first of all,there is no musıc. ıf she uses it,it could be better. she has some pronunciation mistakes such as exhibition,international and also'capable'.at the end of the presentation,she wrote site's name that she took photos,I liked it.besides,her pictures were very nice.
her voice is so horse. ı couldnt understand so many words. intonation is good but speech isnt fluent. it didnt persuade me to go there. there are so many pronounciation mistakes.
Although the video is a bit short, the information it gives is good and enough.Her fluency in the speech and the photos she used make the video worth watching.
you speak fluently.. you introduce the place in detail and in a clear way.... there are some slight pronunciation mistakes but as whole your speech is well...
your voice is fluent enough and your intonation sounds better than avarage but the video needs music.. the word contribute is pronounced incorrectly. it should be [k?n'trıbju:t]... it was a good one, actually...
firstly, your intonation and pronunciation are great. only a few words are mispronuounced. for example cafeteria, ceremony. and if you had added a music in your video, it would have been great:)
Her presentation was good.With her sincere speech and beautiful photos, she influenced me in a positive way.The only matter striking me is that she used a sentence 'it is capable of sitting .... people' I thing it is wrong in terms of meaning.
your intonation and presetation is really good.but if only you used music with your attracting photos.you have minor mistakes such as mispronounciation of international.at some parts ı couldn't understand you because of the hoarse sound.generally it is good.
your video is very attractive and funny.Your speaking is fluent.But there is a few pronunciation mistakes.In spite of this,It is one of the enjoyable videos.
I liked your video only you speak very fast and I think your video is a bit short.cafeteria and capale are mispronounced and somewhere you paused unnecessarily.
your voice pitch is good.maybe you can add music to the second video.Fluency is good and there aren't many mistakes that attracts attention in pronounciation.
you speak fluently and ı liked the video. your pronunciation is okay. cong. btw, as kübra said, ı suppose that it will be more attractive next time if you add some music :)
photos are professionally chosen, I think because they are great and the video is well-organized.unfortunately, it is too short you could add music. concert, statues,international,event are some words pronounced wrongly.
the speech is clear and fluent , the photos are also clear .you are paying attention to intonation.there are only a few pronounce mistakes. I think, one of the misatkes is saloon.(I may hear it wrong, you had better control it.)
Her presentation and intonation is good but she says the word 'capable' mistakenly.
ReplyDeleteher presentation is short. municipality is wrongly pronounced.
ReplyDeletefirst of all,there is no musıc. ıf she uses it,it could be better. she has some pronunciation mistakes such as exhibition,international and also'capable'.at the end of the presentation,she wrote site's name that she took photos,I liked it.besides,her pictures were very nice.
ReplyDeleteIt is too short but she presents it very well and her both pronunciation and her voice pitch is good. her pictures are good too.
ReplyDeletethe video is too short for the project, but she speaks in a way related to her video. her speech is good generally, she used intonation in her speech.
ReplyDeleteher voice is so horse. ı couldnt understand so many words. intonation is good but speech isnt fluent. it didnt persuade me to go there. there are so many pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteAlthough the video is a bit short, the information it gives is good and enough.Her fluency in the speech and the photos she used make the video worth watching.
ReplyDeleteShe has some pronunciation mistakes but they don't draw much attention and are not disturbing so I liked it.
ReplyDeletethe video is generally good however ,it was a bit short.she paid attention to intonation and pronounciation.it was good
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently.. you introduce the place in detail and in a clear way.... there are some slight pronunciation mistakes but as whole
ReplyDeleteyour speech is well...
your voice is fluent enough and your intonation sounds better than avarage but the video needs music.. the word contribute
ReplyDeleteis pronounced incorrectly. it should be [k?n'trıbju:t]... it was a good one, actually...
firstly, your intonation and pronunciation are great. only a few words are mispronuounced. for example cafeteria, ceremony. and if you had added a music in your video, it would have been great:)
ReplyDeleteshe said ' it locates..' but it should be 'it is located..' I could not understand some parts because of the bad recording but intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteyour video was a bit short and your speech was a bit fast but your pronouncation and your intonation were good
ReplyDeleteHer presentation was good.With her sincere speech and beautiful photos, she influenced me in a positive way.The only matter striking me is that she used a sentence 'it is capable of sitting .... people' I thing it is wrong in terms of meaning.
