there are some wrongly pronounced words suc as; castle, aware, empiere, captured, oqupied. his intonaton was bad. it didnt persuade me to go there. however, the pictures which he used are explain the topic well. if he started with atractive questions and finised his spech with a good slogan, it can persuade me to go there.
in fact you give us a lot of informations about mamure castle but while you are talking, you are so slow. you are saying words one by one. as to pronunciation mistakes, they are originally, interior.. despite of these negativeness, your pictures which were used in the video are very attractive. ı liked this video.
your presentation is a bit short but the content and photos are well organized and is attractive.There are some words which are mistakenly pronounced.It might be better if you spoke more fluently my dear friend.Best regards :)
ı undersatand what you are saying conpletely thanks to your clear speech.but you should add intonation to make your video persuasive and attractive.the words castle,captured are misspelled.generally the video is well organized.
your voice is really clear and undertandable. your voice pitch is ideal I think the only disadvantage of your presentation is that it is short. your pictures are charming
You give some unimportant pauses but except for that everything was clear. You pronounce interior wrong. But this video was efficient and persuaded me.
it is a bit short presentation. there are some pronounciation mistakes. I liked his presentation. his voice is audible. the pictures of his presentation is good.
You are a bit slow:( but you are speaking in a clear way.. next time if you have music at the beginning or end of your video, it will draw attention of listeners much more.
photos are excellent but you should talk a bit faster. talking sentence by sentence isnot a good choice to persuade someone to go there, you must be fluent to draw attention. byzantine is spelled wrongly it should be said /bɪzəntin/.Why didn't you add music while giving information?
His voice is clear and understandable.The photos are really nice and draws one's attention immediately.Except for one or two wrong misspellings such as 'occupy'the pronounciation is good.
byzantine and occupied are mispronounced,the speech is very slow so it is not fluent but clear to be understood, ıntonation is not bad, photos are great;)
you speak very slowly.you should stress the words. ı could understand all the parts your voice is clear and understanble. surround /səˈraʊnd/ and interior/ɪnˈtɪə.ri.ər/ were pronounced wrongly
I think your speech should be a bit more attractive. Your voice and pronunciation is very good and I understtod nearly every word. I like it. Thank you Ahmet.
there are some wrongly pronounced words suc as; castle, aware, empiere, captured, oqupied. his intonaton was bad. it didnt persuade me to go there. however, the pictures which he used are explain the topic well. if he started with atractive questions and finised his spech with a good slogan, it can persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletethe paused are unneccessary and Byzantine, occupied, captured and good are some of the misatken words but the information is effective.
ReplyDeletethe speech is very clear and understandable there are only small mistakes in intonation and pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteintonation isnt used and that makes it boring.
ReplyDeleteHis speech is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes. In general it is a good one.
ReplyDeleteyour speaking is very understandable I caught every word you said ... ıt is one of the the most clear speeches in this blog for me:))
ReplyDeletein fact you give us a lot of informations about mamure castle but while you are talking, you are so slow. you are saying words one by one. as to pronunciation mistakes, they are originally, interior.. despite of these negativeness, your pictures which were used in the video are very attractive. ı liked this video.
ReplyDeletevideo was a bit short castel was pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteThe video quality is very good and I liked the pics and your pronunciation generally but it would be more effective if you had used music.
ReplyDeleteI caught the same mispronounced words in your video as other friends did, but your speeck is good generally as I could get what you said.
ReplyDeleteI think he didn't pronunce castle, capture and empire wrongly. I liked his pictures and video.
ReplyDeletespeech is clear and informative.some words mispronounced but in general it is understantable and pictures attractive.
ReplyDeleteIt was one of the clearest records,so I appreciated it. There are some unnecessary durations in the speech,but it is good in general.cong.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is a bit short but the content and photos are well organized and is attractive.There are some words which are mistakenly pronounced.It might be better if you spoke more fluently my dear friend.Best regards :)
ReplyDeleteIn general, this is one of the best videos. I didn't see any pronunciation mistkake. Just, you should have spoken a bit fast. Conrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteı undersatand what you are saying conpletely thanks to your clear speech.but you should add intonation to make your video persuasive and attractive.the words castle,captured are misspelled.generally the video is well organized.
