he has some pronunciation mistakes such as stand,according. besides,there are some grammar errors.however,his pictures are in harmonious with his speech.his presentation is good.
the music voice is too high. turistic, comeacross, empeire, unfortunately, stands, condition, edge, picnic area are pronounced wrongly. intonation is not well in general. there is no somany fluency in his speech. it didnt persuade me to go there.
firstly the music was so loud that ı couldnt hear you as my friends said. secondly there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes.for example, edge, stand, lenght, accordin to, restaurant, spectacular...
He pronounced some words such as 'stands out,restaurant'mistakenly.Apart from this,his photos in the video passed with his speech simultaneously.It was good.
your speech reaally lacks of effectiveness and fluency. i heard a lot of pronounciation mistakes: district, stand, examine, originally, according to, rumour, restaurant,stand, themselves
The fluency and balance in your speech are important lacks of your video. Your intonation could be better. There are some mispronunced words such as examine, restaurant.
your voice and the music are too high,and they are going together simultaneously.your speech lacks fluency.and please check your misspelled words such as rumour, condition and restaurant.
The music is higher than your voice. You also mispronuenced some words such as rumour,according to, restaurant. There were too many pauses in your speech.
the music sound isnt higher than his voice when you keep the volume down! dont judge him with it! I found some pronunciation mistakes such as stand and examine. you can give more importance to the intonations.
the music is good but it is so high.you have pronounced the word "local" wrong.intonation isn't so good. you haven't got enough photo I think you should add more different photos
''across in come across,paradise and themselves'' are the words mispronounced. And the music is higher than his voice. His correcting the words or sentences that he mispronounced is really irritating because it's too much. But ı really liked it..
Your speech lacks of intonation and fluency.There are redundant halts in the sentences and there are some mistakenly pronounced words such as area,meter,Cleopatra.Watch my video please and see how the word 'Cleopatra'pronounced :).Best regards :))
the nusic is a bit loud but l could hear your effective speech.it is very nice.you shoul pay attantion to the pronounciation of come accros.it was very nice and attractive
The voice of music is too high to focus on your speech. you must be convincing to persuade us to go there you know and fluent to draw attention to your speech. you said according to in a wrong way. Additionally, I think you should study intonation.
I liked your music. video was okay. you should pay a lil bit more attention to ur intonation and pronunciation my friend. "meter" is stirking in terms of mispronounciation. no more. thnx :)
There are some mispronounced words and your music voice is higher than your speech but your presentation and photos are very good. I will go and see there as soon as possible. Congratulations!
the music voice of his presentation is higher than his voice. area is wrongly pronounced.
ReplyDeleteThe music sound is higher than his voice. His presentation is good.
ReplyDeletethe music is higher than his voice. he pronounces the word "rumour" wrongly. his pictures are good and he explains the topic clearly.
ReplyDeletethe music is higher than his sound. the word 'restaurant' is pronounced wrong. There are some grammar mistakes,too.
ReplyDeletehe has some pronunciation mistakes such as stand,according. besides,there are some grammar errors.however,his pictures are in harmonious with his speech.his presentation is good.
ReplyDeletethe music voice is too high. turistic, comeacross, empeire, unfortunately, stands, condition, edge, picnic area are pronounced wrongly. intonation is not well in general. there is no somany fluency in his speech. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletethe pictures he used in his video is really attracting ,however ,the music on the background is higher than his voice
ReplyDeleteyou just need to put down the volume of the music. your speech is fluent enough. the place was well-chosen.
ReplyDeleteI wished to be by the pool..
firstly the music was so loud that ı couldnt hear you as my friends said. secondly there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes.for example, edge, stand, lenght, accordin to, restaurant, spectacular...
ReplyDeleteI’ve heard some mispronunciations like paradise and standing. I think he should improve his fluency.
ReplyDeletethe music should be lower. 'meter' and 'rumuors' were mispronounced but his intonation is good and video is informative
ReplyDeleteyour speech isnt fluent. also stand, condition, ordinary and tourist are mispronounced words. Please check them.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was not fluent enough and you had some pronouncation mistakes but your speech was in harmony with your photos and your photos were clear
ReplyDeleteHe pronounced some words such as 'stands out,restaurant'mistakenly.Apart from this,his photos in the video passed with his speech simultaneously.It was good.
ReplyDeletethe volume of the music is disturbing. you have some mistakes in pronounciation but in general it is not bad.
