slowly if you spoke less slowly and made the video a bit longer it would be a perfect video ı think. the words you used are very good. 'welcome' were pronounced wrongly
the video is a littke short, but it is a good choice...you have pronounced the words ancient and lose wrongly..l heard a diffrent voice..l mean you have changed ur voice a little...in generall it effective..
you talked about a nice place but if it was longer and if you had paid more attention to intonations and pronounciations it would better and nicer.it was not so bad.tahnk u for makin us aware abour botan çayı
I liked your pictures and video a lot. I think there is nothing to criticize but maybe next time you can speak more fluently good work congratulations:)
ı think it is too short for our project. also the words; mention, about, hundred, kilometer, ancient, along, villagers were pronounced wrongly. the video is not fluent. also his intonation is not suitable to persuade people to go there. he can use ı advice, suggest,recommend ro persuade people at the end. it was like an historical information.
ReplyDeletethe speech is a bit slow, it could be more persuasive and faster. i heard some pronounciation mistakes: you say /ent ʃnt/ it is /eɪnt ʃənt/ (0:33), you say /lɔ:s/ it should be /luːz/(01:43)
ReplyDeleteYou could have kept the video a bit longer to give us more detail because you already talk too slowly. You pronounce ' along, ancient, think, heaven, lose' really wrong.
ReplyDeleteespecially you pronounced anciant wrongly I think you tried to pronounced diyarbakır and mardin like an english word:)
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoken more lively as you spoke in a simple way with no intonation. I also caught the same mistakes in terms of pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteyou must pay attention to your intonation while describing a place others do not know. there are some mistakes about your pronoun ciation. and ı did not undersatnd when it finished.it is too short.it is attractive with pictures but not persuasive.
ReplyDeleteThere isn't any intonation and the speech was fairly short.The sentences are like Turkish.'constructed,villager,ancient' words are pronounced wrongly.He should be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteThat's a very short video for our project.Also, there is no intonation. Your pauses are unnecessary. You could speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteToo short,not fluent,no intonation. But there is one thing which i liked he speaks like russian people:))
ReplyDeleteıt is a very short video for our project you talk slowly the photos could be better and you say ı am just mentıon that is wrong however ıt isn t bad in general
ReplyDeleteEventhough the speech is a bit slow, I really liked it because it sounds like you are talking just like the old man in the children programms which we have studied before.
ReplyDeleteThe video is too short for our project .It wasn’t persuasive and there are some mistakes in pronounciation like wonder,heaven,ancient.
ReplyDeletewhile watching the video it can be understood that you tried to pay attention using intonations effectively. the video is short. you made some mistakes in pronounciations.
ReplyDelete(1.14) "I think" is not pronounced correctly. and the word "heaven" (1.33). and you better to speed up :)
ReplyDeleteIf only the video was longer because the speech is persuasive and concurs with pictures. Intonation is good but there are mistakes in pronunciation like : hundred, ancient
ReplyDeleteI think it wasn’t prepared well.The photos aren’t enough for the introduction and the tone he used is so simple. There are some mistakes in pronounciation in the words like constructed,heaven.
ReplyDeleteyou did not use the intonaitons fluently. there are unnecessary pauseds and some mistaken words.it is also too short for this project.
ReplyDeletefirstly, the video could have been longer. secondly, you mispronounced some words such as mention,ancient, about and beauty. lastly, ı think you could have been successful if you had tried to do better. you used the same photographs in some parts. there are a lot of pause. there is too short speech. ı am sorry but to me, it isnt a good presentation
ReplyDeletehis words are clear. The pictures are attractive, but the speech isn't fluent.
ReplyDeleteHis speech is slow also there are some pronunciation mistakes such as 'about' and 'along'.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is short. Moreover, you could speak more lively and fluently.
ReplyDeleteyour video is a bit shorter than the others..you pronounce the words hundred, kilometer, ancient, along, villagers wrongley and additionally you had better speed up....
ReplyDeleteit is a short video for your presentation.you speak so slowly and there are some words pronounced wrong such beauty,ancient.you should also pay attention to intonation.ıt could be better
ReplyDeleteyour video is short and also you speak slow so listeners can bore. it is unnecessary to stop in your speech.it could be better.