ReplyDeletei couldnt hear a wrong pronounciation i liked the speech but it is a bit short and can sound better with a music.
ReplyDeleteit is a good choice but it could have been prepared better. it seems simple.
ReplyDeletewith pictures speech is informative. I didnt catch mispronounced words. I think presentation attract listeners.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent but you could speak a bit slow. There are some trivial pronunciation mistakes so it isn't important. Good job. Well done. =)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and presetation is really good.but if only you used music with your attracting photos.you have minor mistakes such as mispronounciation of international.at some parts ı couldn't understand you because of the hoarse sound.generally it is good.
ReplyDeleteI liked the video because she is fluent and doesn’t make important pronunciation mistakes but it could be a little longer.
ReplyDeleteHer voice could have been clearer but her stress on sentences is good and I enjoyed her pronunciation. Her presentation is very short.
ReplyDeleteYou use the intonations well and I liked the video, it isnt boring. You pronounce the words 'international and garage' wrong.
ReplyDeleteYou speak fluently. Also your intonation and pronunciation is good. But your presentation is a bit short.
ReplyDeleteyour video is very attractive and funny.Your speaking is fluent.But there is a few pronunciation mistakes.In spite of this,It is one of the enjoyable videos.
ReplyDeleteher video was very good but she spoke very fast. Also there were some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video only you speak very fast and I think your video is a bit short.cafeteria and capale are mispronounced and somewhere you paused unnecessarily.
ReplyDeleteOnly a few words are mistakenly pronounced such as capable and cafeteria.Your speech is fluent but a bit fast.You are well prepared.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very very clear and understandable. Photos are organized well but you speak a bit fast.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation affected me.your frequency was succesful apart from few the wrong pronuncation.I enjoyed it very much.:)
ReplyDeleteDespite some mispronunced words, you speak fluently. You also use intonation effectively.The photos are attractive.
ReplyDeletegenerally good but it is very short
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but you speak fluently and your photos are wonderful
ReplyDeleteAlthough she speaks a bit fast,ı liked it.
ReplyDelete'' event '' is mispronounced..
in general it is good job but please pay attention to present and great
ReplyDeleteinternational is mispronunced. As a whole it is an effective informative video. you had better have music.
ReplyDeleteYou speak well and the pronounciation is good. I advise you to use another voice recorder next time which can make your voice better to be heard.
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is good.maybe you can add music to the second video.Fluency is good and there aren't many mistakes that attracts attention in pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and ı liked the video. your pronunciation is okay. cong. btw, as kübra said, ı suppose that it will be more attractive next time if you add some music :)
ReplyDeletephotos are professionally chosen, I think because they are great and the video is well-organized.unfortunately, it is too short you could add music. concert, statues,international,event are some words pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeletecapable of was mispronounced.u presented it very nicely but to be frank it did not attract me.
ReplyDeletecapable is a very clear mistake :)) but you pay attention to the intonation and pronounciation. the photos are nice you speak fluently well done
ReplyDeleteher speech is clear, fluent. there is no problem with intonation. it is a nice video...
ReplyDeleteexcept for capable,I did not catch mispronuonciation, even though the speech is fast, intonation is not bad
ReplyDeleteI think she speaks fastly.There are some words as 'cabable,carefully and exbition.'that are pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteexhibition and capable are pronounced wrongly.except them the video was great
ReplyDeletecontribution and international are pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeletethe speech is clear and fluent , the photos are also clear .you are paying attention to intonation.there are only a few pronounce mistakes. I think, one of the misatkes is saloon.(I may hear it wrong, you had better control it.)
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear and your photos are very good and your intonations are perfect.Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is very successful and the photos are really impresive.THANKS
ReplyDeleteyour prononcation is very good , the music is suitable with your soeech
ReplyDeleteAlhould the time seems to be very short, it is enough to you to present the place. I think it is a very good presentation. Thank you Dilek!
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