ReplyDeletealthough your video was a bit short ,in general it was understandable.you could have spoken a bit faster.it was good in general
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ReplyDeleteyou should have used a more hectic voice ahmet, it is a bit boring, and some of the mistakes i heard are: byzantine,ancient and good (2:28)
ReplyDeletethe video is short for our project. you speak slowly and have some garmatical and pronounciation mistakes the photos are good anyway
ReplyDeleteIf only you spoke a little swiftly.Apart from this,it is a very good video.Your intonation and pronunciation in harmony.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is really clear and undertandable. your voice pitch is ideal I think the only disadvantage of your presentation is that it is short. your pictures are charming
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,the video is a bit short, you could make it longer. Apart from a few mispronounced words,it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteyou could speak faster. ıt can sometimes bore listener.nevertheless,you speak fluently.I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThe record is so clear that ı can hear his breath:)(that's very good)''ottoman and opposite'' aren't pronounced well. Really good!
ReplyDeleteyou have a mistake in the first sentenceAnamur turkey )a preposition isn2t there.you have chosen good photos.it is fluent and the words are clear.
ReplyDeleteYou did not use intonation and there were unnecessary pauses. Also the video was short.
ReplyDeleteIt is very clear, i like it. There are some unnecessary durations in the speech,but it is good in general.
ReplyDeleteI can follow sentences one by one due to his clear speech.I liked the record and informations in this video.it was very successful.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very clear and very understandable. record is quality. also photos makes the video very nice.
ReplyDeleteYou give some unimportant pauses but except for that everything was clear. You pronounce interior wrong. But this video was efficient and persuaded me.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is clear and fluent. Intonation is ok. I like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteexcept for some pronounciation mistakes your intonation is good and you speak fluently so it is a well prepared presentation
ReplyDeleteyou should say the word "occupy" as /ɒkjʊpaɪ/, and I think you can use intonation more efeectively
ReplyDeletesome words 'aware' 'captured' 'castle' are pronounced wrongly.Apart from this, his speech is clear enough. I liked the photos and the information.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very clear and understandable. I like your presentation but only you should check opposite again.
ReplyDeleteDİLEK AND ALİ BATUHAN IT IS NOT 'AWARE', IT IS 'AWAY FROM'!!!!!!!! LISTEN AGAIN. HAVE YOU A DICTIONARY???????????????
ReplyDeleteit is a bit short presentation. there are some pronounciation mistakes. I liked his presentation. his voice is audible. the pictures of his presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteThe words kilometer and Roman were pronounced wrong. It is not hard to understand your words as you spoke clearly.
ReplyDeleteThere are some wrong pronounciations such as kilometer and Asia. Your voice is so clear and it is easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteYou are a bit slow:( but you are speaking in a clear way.. next time if you have music at the beginning or end of your video, it will draw attention of listeners much more.
ReplyDeleteDEEPSTROKE, ASIA {'eıʒə}
ReplyDeleteyou have already learned this from me!!!!!!!
you speak clearly and fluently. apart from slight mistakes in pronounciations, your speech is lively... I think this is a good one...
ReplyDeleteword by word sentence by sentence it is clear.. I liked it very much..cong.
ReplyDeletebyzantine and occupied tare the words which are mispronounced..the speech was fluent, so i think it was good..
ReplyDeleteApart from some pronounciation mistakes, his speech was very clear and fluent.I think ıt was a good video.
ReplyDeleteat the beginning castle was mispronouncued.the same tone of your speech bored me.it was short and the same tone was irritating
ReplyDeleteYou are making unnecessary pauses and speaking a bit slowly but your voice pitch is good,so are photos.
ReplyDeletewhat you need is to be more fluent.. your speech is clear I understood every word.. it is a good one..
ReplyDeletephotos are excellent but you should talk a bit faster. talking sentence by sentence isnot a good choice to persuade someone to go there, you must be fluent to draw attention. byzantine is spelled wrongly it should be said /bɪzəntin/.Why didn't you add music while giving information?
ReplyDeleteHis voice is clear and understandable.The photos are really nice and draws one's attention immediately.Except for one or two wrong misspellings such as 'occupy'the pronounciation is good.
ReplyDeletebyzantine and occupied are mispronounced,the speech is very slow so it is not fluent but clear to be understood, ıntonation is not bad, photos are great;)
ReplyDeleteApart from some pronouncition mistakes, I think you gave details in a good way.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly.you should stress the words. ı could understand all the parts your voice is clear and understanble. surround /səˈraʊnd/ and interior/ɪnˈtɪə.ri.ər/ were pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteI like your photos and speech but there are some mispronounced words.
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I think your speech should be a bit more attractive. Your voice and pronunciation is very good and I understtod nearly every word. I like it. Thank you Ahmet.
ReplyDeletedespite to the some mispronuonced words,like castle, aware...etc.,his voice is clear,on the whole I liked the way he presents.
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