ReplyDeleteyour speech reaally lacks of effectiveness and fluency. i heard a lot of pronounciation mistakes: district, stand, examine, originally, according to, rumour, restaurant,stand, themselves
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, he should speak more confidently to persuade tourists to go there.That’s, it is not that impressive.
ReplyDeleteThe fluency and balance in your speech are important lacks of your video. Your intonation could be better. There are some mispronunced words such as examine, restaurant.
ReplyDeleteyour voice and the music are too high,and they are going together simultaneously.your speech lacks fluency.and please check your misspelled words such as rumour, condition and restaurant.
ReplyDeleteAlthough the information about the place is good and enough,there are some pronunciation mistakes like condition and paradise.
ReplyDeleteThe music in video is higher than his voice so it is difficult to hear what he says. He also hesitates in his many sentences.
ReplyDeleteThe music is higher than your voice. You also mispronuenced some words such as rumour,according to, restaurant. There were too many pauses in your speech.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good.And the music is much higher than your voice.But I like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand what he said clearly. However,some words such as rumour, according, restaurants were mispronounced.
ReplyDeletethe music sound isnt higher than his voice when you keep the volume down! dont judge him with it! I found some pronunciation mistakes such as stand and examine. you can give more importance to the intonations.
ReplyDeleteWhen you give more attention to the intonation and pronouncation, you will be better. Music is very good and it makes your video attractive.
ReplyDeletethe music is good but it is so high.you have pronounced the word "local" wrong.intonation isn't so good. you haven't got enough photo I think you should add more different photos
ReplyDelete''across in come across,paradise and themselves'' are the words mispronounced. And the music is higher than his voice. His correcting the words or sentences that he mispronounced is really irritating because it's too much. But ı really liked it..
ReplyDeleteThe music bears your voice down. There are some words that are pronunced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou wait too long between sentences
ReplyDeletemusic is a bit high but it is good also you speak fluently and your photos are wonderful
ReplyDeleteıf you adjusted your intonations and the sound of music, it would be effective. you should pay attention your pronounciation, too.
ReplyDeletethe music should be lower because your voice cannot be heard clearly.
ReplyDeletestands,meter,area,according to are the mispronunciations ı heard. I think you paused a bit long between sentences.
ReplyDeleteThe music you used on the background should have been of a low voice. Your pronounciation is good and you presented it well.
ReplyDeleteyou could have arranged the video better man.. But I liked it.marveleous is pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteYour speech lacks of intonation and fluency.There are redundant halts in the sentences and there are some mistakenly pronounced words such as area,meter,Cleopatra.Watch my video please and see how the word 'Cleopatra'pronounced :).Best regards :))
ReplyDeleteYou are speaking without intonation and due to the high pitch of music,I had difficulty in understanding many of your sentences.
ReplyDeletethe music is nice, but the volume is very high. it is hard to have ur voice in some parts.. the word rumour is mispronounced..
ReplyDeletemusic made the speech hard to be understood, intonation could be better..
ReplyDeletethe nusic is a bit loud but l could hear your effective speech.it is very nice.you shoul pay attantion to the pronounciation of come accros.it was very nice and attractive
ReplyDeleteThe voice of music is too high to focus on your speech. you must be convincing to persuade us to go there you know and fluent to draw attention to your speech. you said according to in a wrong way. Additionally, I think you should study intonation.
ReplyDeleteI liked your music. video was okay. you should pay a lil bit more attention to ur intonation and pronunciation my friend. "meter" is stirking in terms of mispronounciation. no more. thnx :)
ReplyDeleteı dıdn t like your pronounciation but the photos and the music are good you try to speak fluently ıt is good in general thanks cumali for your work
ReplyDeletethe music is too high but his pronounciation is great and he speaks naturally...
ReplyDeletethe music is higher than your voice:( meter is pronounced falsely but intonation is not bad
ReplyDeletethe intonation should be improved and the music is higher than his voice.I think ,there are some pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is very good I liked your video but you neeed to put down the volume of the music well done;)
ReplyDeleterumour and restourant was mispronounced.and you must speak fluent.but pictures are well chosed. sound was good also
ReplyDeletethe music voice of yr presentation is higher than yr voice. you should pay attention yr intonation
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounced words and your music voice is higher than your speech but your presentation and photos are very good. I will go and see there as soon as possible. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some pronounciation mistakes,I like your pictures and speech but you cam improve your intonation.Thanks
ReplyDeleteI think the music is higher than his voice and there are some grammar mistakes
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