ReplyDeletethe word ancient souldn't be pronounced as /enʃənt/ it is /eɪnʃənt/. ı think in the second work you will have more time and will do better
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are really charming and it is clear that you seached your topic with details but it would be better if it was longer and I think you should speak more fluently.
ReplyDeleteAs ı said before, you should have added music to your video and so, It would be more sensational.. ı could not find pronunciation mistakes except a few. Your voice and pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is genuinely good, it changes in some sentences.. your video is too short (it is 02:06). you should try to be a bit more fluent not to bore us..
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ReplyDeleteTiming is not good I think and your seach for this presentation is not enough. You should give more information and make use of intonation in your speech. Thank you.
ReplyDeletethe video is a bit short.speech is not bad.there are some mispronounced words like beauty,ancient.etc.in general the video is not bad.
ReplyDeleteit could be a bit longer but her intonation is good her speech is clear also photos are good
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit slow.I like pictures.It is better to use persuasive sentence in the end.
ReplyDeleteIt could be a bit more fluent and I think it should have been longer but photos are very good and they are in harmony with your speech.
ReplyDeleteYour words are clear but the video is too short.Maybe you might add music and more information to your video in second project.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is good but the speech could have been a bit longer. Apart from this, he prepared well.
ReplyDeleteIf the video were a bit longer and your intonation better, I think there would be a a lot of people would like to go there. İn general it is good bur can be much beter.
ReplyDeleteYour speech can't be understood well and you have some mistakes.
ReplyDeleteabout hundred kilometer ancient are pronouced wrong..it too short to introduce a place
ReplyDeletehis presentation is too short. he speaks slowly. there are some pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHis video is too short and photos are limited to give information about there. You must speak a bit faster and fluently because it made me bored. There are mispronouned words such as about, along.
ReplyDeletePhotos are really attracting. He could pay attention to his intonation and The video is too short.
ReplyDeletethe speech is very slow and interrupted. however photos very good.
ReplyDeletephotos good but can be more and different.speech is short and intonation could be better.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,he spoke very slowly and he made unnecessary pauses between the sentences.Altough his speech wasn't fluent ,his pronounciation was good except for some words like ancient.It would have been a bit longer and better.
ReplyDeleteits very clear, but you speak so slowly if you spoke less slowly and made the video a bit longer it would be a perfect video ı think. the words you used are very good. 'welcome' were pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeletethe video is a littke short, but it is a good choice...you have pronounced the words ancient and lose wrongly..l heard a diffrent voice..l mean you have changed ur voice a little...in generall it effective..
ReplyDeleteyour prononciation wasn't good. it is very short video and there is too much gaps between sentences. ı think you could do much better.
ReplyDeleteThe video is too short and doesn't persuade the person to go there.Also,there are many unnecessary pauses.
ReplyDeleteyou talked about a nice place but if it was longer and if you had paid more attention to intonations and pronounciations it would better and nicer.it was not so bad.tahnk u for makin us aware abour botan çayı
ReplyDeleteyour speech is not fluent. The video is too short, also. You must be careful on pronounciation.
ReplyDeletethere are a lot of pauses and it is a bit short,the intonation should be better it is smooth a little
ReplyDeletethe place you presented is very charming to intrest me but I wish it would be longer to introduce us
ReplyDeleteAlthough it is a short video I think you give significant information.I like your intonation but you could speak more effectively. Thank you
ReplyDeletethere were some mispronounced words. the video was too short.
ReplyDeleteThe video is too short.There is no intonation and there are redundant halts in some points but you are speaking clearly.
ReplyDeleteI liked your pictures and video a lot. I think there is nothing to criticize but maybe next time you can speak more fluently good work congratulations:)
ReplyDeleteYour speech is short and slow but your pronounciation is not bad.
ReplyDeletethe video is short and I think the pronouncation isn'T good and you speak very slowly
ReplyDeleteit is too short and there is to much pronounciation mistake,youstop at some place too long at some place we fell as it ended
ReplyDeletethe video is good and its pictures are very good, too but it is vey short and there are pronunciation mistakes.
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